1. Essay 'The Unity of Theme in a Text' Number 4
Question 1: Which of the following most accurately describes the theme of the text "I Went to School"?
A. Describes the scene of the first day going to school
B. Depicts the teacher-student relationship on the first school day
C. Expresses the joy and pride of the narrator thinking about their old school
D. Illustrates the nervousness and awkwardness of the student on the first day of school
Answer:
Read the text "I Went to School" carefully, identify the main subject and issue being expressed, and select the most appropriate answer.
Question 2: When is a text considered to have thematic unity?
A. It only mentions one subject
B. It only conveys the identified theme without diverging to other subjects
C. It expresses attitudes and emotions toward the mentioned subject
D. It only mentions one subject or subjects closely related to each other
Answer:
Review the "Memorize" section in the textbook to understand when a text exhibits thematic unity and choose the suitable answer.
Question 3: Analyze the thematic unity of the following text with the requirements listed below.
THE COCONUT FOREST OF MY VILLAGE
There's no place like the Thao River in my village, where the coconut forest stretches endlessly. The coconut trunks rise straight to the sky, 20 to 30 meters tall, resilient against storms. The young coconuts shoot up while their leaves spread close to the ground. Their circular leaves form sharp points, and from a distance, they appear like a forest of hands waving. In the summer, they shimmer with sunlight like a sunrise. During spring, birds return in flocks. You can hear their cheerful songs, though the birds are hidden from sight. My house is nestled beneath the coconut trees. The school I attend is hidden in the coconut forest as well. Every day, I walk through the coconut grove to school. I can’t count how many coconut leaves form an umbrella over my head. On sunny days, the shade is refreshing. On rainy days, my head stays dry. Life in my village is intertwined with coconut trees. My father made me a broom from coconut leaves to sweep the house and yard. My mother stores seeds in coconut leaves to sow for the next season. My sister weaves coconut leaves into hats, mats, and baskets for export. In the evening, when herding cattle, we gather fallen coconuts to eat, rich and sweet.
My village has a saying:
No matter where one goes, rice wrapped in coconut leaves is from the Thao River.
Those from the Thao River always remember the coconut forest of their hometown.
(Nguyễn Thái Vận)
a) What is the subject and issue of the text? How are they presented in the order? Can this order be changed? Why or why not?
b) State the theme of the text.
c) How is this theme consistently presented throughout the text, from describing the coconut forest to the lives of the people? Provide evidence to support this.
d) Find words and sentences that represent the theme of the text.
Answer:
To analyze the thematic unity of the text, here are key points to consider:
- The text "The Coconut Forest of My Village" focuses on a clear subject, namely the coconut forest, which is central to the theme.
Evidence of thematic unity is found in the title, vocabulary related to coconuts, and the way all points in the text revolve around this theme.
- The ideas in the text are well-organized, following a clear structure. Consider how the introduction, body, and conclusion of the text logically unfold the main theme.
- Demonstrate how the text reflects the strong connection and affection the people of the Thao River have for the coconut forest of their hometown.
Question 4: Analyze the thematic unity of the following text:
THE PAPER CRANES
On July 16, 1945, the United States developed the atomic bomb. Less than two weeks later, the U.S. government decided to drop both bombs on Japan. These bombs, dropped on the cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, killed nearly half a million people. By 1951, nearly 100,000 more people in Hiroshima died from radiation exposure.
When Hiroshima was bombed, a two-year-old girl, Sadako Sasaki, survived, but she was exposed to radiation. Ten years later, she fell seriously ill. Lying in a hospital bed, she counted down her remaining days, believing in a legend that if she folded a thousand paper cranes and hung them around her room, she would recover. She quietly folded cranes. Upon hearing of her story, children from all over Japan and the world sent thousands of paper cranes to her. However, Sadako passed away when she had only finished 644 cranes.
Moved by her death, the students of Hiroshima donated money to build a memorial statue for the victims of the atomic bomb. At the top of the 9-meter statue is a girl holding up a paper crane. Below the statue, an inscription reads: "We wish for everlasting world peace."
(From "Pieces of World History")
Answer:
Refer to the method in Question 3.
Question 5: To analyze the sincere, pure emotions of the narrator in the text "I Went to School", one student suggests the following points:
a) Every fall, whenever I see children hiding under their mother’s umbrella on their first day of school, my heart feels excited and full of anticipation;
b) The road to school feels unfamiliar;
c) My mother holds my hand and leads me to school;
d) I want to carry my books like a real student;
e) The school yard seems larger, the building taller;
g) I feel afraid and alone among the crowd entering the classroom;
h) The headmaster and the young teacher warmly welcome the students.
