1. Outline Example 1
2. Outline Example 2
3. Outline Example 3
4. Sample Essay
Prompt: Describing the Beach Outline
3 Sample Beach Description Outlines
I. Beach Description Outline
1. Introduction:
Introducing the scene of Phu Quoc beach
- When did you visit Phu Quoc beach?
- Briefly introduce the Phu Quoc beach scene.
Example:
- Last semester, I achieved high grades in my studies, so my parents took me on a trip to various places. I visited many places, but the most impressive scenery was the beach in Phu Quoc. This place left me with deep impressions and emotions.
2. Body:
a. Describing the Overview of Phu Quoc Beach:
- Phu Quoc beach stretches endlessly, as my parents described it to be very vast.
- The sea is mysteriously and beautifully blue.
- The sandy shores stretch along the coastline.
- The straight rows of coconut trees run along very straight.
- The winds blow as if conducting a symphony.
b. Describing Specific Details of Phu Quoc Beach
* Morning Scene at Phu Quoc Beach:
- The morning at Phu Quoc is very beautiful.
- The sun gradually rises behind the coconut trees with a gentle red egg yolk color.
- Far away, there are fishing boats bobbing along with the waves.
- The sandy shore stretches long with a hint of mist.
- The gentle breeze whispers softly.
- The sun is intense but the sea still appears blue without any heat.
- The waves still lap the shore as usual.
- Coconut rows provide shade for the long beach.
- The wind still blows, bringing coolness.
* Evening Scene at Phu Quoc Beach
- The sun gradually sets, the sun is no longer intense.
- Many people take walks and exercise.
- The sparkling lights offshore begin to appear.
- The atmosphere is gentle, the breeze is pleasantly cool.
- The waning moon takes over from the sun.
3. Conclusion:
Express your thoughts on the scenery of Phu Quoc Beach
Example: - Despite spending only a few days in Phu Quoc during the summer, I still feel the beauty of the sea and the lovely people of this island. I will have the opportunity to return here again.
II. Outline for Describing the Beach, Sample 2:
1. Introduction
- Introduce some aspects of the beach you plan to describe
+ What is the name of this beach? Where is it located?
+ When did you have the opportunity to visit and observe here?
Example:
'Golden forest, silver sea' The sea is a resource that creates wealth, bringing high-value benefits to people. My parents want me to have a deep understanding of the sea, so last summer I traveled to Nha Trang beach. Through the trip, I had unforgettable emotions and impressions about this place.
2. Body
a. Describing the beach scene
Describe the beach scene in sequence from afar to near:
- The sky: clear blue, with scattered white clouds drifting across the sky; some clouds intermingling to create unique and amusing shapes.
- The sun: glowing red, perfectly round like a ball forgotten to be taken down.
- The water surface: crystal clear sea, visible to the bottom with colorful rocks.
- Sea waves: each wave crashes white, erasing a whole area of the sea, crashing loudly against the boats 'resting' on the shore.
- Shimmering golden sand stretches as far as the eye can see, enveloping this beautiful sea area.
b. Human activities
- Far offshore, many boats return to land after a long day of fishing. When they dock, their faces show clear joy instead of exhaustion after long nights at sea because the boat holds a bountiful harvest of various fish, crabs, and countless other seafood.
- As the sun rises higher than the mountain peaks, people flock to the beach for leisure activities after a long night's rest. With activities that make the beach more lively such as strolling, playing in the sand (building sand castles, covering oneself in sand), swimming, or shopping right on the beach to buy freshly caught seafood from far-off fishing trips.
- The beach scene becomes more bustling and lively than when the sea is engulfed in the night.
- The landscape comes alive, full of new vitality after a long night's rest.
- Some people enjoy seafood prepared by restaurants right on the beach. A truly delightful feeling!
3. Conclusion
- Provide comments on the beach
- Express personal feelings, thoughts about the beach area...
Example:
The sea is like the most vibrant painting that I have ever beheld. Just a few short days admiring the sea makes me want to stay here forever. I hope that in the next summer vacations, my parents will take me back to Nha Trang beach to explore and fully enjoy all the wonderful beauty here.
III. Outline for Describing the Beach, Sample 3:
I. Introduction:
Introducing the scene of Nha Trang beach:
- Reasons for writing about Nha Trang beach
- Introducing the time, moment intended to write about Nha Trang beach
Example:
- Last summer, my family and I went on a vacation to Nha Trang city. This city is incredibly beautiful with many stunning scenes and extremely hospitable people. One of the most beautiful scenes in Nha Trang that I love the most is the Nha Trang beach.
2. Body:
a. Describing the Overview of Nha Trang Beach
- Nha Trang beach stretches for kilometers
- The sea is deep blue, very beautiful
- Nha Trang beach is very spacious
- Many people
- Coconut trees line the shore
b. Describing Specific Details of Nha Trang Beach
* Nha Trang Beach in the Morning
- In the morning, there is still mist over the sea, creating a mystical atmosphere
- The waves are gentle and lapping softly, not noisy
- Some people gather on the beach to exercise and play around
- The long stretches of golden sand still feel cool from the dew
* Nha Trang Beach at Noon
- The sun spreads its warmth over the sea and the sand
- People sunbathe scattered across the sand
- Foreigners particularly enjoy sunbathing on the beach
- Coconut trees sway in the sea breeze
- The sea breeze blows gently
- The waves are neither strong nor too gentle
- In the distance, some people are swimming in the sea
* Nha Trang Beach in the Evening
- The sun sets, and electric lights appear
- The sea becomes incredibly calm
- In the distance, fishing boats twinkle with lights
- Locals stroll along the beach and enjoy the cool breeze
- The sand still retains warmth from the sun
3. Conclusion:
Expressing thoughts about Nha Trang Beach
For example:
- I really adore Nha Trang Beach. It was a trip filled with unforgettable beauty and fond memories. I will definitely come back here one day.
IV. Sample Essay Describing the Beach Scene
Every summer vacation, my family goes on a trip. Some years, it's the breathtaking misty mountains of Sa Pa with their jagged peaks and vibrant pink peach blossoms... Other years, it's the tranquil and ancient streets of Hoi An that soothe the soul. But last year, my family visited our ancestral homeland, where there stretches a vast expanse of turquoise sea and pristine white sands that left me utterly enchanted.
Refer to the details of the Essay Composition: Describing a Scene, Week 4, Grade 5 section for a good preparation for the Essay Composition: Describing a Scene - Week 4.