Sample Essay: My Sense of Maturity

Sample Essay: My Sense of Maturity

I. Outline

1. Introduction

One day, I suddenly realized my own growth.

2. Body

a. Self-description in Adulthood

For male individuals

- Physical Appearance:
+ Height: significantly taller than before
+ Voice: deeper and more resonant
+ Body: well-developed, more muscular
+ Intelligence: feeling more knowledgeable, better problem-solving skills, increased sharpness.

- Personality:
+ Less impulsive, more deliberate in actions, careful thinking.
+ Increased self-care and attention to personal well-being.
+ Shy and reserved, a bit timid in front of the opposite gender.
+ More attentive to the people around.

For female individuals

- Physical Appearance:
+ Height: significantly taller than before.
+ Voice: melodious, clearer and more refined.
+ Body: well-developed, appearing gentle and more feminine.
+ Intelligence: feeling more knowledgeable, better problem-solving skills, increased sharpness.

- Personality:
+ Less clumsy, more deliberate in actions, careful thinking.
+ Grooming and taking care of appearance more before standing in front of others.
+ Shy and reserved, a bit timid in front of the opposite gender.
+ More attentive to the people around.

b. Share a profound memory to truly reflect the theme '...feel I have grown up.'
Example: Watching over my younger sibling at the market when Mom went shopping
- Mom went to the market, and I had to take care of my sibling, facing countless difficulties.
- Always keeping an eye on them because they were too mischievous and active.
- Engaging in games they demanded: being a horse for them to ride, playing hide-and-seek, ...
- Feeding them was a real challenge of being an older brother or sister.
- Bathing them was also a very enjoyable and interesting task.
- When they slept soundly, that's when I sighed with relief.
- When Mom returned from the market, she praised how well I looked after my sibling.
- Mom said to me: 'You have truly grown up, my child!'

c. Self-reflection
- Need to exert more effort and gain experiences in life.

3. Conclusion

- Being grown-up is something very interesting and joyful to me.
- As a grown-up, I promise to always take care of my studies, be obedient, and strive to be an exemplary child, not to disappoint my parents anymore.
 

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II. Sample Essay: I Feel Grown-up

1. Sample Essay #1

People's lives change with their age, each age with a different name. Those under sixteen are considered children, those over eighteen are called young adults. The circle of life changes over time, it seems like the appearance and face from childhood will remain the same, but that's just thinking for each person. Then, one day they will realize that they have become different from the past. I'm the same. Eight years have passed since I entered grade one, but then I also realized: 'I have grown up.'
Eight years of school have passed since I started grade one. The first days of school were still timid, worried, and a feeling of not wanting to be away from my mom. Every day, my mom held my hand, took my small hand and led me to school. At that time, it was grade one, the first year I attended a solemn and grand opening ceremony, I was very surprised at that time. And then eight years also passed gently, eight years witnessing the scene of the opening day that is no longer special to me. The days of going to seventh grade were no longer led by my mom's hand to school, no more fear and worry because these things had become too familiar to me. And it gave me the feeling that after eight years, I have also grown up.

In the early days, I used to be supported by my mom, guided to school by her. We walked on the familiar path, chatting happily. Truly, those were memorable moments. Then came the time when I had to take care of everything myself, from studying to organizing my bag and room. Not just trivial things, even personal hygiene and changing clothes, washing clothes, were all done by me. But those things didn't affirm that I had grown up. I was taller, heavier, more organized, knew how to maintain my appearance, and choose what was necessary for myself. Those were just characteristics confirming that I had grown. But just growing is not enough; you need to be wise. How do I know if I'm wise? I have more knowledge, know how to fix mistakes, discern what is wrong or right. I perceive more about everything around me. Knowing I'm grown-up means I may still make mistakes but fewer. I learn lessons for myself and correct mistakes.

Since I knew I was grown-up, I felt more conscious and didn't need to rely on anyone. This is the time when I have to be self-aware, help my parents and everyone around me. I have to take responsibility for myself. I have to self-educate about everything. And I affirmed that: 'I am grown-up.'
Growing up is a duty, responsibility, and self-awareness of each person. I'm the same. I have my own rights and decisions for my future. I am very happy to have grown up. And now I can proudly say to everyone: 'I am grown-up.'

Along with the sample essay I Feel Grown-up, you can also refer to sample essays for other topics such as: Recounting the first days of school, My mother is the closest and most familiar person to me. Describe and recount some memories about my mother, He/She (friend, teacher, relative,...) lives forever in my heart. Recount a memorable childhood memory, My mother is the closest and most familiar person to me. Describe and recount some memories about my mother

2. Sample Essay #2

Time nurtures the human soul, helping us grow physically, mentally, and giving us dreams and hopes for the future. Like everyone, the flow of time brings me maturity until one day I suddenly realize: 'I am grown-up.'
I am getting older year by year. Remember when I was still a shy little girl who only knew how to follow my mother around, and now, that little girl has become a middle school student, taller than my mother. I'm not only older but also can reach higher than before. I can easily pick up the highest dictionaries, help my mother hang clothes in the cupboard without using a chair, assist my father in lifting the ladder to the attic to fix the antenna, walk a long mountain road without needing anyone to lead or carry... Things that I didn't have the strength to do when I was small have now become simple and easy for me. The initial feeling of growing up for me was still very vague, but over time, I became more and more aware of it.