Do you think the ideas and language need to be adjusted to better suit the assignment? If so, select and revise them accordingly.
Answer:
The assignment asks for an analysis of the sincere, pure emotions of the narrator in "I Went to School". Let’s consider if the suggested ideas and language serve this purpose and reflect the development of the narrator's emotions.
The student’s approach doesn’t fully maintain thematic unity; some ideas deviate from the topic (e.g., b, c, e, h).
Here’s a revised approach to maintain consistency with the theme:
a) Each fall, whenever I see children hiding under their mother’s umbrella on their first day of school, I feel excited and full of anticipation, remembering my own first day;
b) The road to school, once familiar, now seems strange, as I want to mimic the older students and be a real scholar;
c) The school, once familiar, now feels different: "the yard seems bigger, the building taller";
d) I feel a mix of fear and loneliness as I part from my mother and join the crowd heading to class;
e) I begin to understand the friendships around me, and the kind demeanor of the headmaster and teacher welcomes me.
Question 6: Below are sentences taken from two different paragraphs, deliberately scrambled. Please rearrange them to form two coherent paragraphs that maintain thematic unity.
a) Sometimes they are hidden away in trunks and chests.
b) Other times they are displayed in glass cabinets or crystal vases, clearly visible.
c) We cannot describe how beautiful our Vietnamese language is, just as we cannot describe the beauty of light or nature.
d) Patriotism is like these precious objects.
e) Perhaps our language is beautiful because the souls of the Vietnamese people are beautiful, and because our life and struggle have been noble and grand, which is beautiful.
g) Our Vietnamese language is beautiful, though it is difficult to express exactly how.
h) Our duty is to ensure these precious things are displayed for all to see.
i) But for us Vietnamese people, we naturally feel and appreciate the beauty of our language, in the folk songs and the works of great authors.
k) Our duty is to organize, lead, and encourage everyone to practice patriotism in their work and resistance.
Answer:
To create a coherent paragraph (or small text), ensure the sentences focus on one specific subject and are logically arranged. The sentences can be grouped into two themes: patriotism and the beauty of the Vietnamese language. The sentences within each theme should be grouped and rearranged.
- Group the sentences related to patriotism and those about the beauty of the Vietnamese language into two paragraphs.
- Arrange the sentences within each group to form a unified paragraph.

2. Preparation for the "Theme Unity in Texts" Analysis, Example 5

3. Composition on "The Unity of Theme in a Text" No. 1
Key Points to Understand
1.1. The theme of a text refers to the central topic and issue the author presents, which is raised through the specific content of the text.
1.2. A text exhibits thematic unity when it focuses solely on a defined theme and does not deviate to other topics. Thematic unity is closely connected to coherence and cohesion. A text that lacks coherence or cohesion fails to maintain thematic unity.
1.3. To write or comprehend a text effectively, the theme of the text must be clearly identified. The theme is either explicitly presented or can be inferred from the title, subheadings, the relationship between parts of the text, and key repeated words.
A. GUIDANCE FOR UNDERSTANDING THE LESSON
I. The Theme of the Text
– The theme is the main topic and issue that the text expresses.
– The concept of the topic helps readers identify what the text is about. The theme answers the question: What is the fundamental issue addressed in the text?
Example: The theme of Xuân Quỳnh's poem “The Noon Chicken Cry” is the deep love for family and homeland in the heart of a young soldier during the Vietnam War.
– Note: It is important to distinguish between the story and the theme.
Example: The story of “The Last Lesson” by Alphonse Daudet.
+ The story of “The Last Lesson” is told by a boy named Prăng, who recounts the final lesson by teacher Ha-men in the occupied region of Alsace.
+ The theme of the story is the sorrow of the people under foreign rule, the importance of loving one’s native language and homeland, and the realization that preserving one's language is key to freedom and independence.
The Main Idea vs. The Theme
– The main idea is a broader concept found in a segment of poetry or a scene in a story. A segment or part of a story does not constitute the theme on its own.
Example: In the poem “Crossing the Ngang Pass” by Bà Huyện Thanh Quan.
+ Main idea:
The first six lines describe the Ngang Pass at dusk.
The last four lines express the loneliness and sadness of the poet.
+ The theme of the poem is the melancholic and solitary mood of the traveler arriving at Ngang Pass at twilight.
