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Topic: Share a moment when you excelled at work
Narrate a time when I excelled in a task
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1. Narrating an Achievement at Work, Sample #1
In the essay, a student performed a commendable act by lending their classmate a fountain pen.
Essay:
That day, the teacher returned the Math notebooks to the whole class. It was Linh's favorite subject, but for some reason, Linh looked very worried, constantly glancing around.
As soon as the teacher finished returning the notebooks, it was time for recess. I immediately went to Linh. Linh explained, 'Today, my parents went to work early, and I didn't have time to ask my mom for 9,000 VND to buy a Nét Hoa pen for my Math notebook.' Linh suddenly remembered and exclaimed, 'Oh! Right! You have two Nét Hoa pens; can you lend me one?' I stood there contemplating for a moment, asking myself, 'Should I lend Linh my pen?' I was a bit hesitant. The bell rang. I quickly returned to my seat. The whole class sat down, and Linh immediately started writing to avoid being late. Seeing Linh's urgency, I finally made up my mind and called out, 'Hey Linh! I'll lend you this pen. My mom gave it to me for my birthday. The ink color of this pen is beautiful.'
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2. Narrating a Positive Action, Sample #2
The story of a good deed is recounted by a student, a moment when they found a lost item and returned it to the owner.
Essay:
I have never done anything significant or made others happy, except for one time back in 2nd grade. On that occasion, I found a lost item and returned it to the owner.
That evening, I had duty as a class monitor, so I had to stay in the classroom for a while to clean up. As I was walking on the school yard, I suddenly stepped on something hard. I bent down to pick it up, and to my surprise, it was an 18x7cm pocket-sized novel from Trí Tuệ bookstore, the first book by Professor Powel written by A.R Belger. The book was wrapped in plastic, indicating that the owner might have just bought it and hadn't read it yet. I hadn't read it either, but I knew a bit about it from my parents. It seemed to be a very good novel. I flipped the back cover of the book and read a short paragraph summarizing the content. It strengthened my decision. The thought of keeping the book crossed my mind.
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3. Narrating a Positive Action, Sample #3
The commendable act of the student in the essay is admitting their mistake to the teacher and promising to change.
Essay:
Back in second grade, there's one story that I still remember vividly, where I struggled with my own mistake.
On that day, the teacher called students to the board to solve math problems. When Thảo Hương was called, I saw her hesitating and whispering something to the friend next to her. As she approached my desk, she quietly said to me, 'Phương Anh, can I borrow your notebook?' I hesitated for a moment, then handed her my notebook.
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4. Narrating a Positive Action, Sample #4
The courageous act of the student in preventing the act of littering, causing environmental pollution, is worth learning and emulating.
Essay:
In our daily lives, we have both good and bad deeds. There's one story where I did something meaningful in the campaign to protect the environment as a student.
The story begins one morning, when the dawn was just breaking, and dewdrops lingered on the lush green grass. It was the time when I was heading to school, marveling at the enchanting beauty of the sunrise. Suddenly, what is this? A man was dumping a large bag with the head of a dead pig peeking out.
I looked at him with immense frustration. Rushing towards him, I exclaimed: 'Hey, sir!'
The man heard me calling and immediately turned off the engine of his Honda, asking: 'What's up, kid?'
- What's up, kid?
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5. Narrate a time when you did something good, Sample 5
Not only helping others is considered a good deed, but also the courage to admit one's mistakes is commendable.
Essay:
Every time Hoa and I walk shoulder to shoulder on the familiar path to school, memories from the past come rushing back as if it were just yesterday. Those memories are the good deeds that Hoa and I will never forget.
At that time, it was almost time to go to class. Most of the students were present, except for Hoa's study desk, which was still unoccupied. I spoke up: 'Hey, guys, which desk is on duty today and hasn't been done yet?' Mi replied: 'Today is Hoa's turn, a while ago I saw her carrying a watering can for the plants.' Seeing that, I thought for a moment and said: 'Let's all lend a hand and help her get to class on time.' Uyen chimed in: 'Forget it, let's just relax and play, it's not our desk to worry about, if you want to do it, go ahead.' I didn't say anything, quietly went to borrow a broom to clean the classroom.
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