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6. Sample essay
Outline analysis of the poem Vieng Lang Bac
I. Outline analysis of the poem Vieng Lang Bac, sample 1 (Standard)
1. Introduction:
- Introduce the author and the work
2. Body of the essay:
a. Emotions while standing from a distance looking at Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum
- Reflection, emotion when given the chance to visit the Mausoleum:
+ The verse acts as an introduction, a sincere self-narration, 'I, from the South, came to visit Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum.'
+ The author addresses themselves as 'I': expressing closeness and familiarity.
+ The verb 'visit': a tactful way of expressing, reducing pain and loss.
- The image of the 'bamboo row':
+ Realistic depiction: Green bamboo rows beside Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum
+ Symbolizing the resilient soul, integrity, and straightforwardness of the Vietnamese people
- Verb 'oh': expressing emotional excitement, pride.
b. Author's emotions upon entering Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum:
- Metaphorical image, comparison to the 'sun':
+ Metaphor: The 'sun' is Ho Chi Minh, the brilliant and radiant source of light
+ Comparison: the natural sun and Ho Chi Minh's 'sun' both shine brightly.
- Image of 'people walking in remembrance': the emotional nostalgia and sorrow of the people for the departure of Ho Chi Minh.
- The phrase 'day by day': expressing frequent, endless repetition.
- Crystalized image 'a bouquet of flowers offered for seventy-nine springs':
+ Creative metaphorical image: 'crowd of people' - a bouquet of flowers: It represents the flowers of people's hearts, gratitude, and reverence of the Vietnamese people towards Ho Chi Minh.
+ 'seventy-nine springs': metaphorically indicating the age of Ho Chi Minh.
- The sincere gratitude and the author's overwhelming emotions:
+ Delicately addressing Bác's departure 'Bác rests in the mausoleum in peaceful slumber.'
+ Image of 'a gentle bright moon': an intriguing association suggesting Bác's noble and simple soul, while recalling the moonlit poems of the Leader.
- The poet's intense emotions 'Still knowing the sky is forever blue/Yet feeling a pang within the heart':
+ The pain, sorrow at Bác's departure
+ Profound emotions, a tingling sensation within the heart.
c. Poet's emotions before leaving Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum:
- The poignant, lingering farewell of a Southern child:
+ 'Tomorrow returning to the South, tears overflow': a heartfelt farewell filled with deep emotions.
- Poet's sincere aspirations:
+ The expression 'wishing to become': emphasizing the poet's desire and aspiration.
+ Wanting to be a bird, a flower, a bamboo tree to be with Bác every day.
+ The image of 'bamboo tree' concluding the poem is a metaphor for the Vietnamese people.
+ 'Loyal bamboo tree': the unwavering Vietnamese people, loyal to the Party, filial to the people.
3. Closing:
General impression: The poem encapsulates sincere emotions, deep respect from the poet, and everyone towards Ho Chi Minh.
II. Outline for analyzing the poem Visiting Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum, model 2 (Standard)
1. Introduction
- Overview of the author and the work
- Overview of the content and artistic value of the poem
2. Body
a. The poem 'Visiting Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum' opens with the author's nostalgic and emotional sentiments towards the surroundings outside the Mausoleum:
- Opening line: 'I, from the South, come to visit Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum.'
+ As an announcement of the visitation circumstances
+ Laden with various affectionate and tender emotions.
- The author employs personal pronouns, addressing themselves as 'I', referring to 'Bác,' expressing profound respect and evoking warm, intimate familial feelings.
- The use of euphemism is evident through the choice of the word 'visit' instead of 'pay respects,' alleviating the pain of the departure.
- The image of 'bamboo rows in the mist,' lush and straight:
+ Represents a simple, endearing image familiar to the homeland of Vietnam
+ Implies the enduring qualities, indomitable spirit of our nation through countless hardships and challenges: 'Storms and rains, standing straight in line.'
b. The poem continues through the emotions felt before the crowd entering the Mausoleum.
- The image of the sun appears twice through the dual portrayal of a real image and a metaphorical image.
+ The first sun is the natural sun, illuminating and giving life to all creatures.
+ The second 'sun' is a metaphorical image representing Bác, as they found the light of truth, illuminating the path of national liberation, immortalizing their image.
- The detail 'very red' emphasizes the revolutionary fervor and Bác's love for the entire Vietnamese people.
- Euphemism is evident through the detail 'Bác rests in peaceful slumber.'
- The image of the 'gentle moon' recalls Bác's noble and pure soul, also evoking memories of their moonlit poems.
- The image of the 'blue sky' continues as a metaphor for Bác's eternal existence.
- Despite affirming that eternal existence, poet Viễn Phương cannot suppress the pain: 'Yet feel a pang within the heart.'
c. The poem concludes with the author's sincere and emotional aspirations.
- The phrase 'tears overflow tomorrow returning to the South' directly reveals the poet's lingering and heartfelt emotions after leaving Bác to return to the South.
- The wish 'want to become' combined with the artistic device of enumeration: a bird, a flower, a loyal bamboo tree, reveals the desire to be integrated into the landscape within the Mausoleum forever with Bác.
- The image of the bamboo tree appearing in the final stanza creates a corresponding structure for the poem.