– A work may have one theme, or it may have multiple themes (multi-themed).
Example:
The poem “Floating Cake” by Hồ Xuân Hương has the following themes:
+ (1) Pride in a traditional Vietnamese cake.
+ (2) Praise for the virtues of Vietnamese women (beauty, loyalty, etc.).
+ (3) Empathy for the struggles of women in ancient society.
Read the text “I Go to School” by Thanh Tịnh and answer the following questions:
a) In the text “I Go to School,” the author recalls his deep memories of his first school day as a child. This recollection evokes a feeling of joyful excitement that lingers in the author's heart.
b) The theme of the text “I Go to School” is: the memorable experience of the first day of school.
c) The theme of the text refers to the main topic and issue discussed in the text.
II. Thematic Unity of the Text
Question 1 (page 12, Vietnamese Language Textbook, Grade 8, Volume 1)
The text “I Go to School” recounts the author’s memories of his first school day.
- The title of the work: “I Go to School”
- Several sentences in the text refer to the memories of the first school day:
+ Every year, at the end of autumn...
+ How could I forget those pure feelings...
+ The surroundings around me seemed different because my heart was undergoing a great change: today, I go to school.
b) The text “I Go to School” is a reflection of the narrator’s memories about the “pure feelings” experienced on the first school day.
Question 2 (page 12, Vietnamese Language Textbook, Grade 8, Volume 1)
- The words demonstrate the deep emotions etched into the narrator’s heart for a lifetime:
+ Excitement, unforgettable, bustling, shy, solemn, serious, affectionate, innocent, naive, hesitant, teary-eyed...
- These words highlight the narrator’s mixed feelings of novelty and shyness as he walks to school with his mother and enters the classroom with his peers (note the analysis of how feelings differ before and during the first school day).
+ This road, which I have walked many times, feels strange today.
+ The environment around me is different; today, I go to school.
+ No more playing by the river, no more running in the fields.
+ I feel solemn.
+ Before this, school was a foreign place to me.
+ Just like me, my classmates are also nervous.
+ I feel lost...
Question 3 (page 12, Vietnamese Language Textbook, Grade 8, Volume 1)
Thematic unity in a text is the consistent expression of the defined theme throughout the text, without deviation to other topics. To ensure this unity, the title, subheadings, and numerous sentences in the text must reflect the central theme.
III. Practice
Question 1 (page 12, Vietnamese Language Textbook, Grade 8, Volume 1)
- The text above talks about the author's memories of his hometown’s cajeput forest. The paragraphs follow a logical order:
- General description of the beauty of the cajeput forest.
+ The dense cajeput forest.
- Description of the cajeput trees (trunks, leaves).
+ Cajeput trunks, buds, young trees, and leaves.
- Memories associated with the cajeput trees.
+ The house hidden under the cajeput leaves.
+ The school hidden within the cajeput forest.
+ Walking in the cajeput forest.
- Life in the village connected to the cajeput trees.
- Expressing longing for the cajeput trees.
The order is logical and should not be altered.
b) The theme of the text “My Hometown’s Cajeput Forest” is: My Hometown’s Cajeput Forest.
c) The theme is conveyed throughout the text, from the description of the cajeput forest to the daily life of the people. This is clearly reflected in the structure of the text.
Exercise 2 (page 14, Vietnamese Language Textbook, Grade 8, Volume 1)
The exercise asks students to find ideas that would make the essay off-topic in a piece arguing that literature enriches our love for our homeland. a) Literature makes our knowledge of our homeland more profound and enriched. b) Literature uses language as a medium of expression. c) Literature makes us proud of the beauty of our homeland and the noble traditions of our ancestors. d) Literature helps us love life and appreciate beauty. e) Literature fuels our hatred for invaders, traitors, and strengthens our resolve to protect the independence and freedom of our country. Ideas that would make the essay off-topic include: b, c, e.Question 3 (page 14, Vietnamese Language Textbook, Grade 8, Volume 1)
a) Each autumn, whenever I see children hiding under their mother’s umbrella for the first time going to school, my heart leaps with excitement and joy.
b) The road to school feels strange because the narrator is undergoing a significant internal change.
c) The mother lovingly holds my hand as we walk on the narrow village road.
d) I want to try to carry my books like a real student.
e) The schoolyard is packed with people.
g) The principal and the young teacher warmly welcome the students.
h) I feel fearful and lost as I enter the classroom among the crowd.

