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Prompt: Write a short paragraph describing your brother, sister, or yourself
Essay:
I deeply cherish my older sister and admire her greatly. She's not just obedient and polite but also diligent in her studies and caring towards me. I aspire to follow her footsteps, aiming to be a well-behaved and accomplished individual, making our parents proud of us both.
Sample Piece 2:
Our family welcomed a new member recently, my baby sister. She arrived last month, bringing boundless joy and happiness to our household. Her name is Phuong Mai, but due to her tender age, we affectionately call her Bong. Bong is incredibly sweet and adorable; since her birth, she seldom cries and often wears a bright smile. Despite not yet speaking, she giggles whenever we interact with her. Her rosy cheeks and chubby limbs are utterly endearing. I adore little Bong dearly; every day after school, I rush to embrace her. I'm determined to excel academically and behave impeccably, setting a positive example for my beloved sister.
Sample Piece 3:
Having an elder sister is the greatest blessing in my life, and I always look up to her as a role model to learn from and emulate. My sister's name is Chi, and she's currently a ninth-grade student at Minh Khai Middle School, class 9A. Despite being petite, she possesses a graceful stature and balanced proportions. Her fair complexion complements her beauty, accentuated by her charming smile and dimpled cheeks. Not only is she obedient and academically excellent, but she also assists our mother with household chores. Every year, she excels academically, earning the title of an outstanding student. She showers me with love and generosity, always sharing the best with me and including me in her outings. I deeply adore my elder sister and take immense pride in having such a wonderful sibling.
Sample Piece 4:
Having an elder brother feels like having a personal hero to protect and guide me. My brother recently celebrated his 10th birthday. His name is Gia Bao, and he's in fifth grade, class 5A, at Ban Mai Elementary School, the same school as me. Towering over me, he often accompanies me to school on our bicycle since our school is nearby. With his handsome face, fair skin, and charming smile, he's quite the heartthrob. He diligently helps our mother with household chores and excels academically, frequently receiving commendations during flag ceremonies. I take great pride in my elder brother and remind myself to strive for excellence inspired by him.
Alongside the sample compositions, Write a short paragraph describing a family member, such as a mother, grandmother, or former teacher. Students and teachers can refer to other sample compositions like Writing a short paragraph describing my family, Writing a short paragraph describing my mother, Writing a short paragraph describing my grandmother, Writing a short paragraph describing my former teacher...or the section on Descriptive writing methods.
