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Draft a well-crafted proposal to submit to the local police or district People's Committee to express opinions.
I. Outline for Drafting a Proposal to Submit to the Local Police or District People's Committee to Express Opinions:
1. Introduction:
- National anthem, motto.
- Date of the proposal.
- Title of the proposal.
2. Main Content:
- Name of the competent state agency, organization, unit, individual.
- Self-introduction:
+ Name.
+ Date of birth.
+ Citizen identification number.
+ Permanent address:
+ Residence.
- State the problem to be resolved: Noisy karaoke establishment significantly affecting the neighborhood's activities.
- Provide detailed incident information:
+ Karaoke business location not meeting technical standards.
+ Incidents of altercations and disputes at the venue.
+ Specify details of the incidents as evidence.
- State the reason for the proposal:
+ Regular disturbances.
+ Significant impact on the communal activities of the area.
- Specific requests:
+ On behalf of households, submit the proposal.
+ Request competent authorities to investigate, confirm information, and propose suitable solutions.
- Declaration of the truthfulness of the information.
3. Conclusion:
- Express gratitude.
- Attach documents (if any).
- Signature of the proposer.
II. Sample Draft of a Proposal to Submit to the Local Police or District People's Committee to Express Opinions:
1. Proposal to Submit to the Local Police or District People's Committee to Express Opinions - Template 1:
SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF VIETNAM
Independence - Freedom - Happiness
Hanoi, June 17, 2023
REQUEST FORM
Subject: Negative Impact of HV Karaoke Bar on Residential Area
__________________
Dear: People's Committee of Trung Hoa Ward, Cau Giay District, Hanoi.
I am: Bui Trung Hung
Born in: 2010
Citizen ID Number: 03456789123
Permanent address: Trung Hoa Ward, Cau Giay District, Hanoi.
Residence: No. 5, Alley 123 Mac Thai Tong, Trung Hoa, Cau Giay, Hanoi.
I am writing this letter to request your esteemed office to address the issue: HV Karaoke Bar causing noise and disturbances to the residential area.
The specific incident is as follows: Recently, HV Karaoke Bar has been the site of frequent disputes, arguments, and even violent altercations. At 9:00 PM on June 14, 2023, an individual carrying a weapon entered the establishment, leading to a heated confrontation with the staff.
The reason for this recommendation letter: These violent incidents make the residential area noisy and unsafe, posing a significant danger to the residents, especially children.
Specific requests: On behalf of households in the residential area, I submit this recommendation letter, hoping that the Committee will provide a resolution and appropriate reminders to HV's business establishment.
I kindly request the Committee to review my recommendation letter and resolve it promptly. I assure you that the information provided is entirely accurate. If there are any errors, I am willing to take responsibility before the relevant state authorities and the legal system.
I express my gratitude!
Applicant
Hung
Hung Bui Trung
2. Proposal to Submit to the Local Police or District People's Committee to Express Opinions - Template 2:
SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF VIETNAM
Independence - Freedom - Happiness
Hanoi, June 17, 2023
REQUEST FORM
Subject: Disorder caused by ST Karaoke Bar in the residential area
__________________
Dear: Police Department in the Trung Van area, Nam Tu Liem District, Hanoi
I am: Ngo Thi Thu Huong
Born in: 2010
Citizen ID Number: 0567123890100
Permanent address: Trung Van Ward, Nam Tu Liem District, Hanoi
Residence: No. 48 To Huu Street, Trung Van Ward, Nam Tu Liem District, Hanoi
I am writing this letter to request your esteemed office to address the issue: ST Karaoke Bar causing disorder in the residential area.
The specific incident is as follows: Recently, in the residential area of Block 10, loud noises have become frequent. Upon investigation, the source of the noise is traced back to ST Karaoke Bar. During the evenings, the singing is exceptionally loud, accompanied by laughter and shouting.
The reason for submitting this recommendation letter: The noise from the karaoke bar significantly affects the rest and study time of everyone in the residential area.
Specific requests: On behalf of families in the residential area, I submit this recommendation letter. I hope that the Police Department and the District Committee can propose specific measures to remind this business unit.
I kindly request the Committee to review my recommendation letter and resolve it promptly. I assure you that the information provided is entirely accurate. If there are any errors, I am willing to take responsibility before the relevant state authorities and the legal system.
I express my gratitude!
Applicant
Huong
Ngo Thi Thu Huong
Write a Request Form, Report to the Commune People's Committee
3. Proposal to Submit to the Local Police or District People's Committee to Express Opinions - Template 3:
SOCIALIST REPUBLIC OF VIETNAM
Independence - Freedom - Happiness
Hanoi, June 17, 2023
REQUEST FORM
Subject: TT Karaoke Bar causing noise, disorder in the residential area
__________________
Dear: People's Committee of Yen Hoa Ward
I am: Ngo Thi Thanh Ha
Born in: 2010
Citizen ID Number: 0556612346789
Permanent address: Yen Hoa Ward, Cau Giay District, Hanoi
Residence: No. 9/45/100 Trung Kinh, Yen Hoa, Cau Giay, Hanoi
I am writing this letter to request your esteemed office to address the issue: TT Karaoke Bar causing noise, disorder in the residential area.
The specific incident is as follows: Recently, the infrastructure and equipment of TT Karaoke Bar seem to have deteriorated. The soundproofing is no longer effective, causing a noisy situation. On some days, there are even shouts, brawls, and violence.
The reason for submitting this recommendation letter: The current situation of TT Karaoke Bar is negatively impacting the daily lives of residents in the neighborhood.
Specific request: On behalf of the surrounding families, I write this letter hoping that the Committee will take measures to remind this business unit, restoring peace to the neighborhood.
I kindly request the Committee to review this recommendation letter and resolve it promptly. I assure you that the information provided is entirely truthful. If there are any inaccuracies, I am willing to take responsibility before the relevant state authorities and the law.
Thank you!
Applicant
Ha
Ngo Thi Thanh Ha
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Submitting recommendations to relevant authorities about a social issue requires a high level of accuracy. Therefore, please provide additional information and specific evidence to enhance persuasiveness. Feel free to refer to other 8th-grade sample essays on Mytour such as: Introducing the phenomenon of volcanoes; Writing a proposal to organize a movie viewing event ; Write a paragraph expressing what you like about pigeons; Write a paragraph about a proud tradition of the Vietnamese people.