4. Essay on "The Consistency of the Theme in Text" No. 2
I. THEME OF THE TEXT
Read the text "I Go to School" by Thanh Tinh and answer the questions:
Answer question 1 (page 12, Literature 8, Volume 1):
What significant memories does the author recall from his childhood? What impressions does this reminiscence evoke in the author's mind?
Answer:
The author recalls the profound memories of his first day at school. This reminiscence brings up overwhelming memories of the journey to school, the Mĩ Lí school, the classroom, the principal, teachers, and new friends.
Answer question 2 (page 12, Literature 8, Volume 1):
The content of the previous answer is the theme of the text. Please state the theme of this text.
Answer:
The theme of the text: The profound memories of the first day at school.
The theme of a text is the central subject or issue that the text addresses and portrays.
Answer question 3 (page 12, Literature 8, Volume 1):
Based on the above analysis, what is the theme of the text?
Answer:
The theme of the text is the subject matter the text focuses on and presents.
II. CONSISTENCY OF THE THEME IN THE TEXT
Answer question 1 (page 12, Literature 8, Volume 1):
How do you know that the text "I Go to School" reflects the author’s memories of his first day at school?
Answer:
We can tell that the text "I Go to School" recalls the author’s memories of his first day at school from the title "I Go to School". The title suggests the text is about the experience of going to school.
Additionally, the recurring use of words like "I" and phrases related to going to school appear repeatedly throughout the text.
Every sentence in the text references memories of the first day at school.
- Today, I go to school.
- Every year, when autumn ends... my heart stirs with memories of that first day at school.
- How could I forget the innocence of those feelings?
- The two new notebooks in my hands already feel heavy.
- I clench my hands tightly, but one of the notebooks slips and tilts towards the ground...
Answer question 2 (page 12, Literature 8, Volume 1):
The text "I Go to School" focuses on recalling the nervous and unfamiliar feelings of the character on his first day at school.
Answer:
The text "I Go to School" emphasizes the pure, blooming emotions in the character's heart as he experiences his first day at school. These feelings are portrayed through various artistic details:
- On the way to school, everything feels unfamiliar, even though the path has been traveled many times. The character’s behavior changes as well: he is going to school, trying to act like a real student, not running through streams or playing in the fields anymore.
- On the school grounds, he senses the grandeur and cleanliness of the school, which looks majestic like a village temple, with a spacious yard, and he feels taller. "I became anxious and worried." When lining up for class, he experiences uncertainty, standing nervously next to his family, only daring to look halfway. He takes hesitant steps, wanting to fly but also afraid, feeling strangely weighed down and on the verge of tears.
- Inside the classroom, he feels distant from his mother. Previously, he could play all day without feeling homesick, but now, upon entering the class, he misses his mother and feels homesick.
These are the pure emotions that bloom in the character’s heart during his first day at school.
Artistic details and language devices in the text concentrate on illustrating and enhancing these feelings.
Answer question 3 (page 12, Literature 8, Volume 1):
Based on the analysis above, what is meant by the consistency of the theme in a text? How can we ensure this consistency?
Answer:
The consistency of the theme in a text means the theme is continuously emphasized and expressed without straying from it or shifting to a different theme. To ensure consistency, every part of the text, from the title to the headings and throughout the content, should reflect and express the theme.
III. EXERCISES
Answer question 1 (page 13, Literature 8, Volume 1):
Analyze the consistency of the theme in the text "My Village's Palm Forest" (page 13, Literature 8, Volume 1).
a. What subject does the text focus on, and what issue does it address? How are the paragraphs structured to present the subject and issue? Do you think the sequence could be changed? Why?
b. What is the theme of the text?
c. How is the theme reflected throughout the text, from the description of the palm forest to the life of the villagers? Provide evidence to support this.
Solution:
a. The text focuses on the palm forest of the author’s hometown and the longing for the palm trees. The paragraphs follow this structure:
- An overview of the beauty of the palm forest.
+ The palm forest is vast and undulating.
- Describing the shape of the palm trees (trunks, leaves).
+ Palm trunks, buds, young trees, palm leaves.
- Memories associated with the palm trees.
+ A house nestled beneath the palm trees.
+ A school hidden in the palm forest.
+ Walking through the palm trees.
- Life in the village is tied to the palm trees.
- Expressing the nostalgia for the palm trees.
The current structure is logical and should not be altered.
b. The theme of the text "My Village's Palm Forest" is: My village’s palm forest.
c. This theme is reflected throughout the text, from the description of the palm trees to the villagers’ lives. This is evident in the structure of the text.
