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I. Detailed Outline
II. Sample Writing
Structuring based on the excerpt depicting the spring outing of the sisters Thuy Kieu
I. Outline based on the excerpt depicting the spring outing of the sisters Thuy Kieu (Standard)
1. Introduction
- Narrate the spring excursion of the two sisters Thuy Van, Thuy Kieu
2. Body
- Scene 1: Describing the spring scenery
+ Birds flying, lush green grass, white pear blossoms
+ The fresh and vibrant scenery of spring.
- Scene 2: The atmosphere of the Qingming Festival
+ Activities of tomb sweeping
+ Qingming Festival market
+ Depicting ancient traditions.
- Scene 3: Farewell scene as dusk falls
+ Feeling nostalgic, regretful for the passing spring.
3. Conclusion
- Artistry of the poem, author's love for nature.
- Personal reflections.
II. Sample Writing Based on the Excerpt of a Spring Scene Recounting the Spring Outing of the Sisters Thuy Kieu (Standard)
The noble family had two exceptionally beautiful daughters who were at the age of blossoming, the elder being Thuy Kieu and the younger Thuy Van. Thuy Van, the younger sister, possessed a gentle and kind-hearted beauty. Thuy Kieu, the elder sister, had a captivating and graceful charm, not only surpassing in beauty but also being skilled in playing the renowned 'Silver Lute' melody.
Sixty days had passed since the arrival of spring, and now the Qingming Festival was here. The sky displayed its romantic beauty, tall and azure. The atmosphere seemed fresher, purer, no longer the freezing cold of winter but the warmth of spring instead. The gentle morning sunlight enveloped the scenery in a soft yet impressive hue...(Continued)
