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Prompt: Reflect on and contemplate the following verse: 'Our boat sails with the wind... whenever we desire.'
Part 1: Outline of thoughts and reflections on the verse: 'Our boat sails with the wind... whenever we desire.'
Part 2: Sample essay Reflecting on and contemplating the following verse: 'Our boat sails with the wind... whenever we desire.'
Essay:
Huy Can is one of the prominent poets in Vietnamese literature, particularly within the New Poetry movement. His poetry possesses a distinct style, exemplified by the poem 'The Fishing Boat.' This poem celebrates the beauty of nature and the hardworking Vietnamese people during the socialist construction era. 'The Fishing Boat' features exquisite poetic imagery, notably in its three stanzas:
'Our boat steers with the wind and moonlit sails... Nurturing our lives since when?'
The three stanzas above depict a canvas of nature and hardworking individuals amidst the vast ocean. It portrays people striving tirelessly to catch large schools of fish to enrich their homeland. The image of people laboring amidst the vast ocean is heroic, resilient, and immensely powerful.
The poem combines elements of reality and romance. Thus, when depicting the laborers setting sail to fish, Huy Can paints an incredibly romantic scene:
'Our boat steers with the wind and moonlit sails, gliding amidst the lofty clouds and the vast sea. Venturing far, measuring the ocean's depth, Setting nets in strategic formations, encircling and trapping.'
The human fleet sails under the golden moonlight shining upon the sparkling sea. Once mere small, ordinary boats, these vessels are now growing immense, merging with the vastness of the universe. The boat now has the wind as its rudder, the moonlight as its sail, gliding lightly amidst the vast expanse of the sky. The imagery of 'sailing with the wind, moonlit sails, lofty clouds, and level sea' transforms the ordinary fleet into a cosmic armada, both colossal and resplendent under the moonlight. In this moment, it seems the boundless sky merges with the sea, forming a unified entity that carries the boat far into the distance. Out here, the boat anchors attentively, to 'measure the ocean's depth.' Is this exploration to find large schools of fish, to unravel the mysteries of the sea, or perhaps to understand the secrets of the ocean's motherly embrace, hoping to bring back riches for the homeland? Both humanity and nature here appear grand and vast. Humanity is no longer insignificant amidst the vastness of the universe; they are now magnified, vibrant, and dynamic. They assert mastery over nature, hence their bold act of 'setting nets in strategic formations.' This is preparation for capturing a large catch.
Huy Can paints a picture where nature and laboring humans blend harmoniously. Nature is vast, expansive, and breathtakingly beautiful, yet the humans in Huy Can's painting are no longer weak subjects before the cosmic nature. Here, in this painting, they stand boldly before nature, asserting mastery over it, equaling nature's stature, despite its countless mysteries yet to be discovered. This is how one truly understands the growth, grandeur, strength, and resilience of the Vietnamese people post-war amidst numerous storms and adversities!
Moving on to another stanza, Huy Can leads us to another picture. The theme remains nature, but now it's not just the golden moonlight and the blue sea; it's also sparkling with vibrant colors. These are the colors of the sea creatures:
'The tiny fish, the birdfish, and the dace
Their colors sparkle in black and pink
Your tail flaps, the golden moon dances
At night: stars pull the waters of Halong.'