Answer question 2 (page 13, Literature 8, Volume 1):
One student plans to write the following points in an essay to prove the argument "Literature enriches and deepens our love for our homeland":
a) Literature deepens our understanding of our homeland and nation.
b) Literature uses language as a medium of expression.
c) Literature makes us proud of the beauty of our homeland, the fine traditions of our ancestors.
d) Literature helps us love life and appreciate beauty.
e) Literature fuels our hatred for invaders and traitors and strengthens our resolve to protect the independence and freedom of our country.
Discuss with your group to determine which ideas might lead to a deviation from the topic.
Solution:
The ideas most likely to lead to a lack of consistency with the topic are: b and d.
Answer question 3 (page 13, Literature 8, Volume 1):
To analyze the passionate and pure emotions of the character "I" in the text "I Go to School", one student proposes the following points.
a) Every autumn, when seeing young children hiding under their mother’s hats on their first day at school, the heart feels anxious, excited, and stirred.
b) The road to school feels unfamiliar.
c) The mother holds the hand and leads to school.
d) The character tries to carry his books like a real student.
e) The schoolyard is spacious, and the school building seems taller.
g) He feels lost and afraid when entering the classroom.
h) The principal and teachers warmly welcome the students.
Discuss with your group to adjust the wording and ideas to closely match the requirements of the topic.
Solution:
The following adjustments could be made:
a) Each autumn, seeing the children hiding under their mother’s hats on their first day at school stirs the heart with excitement, joy, and anticipation.
b) The familiar road feels strange, and many things seem different.
c) The character strives to carry his books like a real student.
d) He feels the school, though frequently visited, has changed in many ways.
e) The classroom feels warm and familiar, bringing comfort to the new students.

5. Essay on "Unity of Theme in a Text" No. 3
Basic Knowledge
• The theme is the main subject or issue conveyed by the text.
• A text exhibits thematic unity when it only presents the determined theme, not deviating or shifting to another topic.
• To write or understand a text, it is necessary to identify the theme expressed in the title, headings, the relationships between sections of the text, and key repeated words and phrases.
Guidelines for preparing an essay on the unity of theme in a text in detail.
The Theme of the Text
Re-read the text "I Went to School" by Thanh Tinh and answer the following question:
1 - Page 12 Textbook
What significant childhood memories does the author recall? What impressions do these memories evoke in the author's heart?
Answer
In the text "I Went to School," the author recalls a deep childhood memory of their first day at school. This day left a profound emotional impact on the author, filled with deep and unforgettable feelings.
2 - Page 12 Textbook
The answer to the above question is the theme of the text. State the theme of this text.
Answer
The theme of the short story "I Went to School": the story vividly portrays the nervous and bewildered feelings of a young boy on his first day at school, as his mother takes him there. It reflects a deep, gentle, and serene love for home and childhood.
3 - Page 12 Textbook
From the above insights, can you determine: what is the theme of the text?
Answer
The theme of the text is the main issue expressed by the text itself.
Thematic Unity in the Text
If the lines of poetry, stanzas, or verses are the flesh of the work, then the theme is the soul of the poem or story. Without grasping the details of the text, it is hard to imagine its theme or ideological core. The various parts of the work are tightly connected to form the theme.
Thematic unity is an important feature that defines a text, distinguishing it from chaotic or incoherent texts. It is manifested in two areas:
– Content: the text must identify the topic (the subject of reflection), with the author's intention (expressing opinions, feelings, etc. to influence the reader's perception, actions, and emotions).
– Structural form: thematic unity is expressed through the title, headings, the relationships between sections, and key repeated words.
For example, in the short story "The Farewell of the Dolls" by Khanh Hoai, everything from the title to the plot is closely linked:
+ Thanh and Thuy cry throughout the night.
+ In the morning, Thanh sits alone in the garden, feeling sad, while his sister follows him.
+ The two siblings share their toys.
+ Thanh takes Thuy back to their old school, bidding farewell to their teacher and classmates.
+ Before leaving, Thuy gives Thanh both dolls... Thanh watches his sister's silhouette and cries.
Thus, the innocent and playful dolls are unaware of the sorrow of separation. The parents' separation leads to the separation of the children, their friends, and even the dolls.
In reality, Thanh and Thuy did not let the dolls be separated. This reveals their wish to stay together forever. This thought should make parents reflect.