Entering the realm of dreams, my joy is not just fueled by the praises of my mother or relatives but by the satisfaction of seeing my parents proud of me – a testament to my growth. Regardless of the magnitude of responsibilities or the daunting gap that separates me from my dreams, I will persist, for I know there are loved ones around me always ready to lend a helping hand whenever needed.

3. Sample Essay 3

This year marks my ascent to the eighth grade as a student in a secondary school in Ho Chi Minh City. I believe I've matured in the actions I've taken, feeling more confident with each passing day in navigating through life.

I perceive myself as a student with qualities of perseverance, honesty, sociability, approaching every task with unwavering determination. I am acutely aware of the responsibilities and mistakes I've made. While my academic performance may not be stellar, I consider myself a diligent student, always striving to secure grades that would satisfy my parents. I set goals for myself to strive towards and achieve. Despite physical changes – a slight increase in height, a raspy voice due to a broken tone – my thoughts have matured, yet I still indulge in reading comics and watching animated films, ensuring I don't forget the essence of my childhood. Embracing adulthood is both fascinating and a source of pride!

I remember when I was little, my mother used to say, 'When going to school, walk straight to the school, don't listen to strangers, and when school ends, come straight home without stopping here and there. Be cautious not to get lost and led astray by others; it would worry me a lot.' Now that I've grown up and no longer hear these words from my mother, I feel a sense of absence. When I was young, I received care and concern from my mother, but now things have changed. As I've matured, I must learn to take care of myself in every aspect of life. Back then, my mother used to pack my lunch, but now that I'm grown, I have to go and get my own food and eat it. Sometimes, I wish to go back to the past, but I can't because I've started to grow up; everyone has to go through the stages from being a baby to learning to walk, growing up, and becoming independent. After going through a phase filled with wasted time, I want to do things that are more beneficial for society to be recognized and valued.

In the future, I will have to take more responsibility for myself, from my studies to taking care of my family, earning a living to support my wife, children, and aging parents who need care. Today, I will start practicing self-care because I feel that I have grown up.

4. Sample Essay 4

With each passing day, I grow a bit older. I'm thirteen years old this year. When I was younger, I used to think only for myself, but this year, I've learned to think more maturely, considering others, as I feel that I've grown up. A few years ago, I used to think in a very careless way, lacking consideration, which often led to hurting others. At home, I only knew how to be in my room, playing with my phone, without helping with household chores. Sometimes, I would get angry and behave inappropriately towards my family members. When outside, I just wanted to showcase myself in the most prominent way, forgetting about those around me. It's safe to say that I was extremely 'wild' (in the current youth's terminology).

Now, when I return home, I always find myself in the living room watching TV, waiting for my mom to assign tasks or look after the baby. I've become more thoughtful, considering the consequences to avoid any wrong actions that might make others sad. When outside, I've learned to control the urge to explode and showcase myself to others. I am more courteous and refined in my behavior. And now, I no longer feel like a 'wild' individual.

The reason for my transformation may be that I see and feel the envious and sorrowful glances, the pain, and the hurt after what I've done. Though only one or two years separate the past from now, I've changed a lot so that my relatives will always be proud of me, and outsiders will have a friendlier view of me.

I will strive to improve myself even more now and in the future. I no longer want people to see me as a naughty child who doesn't understand things anymore. Instead, view me as a mature and thoughtful individual in every aspect. Because I truly feel that I have grown up.

5. Sample Essay 5

Have you ever wondered if you've truly grown up? For me, that realization has become a truth. Yes, I have grown up. My childhood was blissful, serene. Not wealthy, but I lived in the loving embrace of my parents. From childhood to now, I haven't faced any extreme hardships because I've always been cared for and protected by my parents. As I developed and grew taller, my parents aged. I once made my mother cry with my rebellious behavior, not realizing that those tears were shed for me, for the mistakes I made, and they would only make my mother older. I made my father so angry that he couldn't contain it. He scolded me a lot, even gave me a few spankings, but deep down, he only wanted me to become a better person. Yet, I once thought that I wished to grow up quickly to live independently, away from my parents, in a life of freedom where no one could restrict me, and I wouldn't have to listen to the reprimands of my parents anymore.

Yes, I used to think that way. A terrible, foolish thought from an ungrateful person. Sitting alone in my room, I reflect on it. Just twenty or thirty more years, and when I've matured, my biggest dream is that the silly years making my parents sad will return for me to mend, to bring joy to my parents again. To be back in the warm embrace of my mother, to hear my father's guidance. I would long for that so much that it might bring me to tears, because perhaps, by then, my parents will only exist in my memories. I briefly think of this, something I had never considered before, because one thing is certain: I have grown up.

