1. Sample Essay 1
2. Sample Essay 2
3. Sample Essay 3
Prompt: Discuss with your loved ones about the admirable qualities of someone resilient and determined.
3 sample essays discussing with loved ones about the admirable qualities of someone resilient and determined.
Sample Essay 1: Discussing with loved ones about the admirable qualities of someone resilient and determined in grade 4.
Father: - I bought you a book of Vietnamese Folktales. Have you read the Watermelon Story in it?'
Child: - Yes, dad! An Tiêm is really amazing, isn't he?! At first, it was hard to believe that amidst the vast ocean, An Tiêm's family could survive.
Father: - An Tiêm possesses extraordinary determination and resilience. No matter how difficult the circumstances are, he never retreats, determined to overcome fate for a better life.
Child: - Dad! Can determination and belief help people overcome harsh circumstances, right?
Father: - Absolutely! For example, if you consistently practice writing, your handwriting will become better day by day.
Child: - I will try my best, dad! In three months, I will bring home my first perfect score in Spelling for you to see.
Father: - I believe you can do it. Good luck, my child!
So we've suggested the discussion with family about the admirable qualities of someone resilient and determined for the next lesson. Prepare to answer textbook questions, Share a story about a role model in physical fitness, and along with Composition Practice: Practicing exchanging opinions with family to improve communication skills.
Sample Essay 2: Discussing with family about the admirable qualities of someone resilient and determined, or selectively
Father: - In your Grade 4 Vietnamese textbook, there's a story that I really like. It's the story of 'The Maritime King' Bạch Thái Bưởi. Do you like that story?
Child: - I also really like it, dad, because the story of Mr. Bạch Thái Bưởi is fascinating! From an orphan boy who had to follow his mother selling goods on the streets, he rose to become the 'Maritime King' of Vietnam.
Father: - According to you, why did Mr. Bạch Thái Bưởi succeed like that?
Child: - I think first of all, it's because Mr. Bạch Thái Bưởi had strong determination and resilience. There were times when his business failed completely, but he never gave up.
Father: - You're right, but there are also other reasons that helped him succeed in the competition with Chinese and French ship owners.
Child: - In my opinion, Mr. Bạch Thái Bưởi was very clever, he knew how to awaken the self-reliance of each Vietnamese citizen. He gave speeches at the docks, posted slogans: 'We take our own ships' to rally passengers' support and help Vietnamese ship owners, contributing to the development of the country's economy.
Father: - Exactly! Mr. Bạch Thái Bưởi knew how to rely on the people, how to ignite the patriotism of the people.
Child: - In the past, I wanted to become a genius painter like Leonardo da Vinci or Lê Duy Ứng; but now I want to become a successful entrepreneur like Bạch Thái Bưởi, dad!
Father: - That's good! So, have you prepared anything to become a successful entrepreneur?
Child: - I'm trying to study hard because a businessperson needs to have knowledge, analytical skills, and quick judgment in the face of the times, right dad?
Sample Essay 3: Discussing with family about the admirable qualities of someone resilient and determined, achieving high scores in composition
Scenario of the conversation: My mother and I just finished reading the story 'The Miracle Feet'. My friend named Ái Phương played the role of the mother.
- Mother: Hey Khánh Linh! Try telling me your feelings about Mr. Nguyễn Ngọc Kí?
- Khánh Linh: Mom, I really admire Mr. Nguyễn Ngọc Kí! He's an extraordinary person, with exceptional determination and a rare drive to succeed.
- Mother: Can you elaborate more on Mr. Nguyễn Ngọc Kí's extraordinary determination and drive to succeed for me?
- Khánh Linh: I think, mom, Mr. Kí didn't grow up like a normal person. He was paralyzed in both arms. Yet he still had dreams of going to school like us.
A beautiful wish, isn't it, mom?
- Mother: What else, dear?
Despite being disabled, Mr. Nguyễn Ngọc Ký never gives up.
- Khánh Linh: He went to school to ask for admission. The teacher saw him paralyzed in both arms and refused to admit him. He was very sad. Back home, he persevered in training, using his feet to hold the pen and diligently practicing writing. By chance, the teacher discovered him diligently practicing writing with his feet. The teacher was deeply moved and admired his determination. She decided to admit him to school and provide the best conditions for his learning. He was very happy and determined to study hard with his friends. That's also an extraordinary expression of determination, isn't it, mom?
- Mother: Yes, absolutely right! Keep expressing your thoughts, dear.
- Khánh Linh: Regarding his resilience, it's truly admirable. Initially, his feet stomped on the paper, tearing it apart. Overcoming this, new challenges arose. There were times when his feet grew tired, unable to control the pen as desired, sometimes even cramping, causing him great pain. Yet he persisted, endured, and persevered in training without losing heart. Thanks to this, he succeeded. His writing scores gradually improved, eight points, nine points, then ten points. And finally, he achieved his dream of becoming a student at the Comprehensive University.
- Mother: What do you think after seeing Mr. Kí's example?
- Khánh Linh: Well, mom! It's a good example to follow. I will follow Mr. Kí's example and study hard to get into university like him. First, I will try to improve my handwriting because currently my handwriting is still bad. I will spend one hour a day practicing writing. Mom, please grade me every day!
- Mother: I'm very happy to hear that. You have to try to fulfill what you promised. I believe in you. Tell me more about following Mr. Kí's example.
- Khánh Linh: Thưa mẹ, vâng ạ!
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Những tấm gương có ý chí, nghị lực xung quanh chúng ta nhiều vô kể. Em hãy nhìn vào họ và tự rút ra bài học kinh nghiệm cho bản thân mình. Từ đó, tự phát triển và hoàn thiện bản thân, trở thành một người có ích cho xã hội nhé. Bên cạnh văn kể chuyện, các đề văn miêu tả cũng chiếm số lượng rất lớn trong chương trình tiếng Việt lớp 4. Em có thể tham khảo một số bài văn mẫu miêu tả do đội ngũ Mytour biên soạn để nâng cao kĩ năng làm văn của mình nhé.