Family holds immense significance for children. Protect the happiness of the family, never allow it to break, as this would lead to painful separations for the innocent, kind, and helpless children.
The theme of the story is:
+ The suffering of children caused by the family tragedy (parents separating).
+ The love between siblings and friends.
Re-read the text "I Went to School" by Thanh Tinh and answer the following questions:
a) To understand that "I Went to School" reflects the author's memories of their first day at school, focus on:
– Title: "I Went to School".
– Words and phrases in the text about the memories of the first day of school, such as:
+ Every year, as autumn arrives, the leaves fall, and the sky is filled with pale clouds, I feel a stirring nostalgia for my first day at school.
+ How could I forget those pure emotions, blossoming in my heart like fresh flowers smiling in the clear sky?
+ But every time I see shy little ones hiding under their mothers' hats, nervously walking to school for the first time, my heart swells with joy.
b) The text "I Went to School" focuses on recalling the nervousness and wonder of the protagonist on their first day of school:
– Words and phrases highlight the lasting emotions the protagonist feels throughout their life:
+ Every year... my heart stirs with excitement...
+ How could I forget...
+ But every time I see little ones... my heart fills with joy.
– Words, phrases, and details emphasize the protagonist's new and bewildered feelings when walking to school with their mother and entering the classroom with their classmates:
+ This path I had walked many times, but today it feels strange.
+ Everything around me seemed different because my heart was undergoing a great change: today, I am going to school.
+ I no longer played in the river, flying kites, or frolicking in the fields.
+ In my black, long jacket, I felt grown-up and serious.
+ A few days ago, I visited the school once. At that time, the school felt like a distant place... It seemed higher and cleaner than the houses in the village. But this time, it was different... the school felt charming and majestic.
+ Like me, the other students stood awkwardly beside their guardians.
+ After a loud drumbeat echoed through my heart... I felt so lonely.
c) From this analysis, we can understand:
– Thematic unity in the text is the clear expression of the determined theme, without straying or deviating into another topic.
– To ensure this unity, from the title to the headings and sentences, every part of the text reflects the theme.
Practice
1 - Page 13 Textbook
Analyze the thematic unity in the text "The Palm Forest of My Hometown" based on the following requirements (...)
Suggestions
a) The text addresses the topic of the palm forest in the author's hometown. The issue the author focuses on is the beauty of the palm forest and its connection to human life.
- The text consists of three parts:
+ Introduction (first sentence): Pride in the palm forest.
+ Body (next three paragraphs):
• Paragraph 1: The beauty of the palm tree.
• Paragraph 2: The author's bond with the palm tree.
• Paragraph 3: The connection between the palm tree and the lives of people in the Song Thao region.
+ Conclusion (remaining part): The strong affection the people of Song Thao have for the palm forest.
- This sequence in the text is essential as it follows a logical, coherent structure.
2 - Page 13 Textbook
A student plans to write the following points in their essay proving the argument: "Literature enriches and deepens our love for our homeland and country":
(...)
Discuss with the group to see which points might stray from the topic.
Answer
The student's outline includes:
a) Literature enriches our understanding of our homeland and country.
b) Literature uses language as a medium of expression.
c) Literature makes us proud of the beauty of our homeland, its traditions, and our ancestors.
d) Literature inspires us to love life and appreciate beauty.
e) Literature fuels our hatred for invaders and traitors, and strengthens our determination to defend our country's independence and freedom.
The points (b) and (e) are irrelevant because:
- The task is to demonstrate the effect of literature in cultivating love for our homeland.
- Point (b) focuses on the features of literary language.
- Point (e) diverges from the topic and expresses a different idea.
3 - Page 13 Textbook
To analyze the deep, clear emotions of the character "I" in the text "I Went to School," one student develops the following ideas:
(....)
Discuss with your peers to refine and adjust the words and ideas to better fit the requirements of the task.
Answer
The student's outline includes:
a) Every autumn, whenever I see little children hiding under their mother's hat, walking nervously to school for the first time, my heart feels excited and joyful.
b) The road to school feels unfamiliar.
c) My mother holds my hand and leads me to school.
d) I try to carry my books like a real student.
e) The schoolyard is vast, and the school looks tall.
g) I feel lost and lonely in the crowd entering the classroom.
h) The principal and the young teacher kindly welcome the students.
Review:
- The student's outline does not fully reflect the emotional progression of the character.
- Some points are not suitable, such as (c) and (h), which do not demonstrate the emotional development of the character.

