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Prompt: Rewrite a paragraph narrating an incident that highlights courage or intelligence more effectively
Suggestion:
- Add details describing the character's appearance (or actions, thoughts, etc.).
- Incorporate your thoughts and emotions.
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1. Rewrite the paragraph narrating an incident highlighting courage or intelligence more effectively - Sample 1:
When setting out, the Trưng Sisters adorned themselves beautifully. Puzzled by their attire, the generals questioned, and they responded: 'We dress splendidly to bolster the morale of our troops. It makes the enemy tremble, forgets to fight, and facilitates our triumph.' Everyone was in awe of their comprehensive thinking. Mounted on elephants, regal and imposing, they led the army into the enemy's territory. Wherever our troops advanced, the enemy quivered, surrendering weapons and fleeing back to their land.
2. Rewrite the paragraph narrating an incident highlighting courage or intelligence more effectively - Sample 2:
After witnessing his father's strenuous work, thoughts ignited in Pa-xcan's mind. Hastening back to his room, he delved into exploration and innovation. In approximately fifty days, the world's first computer came into existence. With his prodigious mind, Pa-xcan researched and crafted a machine in a brief period. That machine later became a transformative entity for the entire world. His intelligence and prowess left me immensely impressed and awestruck.
3. Rewrite the paragraph narrating an incident highlighting courage or intelligence more effectively - Sample 3:
When the rubber ball dropped into the deep pit, causing distress among the children, Tí remained calm. Advising his friends to use a bucket to scoop water from the pond and pour it into the pit, Tí assured them that the ball would float to the surface as the water rose. Skeptical yet curious, his friends followed suit. In no time, the water filled the pit, and the ball resurfaced. The children rejoiced, praising Tí for his clever solution. Thus, Trạng Tí showcased his intelligence from a very young age.
4. Rewrite the paragraph narrating an incident highlighting courage or intelligence more effectively - Sample 4:
There are numerous legends surrounding Sister Võ Thị Sáu. Before her execution, she was given the opportunity to confess. However, she bluntly refused, stating: 'I am not guilty. Only those who are about to execute me are guilty.' Seeing her fellow inmates digging a grave for her, Sister Sáu presented them with the flowers pinned to her hair and said: 'Thank you for digging a grave for me. Today, you're digging a small hole. In the future, you'll have to dig a much larger one. That hole will be to bury those who shot me today.' When brought to the execution ground, Sister Sáu adamantly refused to blindfold herself. She stared directly at the soldiers preparing to execute her, making them tremble with fear. In her final moments, Võ Thị Sáu passionately sang the national anthem and shouted: 'Down with the colonial French! Long live independent Vietnam! Long live President Hồ!' Her heroic and fearless demeanor not only terrified the enemy but also earned admiration from others.
5. Rewrite the paragraph narrating an incident highlighting courage or intelligence more effectively - Sample 5:
When challenged by a foreign envoy who arrogantly declared, 'Trạng, try weighing the elephant,' Lương Thế Vinh took an actual scale to weigh the elephant. The envoy mocked, 'I fear your scale might be too small for the elephant.' Trạng replied jokingly, 'Then let's divide the elephant into smaller parts.' Thế Vinh had the soldiers lead the elephant onto a boat. Due to the elephant's weight, the boat sank deep into the water. Trạng marked the water level on the boat, then brought the elephant back ashore. Next, he ordered the soldiers to fill the boat with stones until it reached the marked level. Finally, Trạng weighed the stones, and the final number was the elephant's weight. The foreign envoy witnessed the entire process, expressing admiration and refraining from further mockery.
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After adding details (speech, actions, thoughts, etc.) of the character or your emotions about the story, the composition will become more captivating and vivid. Feel free to explore other 4th-grade sample essays on Mytour, such as: Talking about a time you visited relatives or loved ones; Expressing love and sending messages to a family member.