Truly a vivid and lively painting bursting with colors. Sparkling hues of 'golden,' 'black,' and 'pink' paint a picture as rich and vibrant as can be! The stanza begins with a series of names of sea creatures unique to the Hon Gai, Quang Ninh region. From the 'dazzling' colors to the 'glittering' tails, every shade and tone, every melody is distinctly remarkable! Not only that, but the sea also reveals its beauty when:
'The dace sparkles in black and pink
Its tail flaps, the golden moon dances'
The dace—a specialty of Vietnam's sea, with its distinctive black and red tail—now, in the poet's romantic eyes, becomes a cluster of flames amidst the sea. This cluster of flames illuminates a vast dark expanse of sea, causing it to gleam and shimmer with the light of the 'black and pink' flames. Never before has there been such an exquisitely whimsical comparison in poetry! Only someone with a vivid imagination and keen observation like Huy Can can recognize the unique characteristics of each sea creature. Not only illuminating the vast ocean with a bright flame, in Huy Can's eyes, these sea creatures resemble mischievous, lively young girls, vigorously flapping their sparkling tails on the water's surface. And thus, amidst the vast expanse of water, the 'golden' moonlight shoots up into the sky, both dazzlingly beautiful and strangely refreshing. Here, Huy Can uses a strikingly vivid adjective, 'golden,'—a hue that shines brilliantly yet uniquely, making the verse resound with grandeur. Concluding the stanza, Huy Can writes:
'At night: stars pull the waters of Halong.'
This is a personified image, but in a truly intriguing way. The night is breathing, using its breath to exhale into the vast stillness of the ocean. Is the night's breath perhaps the sound of the tidal waters ebbing and flowing? Each tide sweeps onto the shore then rushes back out, and Huy Can feels as though the night is breathing: stars pull the waters of Halong? Different realms, different dimensions seamlessly connected by Huy Can. The space of the night, the sea, the stars, and the moon all converge at a point, and in the midst of that point is the image of hardworking people engrossed in their work.
The entire stanza is Huy Can's ode to the richness of the vast sea. Through the eyes of a life-loving poet, Huy Can paints a beautiful picture of nature and the myriad different fish species. The painting is full of colors, yet equally dazzling and vivid.
The folk songs of the fishing village resonate like a melody from the very first lines of poetry, and now they echo once more:
'We sing a song calling the fish
The boat's rhythm accompanies the high moon
The sea gives us fish like a mother's heart
Nurturing our lives since when?'
If the first verses in the initial stanzas were songs to hoist the sails swiftly away, here, these verses are 'calling the fish.' The songs resound clearly in the silent air of the night and the vast sea. Accompanied by the rhythmic sound of paddles hitting the boat's edge, it's the song summoning the fish, or perhaps the sounds used by fishermen to lure fish into their nets? Harmonizing with the song is the moonlight shining brightly above, illuminating every action of the people, serving as a rhythm for them, cheering them on in their battle with nature. Each beat of the fish resounding loudly signifies heavier nets—an abundant fishing season. The boat drifts on the waves with the golden moon as a companion, and the resounding song adds strength to the fishermen, empowering them to pull in nets full of catch.
Looking at their heavily laden nets, Huy Can suddenly has quiet reflections about the sea:
'The sea gives us fish like a mother's heart
Nurturing our lives since when?'
Here, Huy Can likens the sea to a mother. A mother is always nurturing and protective of her children, always giving them the best and always being there, like the saying 'a mother's love is endless.' Indeed, 'the sea gives us fish,' always generous with us, never holding back anything for itself. This is a clever and grateful comparison by Huy Can to the vast sea, to the generosity of nature. The sea has given us, nurtured us since our childhood, nurtured us through generations. Yes, we truly must be thankful to the vast sea for the riches it has given us, for nurturing us, for helping us enrich our homeland. The poem rings out like an expression of heartfelt gratitude, like whispered words of a person to the vast sea. It's a thank you, a deep gratitude sent to the sea, because the sea is too generous, too affectionate!
Closing the stanza, we feel the dedication of the fishermen to their work. At the same time, we also feel their reverence for the sea, their gratitude, and affection for it. To them, the sea is a mother, an integral part of their lives, close and beloved.
The three stanzas depict nature and humanity in the endeavor of fishing. It's both romantic and realistic. Huy Can has painted a colorful picture of nature and the fishermen. His use of literary techniques such as comparison, enumeration, personification contributes to the uniqueness and success of the stanza.
With just three succinct stanzas, it vividly showcases Huy Can's literary prowess. It reflects his overflowing emotions towards the new life of the people after years of war. He truly deserves to be one of the most talented modern poets in the Vietnamese literary scene.