I have grown up because of the teachings of my parents. I have grown up because I can feel the physical pain my parents endured to raise me, the mental anguish from hearing disrespectful words from their own flesh and blood. I have grown up because I think about the mistakes I've made, instead of blaming others. I have grown up because I know how to love, share, and help others, not just receiving love, sharing, and help from others. I have grown up because I find joy in others' happiness, feel sadness in others' sorrows, abhor injustice, and shed tears for the misfortunes of life.

I have grown in my soul. I will cherish happiness as a gift bestowed by the divine, and treasure it with all my heart. Time has passed for me indifferently, but now I see it as precious as a diamond, and its value depends on me.

Not long from now, just a few more years, I will step into my own life, a life without my mother's embrace, without my father's protection. I will tread my own path and hold the key to unlock the door of the future, the door reaching towards my dreams.

6. Sample Essay 6

As the years go by, every day brings a new change for me. Every night before sleep, I contemplate, 'Tomorrow, when I look in the mirror, there will be changes'—in appearance, stature, weight, thoughts, and actions. It continues like this until I grow up.

Indeed, every one of us knows that as children, we always desire to grow up, to be more mature, like everyone around us. I am no exception. Since I was a child, I was carried in the arms of my parents, pampered like a delicate egg. Always cared for, worried about, and loved to the fullest by everyone in the family. Reflecting on the past, I remember when I was one year old and got sick. My parents were extremely worried, taking care of me every moment without rest. However, now when I fall ill, I must take care of myself. Moreover, when I turned six and stepped into the first grade, I always felt uneasy, nervous, and fearful in my heart.

Entering the classroom, my mother released my hand and walked away. At that moment, I cried uncontrollably, but soon I stifled my tears and befriended those around me. From then until now, I've wiped away the tears every time I entered the classroom at the beginning of the school year. Thinking about those moments, I feel childish, naive, and innocent. Not until now do I realize changes in myself, not just in appearance but also in character. There's a significant change in speech—I'm now more careful and polite, no longer abrupt. Attitude and gestures toward others have changed; I'm no longer as reserved as before, nor do I get unreasonably angry or easily irritated. I used to get upset at the slightest inconvenience, but that's no longer the case. My figure has become taller, more slender, and even more stylish in dressing. Hair is neatly groomed. What's more remarkable is that during class lectures, I find it easy to grasp the teachings of the teachers.

Back in the days, I used to doze off every time a teacher lectured. After reading the story of Saint Giong, one day I ate so much rice that I felt too full to sleep, and I got scolded by my mother. Oh, reminiscing about those ancient memories, why do I feel so foolish and innocent? And now, I reflect on the fact that I am truly grown up.

Through childhood memories, through clumsy and awkward moments, I acknowledge some level of maturity in my personality. Yet, I always aspire to strive for academic excellence to contribute to building a prosperous and strong homeland in the future.

7. Sample Essay 7

We all know that the process of growing up and developing as a human is a truly miraculous and fascinating journey. I, too, have felt myself growing up in a way, not just physically but also in my thoughts. I have indeed grown up.

My name is Ngan, and this year, I turned fourteen. Next year, I will proudly remove the red scarf to join the Ho Chi Minh Communist Youth Union. Just thinking about it makes me excited. Experiencing the gradual growth each day is strange. Entering first grade, I was a childish, and also the shortest in the class. Despite my parents buying milk and cheese for sufficient calcium to improve my modest height, it didn't make much difference. My thoughts at that time were very childish, whatever came to mind was said without much consideration for emotions. I was naive, just laughing and talking all day. I remember my parents saying my brain was developing at that age, so I questioned everything. Looking back, I realize I asked too many somewhat silly questions. Additionally, I was shy and timid, a secretly mischievous child. Slowly, I moved to second grade, then third, but my height only improved slightly, and thoughts and questions became more complex.

Moving on to fourth grade, then fifth, I learned what it meant to broaden my knowledge. I began to care and share joy and sorrow with friends and family, understanding the laws of nature. After five years in elementary school, I had to move on to a higher-ranking institution, secondary school. For me, it was a significant turning point. I started growing in height and physical fitness. My parents happily said, 'Our little girl is growing.' Now, I don't need someone to fetch things from high places, no need to drink excessive milk or tiptoe to write on the board. Moreover, I am very healthy. I can open a bottle by myself and even carry a stack of geography research books, my favorite subject. From this turning point, I learned many things. I became more proactive in studying, more confident, and adept at using language to express my arguments. I knew and understood words that comforted my parents when in pain. Then, after two years, I am currently in eighth grade. I understand the concept of studying more clearly, focusing more on books. Loving to read but only wanting to sit quietly with a desk lamp shining on my book and, finally, I have to bear the consequences for my eyes. I no longer have reservations about gender-specific subjects that I deemed inappropriate for my psyche when I was younger. I understand the laws set by human nature, becoming more mature. I know how to deduce and use money correctly and think much more maturely. I learned to save to buy study materials and references, understanding the value of money in today's society. I feel like a truly grown-up person.

I feel I have truly grown up, not just physically but also in my soul. Along with that, I will strive to study well to deserve being an exemplary student, the beloved grandchild of Uncle Ho.

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