Prompt: Describing a Park Scene
1. Detailed Outline
2. Sample Piece 1
3. Sample Piece 2
4. Sample Piece 3
Painting the Picture of the Park
I. Park Scene Description Outline (Standard)
1. Introduction
Introducing the Park:
- Where is the park located? What is its name?
- Is the park close to your home? When do you usually visit the park?
2. Body
- General Description:
+ Is the park spacious?
+ Where is the park located? (Near or far from residential areas)
+ Is the park crowded? When?
- Detailed Description:
+ The park boasts abundant greenery, creating a refreshing and clean atmosphere.
+ A spacious square area hosts various group activities (aerobics, badminton, volleyball, etc.).
+ Modern playgrounds cater to children with state-of-the-art equipment.
+ Surrounding the park are fitness facilities for people of all ages to exercise.
+ A large pond with plenty of stone benches provides space for relaxation and conversation.
3. Conclusion
Expressing My Feelings
II. Sample Essay: Describing a Park Scene
1. Park Scene Description, Sample 1 (Standard)
After stressful days of studying, every weekend evening, I often accompany my parents to Cau Giay Park to join the neighborhood community in group exercises and leisurely walks around the park to relax our minds.
On weekends, Cau Giay Park bustles with activity. Besides the elderly engaging in exercises at the square, there are many young children accompanying their parents for recreation. The park boasts a spacious play area with various exciting games like swings, merry-go-rounds, and climbing ropes. The children play together joyfully, with some chasing each other, others swinging, and some climbing ropes. The atmosphere in the play area is harmonious and cheerful as children take turns playing.
In the evenings, the park attracts many seniors who come for qigong exercises and leisurely walks around the grounds. The square area is always bustling, where my mother and her friends do aerobics to lively music. The vigorous and graceful movements are practiced proficiently by everyone. The aerobic team comprises not only middle-aged women but also many young, charming ladies. When I grow older, I will definitely join in the workouts with everyone.
Weekends are the most anticipated days of the week for me because I get to go to the park with my parents, observe people exercising and having fun, and take a stroll around the park with my dad. I enjoy the vibrant atmosphere and the refreshing, pleasant environment of the park. Whenever I have free time, I will go to the park to play with my parents.
2. Park Scene Description, Sample 2 (Standard)
Our house is close to Nghia Do Park, so my parents often take me there to play on weekends and holidays. The park is very spacious, with many green trees and modern, attractive playground equipment, so many people like to come to the park for a walk and exercise.
Nghia Do Park is most lively in the early morning and evening. In the early morning, before the sun rises, the park is already bustling with people. People often wake up early to come to the park for morning exercises, to move their bodies and bring energy for the new day. Unlike the crowded streets, the scene in the park in the early morning is so peaceful. Early morning is also the most beautiful time in the park, because then, I not only hear the birds chirping on the tall branches but also admire the flowers showing off their colors in the new sunlight, and the dew drops remaining on the leaves sparkle like bright gems.
If in the morning everyone goes to the park together for a walk, exercise, then in the evening, there are more children of all ages coming to the park to play. There are many exciting games in the park, so children are often brought by their parents to play and relax.
I really like the park near my house. The park not only brings fresh air to the neighborhood but also serves as a gathering place, a place for everyone to have fun, and relax.
3. Park Scene Description, Sample 3 (Standard)
In contrast to the hustle and bustle of the streets during rush hour, the small park near my place is truly tranquil. The park is where people come together for a stroll, gatherings, and to relax after a busy day of studying or work.
The park near my place isn't too big, nor is it as famous as other large parks in Hanoi like Thong Nhat Park, Cau Giay Park, or Hoa Binh Park. However, its cleanliness, tidiness, and fresh air attract the affection of many people, including myself.
On weekend mornings, I often go to the park with my grandmother to exercise. The morning park seems to don a new, brighter, and fresher outfit. Dew still lingers on the flowers and leaves, sparkling under the new sunlight like precious crystals. The morning in the park is particularly pleasant, with fresh, crisp air carrying a hint of the coolness from the night dew. Taking a stroll around the park, I can smell the fragrance of grass, the gentle coolness of the flowers. In the trees are chirping birds calling out to each other.
I love gazing at the park every early morning. The fresh air combined with the vibrant scenery full of lively trees and surroundings invigorates me, providing a source of energy for the new day.
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Aside from the park description essay, for honing descriptive writing skills, students can practice with other prompts such as: Describing the beach at sunset, Describing the school grounds after the pandemic break, Depicting the harvest scene in their hometown, Describing the scenic beauty of mountains and forests.