+ In the first stanza, the image of the bamboo tree is a tangible image, symbolizing the noble qualities of the indomitable Vietnamese people.
+ In the final stanza, the image of the bamboo tree symbolizes the endless love and loyalty of the poet Viễn Phương towards Bác.
3. Conclusion
Summarize the meaning of the poem.
III. Outline for analyzing the poem Visiting Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum, model 3 (Standard)
1. Introduction:
- Introduction of the author and the work.
2. Body
a. Stanza 1:
- The addressing as 'child – Bác' brings a sense of familiarity and closeness.
- Image of green bamboo rows:
+ Realistic portrayal 'Seen in the mist, bamboo rows are luxuriant' - the image of bamboo rows beside Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum.
+ Green bamboo is the traditional tree of the Vietnamese people, creating a familiar atmosphere, expressing simplicity, and bringing warmth and tranquility of the countryside to the capital city.
+ 'Storms and rains, standing straight in line' is also a metaphor for the spirit, the resilient will of the Vietnamese people enduring countless hardships, remaining resilient.
+ Bamboo represents the people of Vietnam standing straight every day, safeguarding Bác's peaceful sleep.
b. Stanza 2:
- Using the image of the 'sun' from nature to reveal the great stature of President Ho.
→ Bác is the sunlight illuminating the path of national liberation, liberating the nation for the Vietnamese people.
- The image of 'people walking in remembrance' expresses boundless respect, endless mourning for Bác's eternal departure.
- The verse 'A bouquet of flowers offered for seventy-nine springs' not only reveals the emotions of those left behind in front of President Ho's spirit but also emphasizes Bác's immense sacrifices for the cause of national liberation, defending the country.
c. Stanza 3:
- Using euphemism, full of reverence and respect 'Bác rests in peaceful slumber.'
- Image of 'gentle bright moon,' creating an infinite sense of purity, serenity, and making the truth of Bác's departure more acceptable to many readers.
- 'Still knowing the sky is forever blue/Yet feel a pang within the heart,' even aware that Bác has gone far, the pain in the heart cannot be suppressed.
d. Final Stanza:
- After the short visit, the author must return to work in the South, which also means being away from Bác, causing endless regret for Viễn Phương.
- Sincere wish to become a singing bird, a flower, a 'loyal bamboo tree' to be with Bác every day.
=> Viễn Phương has expressed extremely sincere and respectful feelings for Bác, and that affection has been revealed by the author through ordinary and simple wishes.
3. Conclusion:
Express feelings about the work.
IV. Outline of Analyzing the Poem Viếng lăng Bác, Model 4 (Standard)
1. Introduction
Introduce the poem Viếng lăng Bác: The poem Viếng lăng Bác is composed of earnest verses expressing reverence and emotions when visiting Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum by Viễn Phương.
2. Body
* First 4 lines:
- Intimate and close addressing, like the affection of a beloved child for a revered father.
- The green bamboo rows symbolize the enduring vitality and survival of the nation, the people.
* Next 8 lines:
- The image of the sun alludes to Bác's image.
- Love and emotion turned into the most beautiful, brilliant flowers offered to him.
- That bright moon is like the great personality of Bác, noble, close, and affectionate.
- Infinite grief before Bác's eternal departure
* Last 4 lines:
- Simple but emotionally rich wishes from the child to Him:
+ Want to be a singing bird
+ Want to be a fragrant flower
+ Want to be a bamboo tree guarding His sleep
- The wishes of all the people of Vietnam sent to Bác.
3. Conclusion
“Viếng lăng Bác” crystallizes profound feelings in a simple heart that naturally touches the emotions of readers, causing a genuine resonance.
V. Outline of Analyzing the Poem Viếng lăng Bác, Model 5 (Standard)
1. Introduction
Introduction to the poem “Viếng lăng Bác” by Viễn Phương
2. Body
- Stanza 1: The poet's situation when visiting Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum and his emotions when first stepping to the Mausoleum.
- Stanza 2: The image of the sun alludes to the greatness of President Ho and the feelings that people have for Him.
- Stanza 3: The poet's emotions when seeing Bác's remains in the Mausoleum.
- Stanza 4: Wish to be incarnated as a bird, a flower, a bamboo tree to be with Bác.
3. Conclusion
Thoughts about the poem
VI. Sample Essay Analyzing the Poem Viếng lăng Bác (Standard)
Ho Chi Minh departed forever, leaving an immense sorrow for millions of Vietnamese people. His departure occurred when the South had not yet gained independence, and the nation was not yet unified. The intense desire to go to the South, unfulfilled during his lifetime, remained. Therefore, in 1976, after the victorious end of the anti-American resistance and the inauguration of Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum, the poet Viễn Phương, a beloved son of the South, represented the people of the South in visiting and paying tribute to Ho Chi Minh's Mausoleum. On this occasion, he composed the poem 'Viếng lăng Bác,' included in the poetry collection 'Như mây mùa xuân.'
The poem 'Viếng lăng Bác' is an overflowing, sincere emotion of a son from the distant South who braved the journey to visit the revered Father of the nation, expressing both deep respect and profound sincerity. The poem is written in the eight-line verse with four stanzas...(Continued)
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