Prompt: Analyze the following verse: In the South, a visit to Uncle Ho's tomb... Yet, it feels like a stab in the heart.
Part 1: Outline for analyzing the following verse: In the South, a visit to Uncle Ho's tomb... Yet, it feels like a stab in the heart
Part 2: Sample essay Analyzing the following verse: In the South, a visit to Uncle Ho's tomb... Yet, it feels like a stab in the heart
Sample Work:
Nearly 50 years have passed since Beloved Uncle departed from the Vietnamese people to the eternal realm. That painful event has left deep sorrow in the hearts of every child, every Vietnamese person, an immense regret. This pain has been incorporated into the poetry and literature of many writers, becoming outstanding works that leave a mark in the hearts of readers across generations. Like To Huu's poem 'Dear Uncle,' Viễn Phương - a Vietnamese child - also has the poem Visiting Uncle's tomb, evoking many emotions in the reader's heart. Every time I read Visiting Uncle's tomb, I often read it over and over again, because the images of Uncle are so beautiful and sacred.
'In the Southern land, visiting Uncle Ho's mausoleum
Amidst the mist, rows of bamboo shine
Oh! The green bamboo of Vietnam
Stand straight amidst storms and rain.'
Viễn Phương identifies himself as a 'child,' a term as intimate as beloved family members, expressing warmth and affection towards Uncle. From afar, the author sees dimly through the thick morning mist, a 'line of bamboo shining,' oh such a familiar and rustic image! Bamboo has been a companion to the Vietnamese people for generations, a village always adorned with lush green bamboo, seemingly to guard and guide the villagers home. Bamboo enthusiastically participated in the fight during our people's resistance, then bamboo did various other things, bamboo built houses, bamboo made household items,... Bamboo is everywhere. 'Oh, the green bamboo of Vietnam,' perhaps bamboo has become a symbol of Vietnam, those green bamboo shoots brimming with vitality, resilient, enduring like the Vietnamese people themselves. Despite 'storms and rain,' enduring all hardships, all invaders, our Vietnamese people remain resilient in battle, still united tightly like those bamboo rows, no force can defeat them. Those bamboo rows in front of Uncle's mausoleum, like Vietnamese children, spreading their arms wide, guarding Uncle's peaceful sleep.
'Every day the sun passes over the mausoleum
Seeing a red sun inside the mausoleum
Every day people walk in remembrance
Creating a bouquet of flowers offering seventy-nine springs...'
The image of 'Every day the sun passes over the mausoleum' juxtaposed with the metaphorical image 'There's a red sun inside the mausoleum.' It's Viễn Phương's heart towards Uncle, Uncle equals the sun, even compared to the sun outside the universe, Uncle's sun is even redder, brighter. This demonstrates Uncle's greatness on par with the vast universe out there. The image of 'Every day people walk in remembrance,' conveying both the literal truth about the visitors and the sentiment of Vietnamese people, like that line of people, it stretches 'every day' and never breaks. It's a thread of precious and sacred emotions. Those precious feelings, like beautiful flowers, form a bouquet, offering it up to the beloved father with the utmost reverence, for He sacrificed all 79 years of his youth for the Motherland, for the people. He held nothing for Himself, in His Last Will, He only worried about the country, about the people. His ultimate wish before leaving made everyone shed tears, He wanted to bring a little homeland affection to the eternal realm with Nghệ-Tĩnh folk songs, with the sweet melodies of Quan họ Bắc Ninh. It's so painful!
'Uncle lies in peaceful slumber
Amidst a gentle, shining moonbeam
Forever knowing the blue sky is eternal
Yet, it feels like a stab in the heart.'
Viễn Phương holds back the pain, gazing at Uncle with utmost admiration and affection, sometimes feeling it's a gaze full of both reverence and pity. Uncle lies under a thick, transparent layer of glass, shining brightly. Seeing Uncle looking so fresh, it's as if He's just sleeping a long sleep, head resting on a pillow, hands clasped together in front of His stomach, looking so 'peaceful' strangely. Naturally, there can't be any moonbeams inside the mausoleum, but under the yellow light, it seems like a faint moonlight is covering the body of the beloved leader. It's Viễn Phương's reverence for Uncle, Uncle holds such great stature, so great and noble that when He enters eternal sleep, it's as if the moon is cradling Him for a peaceful and eternal sleep. The image of 'a gentle, shining moonbeam' is truly beautiful, filled with the respect and love of the Southern child for the beloved Father of the nation. The verse 'Forever knowing the blue sky is eternal' evokes many emotions in the author's heart, 'the blue sky' not only means the vast sky outside the universe, but also refers to the great leader of the Vietnamese nation, Ho Chi Minh. In the hearts of Viễn Phương and millions of Vietnamese people, Uncle is like the sky, eternal with time, still reigning in the hearts of the people, the heart of the Fatherland.
Uncle possesses a great vitality, it's the vitality of noble spiritual values, wonderful lifestyles along with enormous contributions to the Vietnamese revolutionary cause throughout His life. Those are great sacrifices, undeniable by anyone, Uncle is like a father who gave birth to democratic republic Vietnam, providing the people with food, clothing, freedom, and true happiness. Although steadfast in the belief that Uncle lives forever in the hearts of the Vietnamese people, perpetually reigning with the universe, Viễn Phương still can't suppress the pain in His heart for the truth that Uncle has forever entered eternal sleep, from now on, no longer can He hear Uncle talk, see Uncle smile, see Uncle work as before. Uncle forever stops at the age of 79, how cruel time is, taking away from the Vietnamese people the great elderly father, it's a pain forever in the heart. The verse 'Yet, it feels like a stab in the heart,' makes people shed tears and feel as if their hearts are being pricked by a needle, painful, deeply painful. The pain of a child from the distant South visiting Uncle, only to see Uncle deep in eternal sleep, is a profound and poignant sorrow. It's a pain that can never be erased in the hearts of every Vietnamese person.
Perhaps there's no loss as great as Uncle's departure. Tố Hữu wrote this on the day Uncle left: 'For several days, pain accompanies the send-off/Drops of tears flow, the sky pours rain.' To see that Uncle's departure to the eternal realm is a great loss and pain for the nation. But even so, Uncle's moral values, ideologies, and lifestyle still exist with time, serving as a shining example for many generations of youths to follow. Especially, the image of Uncle will forever be deeply imprinted in the hearts of Vietnamese children.
