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Crafting a Vietnamese Language Exercise: Errors in Coherence and Linking within the Paragraph, Text: Signs of Recognition and Correction Methods, Literature Grade 10 - KNTT
Crafting a Vietnamese Language Exercise: Errors in Coherence and Linking within the Paragraph, Text: Signs of Recognition and Correction Methods, Literature Grade 10 - KNTT, shortest version
1. Provide a general overview of coherence and cohesion in the text 'Genius is the vital air of a nation'
Answer:
- Coherence in the text is clearly demonstrated through the dominance of the thesis over the content of all paragraphs and sentences in the article.
- Cohesion is easily identifiable through the effective use of conjunctions, substitutions, and repetitions.
2. Read the following passages and answer the questions:
Passage 1
'In other words, humans are inherently artistic, inherently empathetic. It's only due to societal pressures as one grows up that this compassionate heart may get obstructed or worn down. Only the intelligent ones remain unyielding, even when externally subjected to various pressures, preserving that precious empathy. These individuals are the true artists.'
(Phong Tu Khai, 'Love and Empathy')
a. Why is it considered a paragraph?
b. Highlight the coherence between sentences in the passage.
c. What indicators show the connection between this passage and the preceding one in the text 'Love and Empathy'?
d. In the passage, which words are repeated several times? What is the purpose of using such language?
Passage 2
Our country highly values genius. A genius possesses exceptional abilities compared to an ordinary person and can accomplish great things. Geniuses have always existed in every era of history. The names of these geniuses and their accomplishments are always remembered by the people.
a. Why was repetition used in consecutive sentences, yet the passage still feels disjointed?
b. How did the passage violate coherence?
Passage 3
Instead of holding a book to read, many people nowadays only know how to eagerly grasp a smartphone. Quite a few individuals have a vague awareness of the benefits of books in nurturing the soul, unleashing imagination, and honing critical thinking. However, they almost entirely abandon the habit of reading books. While it is very convenient in meeting various needs of modern life, it does little to help us find tranquility and depth in the soul.
a. What prominent indicators help us recognize the coherence issue in the passage?
