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In the previous 6th-grade essay writing session, students explored sentences lacking subjects and predicates. Now, in the continuation of correcting subject and predicate errors, page 141 of Language Arts 6 Volume 2, we delve into understanding some other fundamental errors regarding subjects and predicates. Let's refer to the following article to supplement any missing knowledge in our compositions for better completion.
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Essay Crafting: Fixing Subject and Predicate Errors (Continued), Short 1
I. Sentences lacking both subject and predicate
a.
- Sentence lacking both subject and predicate
- Correction: Every time crossing Long Bien Bridge, everyone is impressed by its unique and ancient historical architecture.
b.
- Sentence lacking subject, predicate
- Correction: With her creative mind and hardworking hands, in just six months, Hoa passed the city-level English exam.
II. Incorrect sentences regarding the relationships between sentence elements
Sentence 1:
The bold part in the passage discusses the character of uncle Huong Thu.
Sentence 2:
- The above sentence is incorrect in meaning. The position of the bold sentence can cause misunderstanding about the action describing Huong Thu.
- Correction: We see uncle Huong Thu, with tightly clenched jaws, protruding lips, fiery eyes glaring on the spear....
III. Practice
Sentence 1:
a. In 1945, the bridge /was renamed Long Bien Bridge.
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Every time I gaze up at the azure sky of Hanoi, my heart /recalls the
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the fierce and majestic years of resisting the American imperialists
c. I /feel the bridge swaying like a hammock, yet still resilient
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firm
Sentence 2:
a. Every time school ends, we rush out to the gate
b. Beyond the rice fields, ripe golden grains
c. Amidst the ripe rice fields, a sparrow chirps loudly
d. As the car reaches the head of the village, we all cheer happily
Sentence 3:
a. Lacking subject, predicate
……….A turtle perched
b. Lacking subject, predicate
………..The Vietnamese people have achieved peace and strong development
c. Lacking subject, predicate
……….The younger generation must know how to preserve and cherish the heritage of Long Bien Bridge today
Sentence 4:
- Error in the word “squeeze”
-Omit the word “squeeze”
b.
- Error in the usage lacking subject
- Add subject “Thuý”
c.
- Subject unclear
- “.....and you gave me a new pen”
Essay Crafting: Fixing Subject and Predicate Errors (Continued), Short 2
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