1. Sample Essay 4
If words are considered the essence of art, then poets are the true artists. They use words to paint beautiful pictures. Trần Đăng Khoa is one such artist. Through his poem 'Soldiers on the Island Sing Love Songs,' vivid landscapes and people come to life. The beauty of these images enhances the meaning of their sacred mission—guarding the remote island. The soldiers' portrayal in his work is both poetic and tough, reflecting the hardships of life on distant islands.
'The wind stings the face, the island constantly changes its shape
Sand and gravel fly like wild birds
Let it be! Come, comrades
We shall begin. The clouds and water have set the stage…'
Right from the opening lines, readers are drawn into the harshness of island life. Here, there is nothing but sun and wind, and the island is constantly reshaped by the tides. Amid this barren scene, wild birds take flight, adding to the desolation. Every day, the soldiers must endure these hardships, yet they grow accustomed to them, facing the challenges with calm resilience. Despite the bleak surroundings, the soldiers' strength and determination brighten the entire scene, which otherwise would be dominated by shades of yellow and blue. They remain optimistic, encouraging one another to press forward, no matter the hardships. To them, as long as they have 'comrades,' difficulties become trivial, and joy fills their lives. The comparison of clouds and water to a performance is a unique and fascinating metaphor from the poet.
'The stage is filled with bald heads
The audience scattered, all... soldiers with shaved heads
Freshwater is scarce, do we really need it for washing hair?
Young or old soldiers, all shave their heads with humor'
In moments of joy, we jokingly call the senior officer
Our distant relative, the bald monk'
Then quietly listen. Something is shimmering
It turns out the bald monk is singing a love song.'
In the following lines, the poet continues to paint the tough image of island life. It's not just the sand that makes life difficult for the soldiers, but the lack of freshwater, which seriously impacts their lives and health. All the soldiers, young and old, shave their heads to conserve water for personal hygiene. Freshwater is a precious and scarce resource here, and while mainlanders take it for granted, the islanders value every drop. To lighten the heavy atmosphere, the poet uses humor, describing the bald-headed soldiers as 'silly' and jokingly comparing them to monks. The camaraderie among the soldiers goes beyond being comrades—they are brothers facing hardship together, a family united by a common cause. In the final verses, the love song flows gently, like the waves of the sea, symbolizing the harmony between man and nature, the island's song blending with the rhythm of life.
'The melody is as wild as the sea breeze
But the lyrics are filled with longing and love
As night falls, we can no longer see each other
But it feels as though the island rocks are speaking…'
'On a moonlit night, I take you for a stroll
Your face gentle, the trees seem bright and green
We open our eyes to the distant sky, listening to the waves
And we hold hands, our hearts connected'
'Oh, my love, where are you from?
Are you tall or short? Who can say?
Who will come to us?
Looking around, only the dark clouds remain'
'Sing loud so the world knows
That we are people
Who love you more than the salty sea
Even if the love letters have no address yet…'
'Sing so the night knows
That our love shines within us'
'We stand firm on this distant island, braving the storms
Vietnam's homeland begins right here.'
The soldiers' voices, wild and untamed, match their warrior spirit. However, the melody they sing is one of love and longing, filled with optimism. Their song reflects the youthful desires of the soldiers, who, despite the challenges, still yearn for love and happiness. In the night, they forget the burdens of war and dream of a brighter future. The closing lines of the poem, 'We stand firm on this distant island, braving the storms / Vietnam's homeland begins right here,' echo like a solemn vow. They are committed to protecting every inch of this land, knowing that peace and unity begin from this distant island, where the sea meets the sky.
'The love song echoes loudly
But suddenly we turn around in surprise
On the edge of the sea, who are these people?
Oh, it turns out they're just the bald heads of comrades…'
After this emotional outpouring, the poet's words soar like wings. The sudden 'surprise' of seeing the comrades' bald heads brings them back to reality and their responsibilities. But reading these lines, the readers do not sense any discomfort from the soldiers. They are happy to make these sacrifices for their beloved homeland.
With simple yet melodious language, Trần Đăng Khoa uses vivid imagery to help readers understand life on these remote islands. These are people who are brave and full of spirit, deeply connected to their love for the country. Through his words, we can easily imagine the beauty and nobility of these soldiers' lives.

2. Sample Essay 5
A series of poems by Tran Dang Khoa about the sea, islands, and soldiers have been warmly received by readers, such as: "The Soldier's Love for the Sea", "Waiting for Rain on Sinh Ton Island", "My Comrade on Thuyen Chai Island", and here is the poem "Soldiers on the Island Sing Love Songs". This work adds a unique tone, both lively and humorous, yet deeply touching and reflective of the life of soldiers on distant islands. As a result, the piece has firmly anchored itself in people's hearts for decades.
The first stanza describes the harsh weather conditions in the Spratly Islands, where the hot sun and constant wind prevail. The makeshift stage built amidst the vast sea and sky must be quite unique and resilient to endure the fierce winds that lash at one's face. The stage is constructed with coral stones, and the wings are made from corrugated iron – all rudimentary, for no backdrop could withstand the howling winds of the islands:
Coral stones form the stage
A few iron sheets anchor the wings
Don't blame us for the makeshift setup
No backdrop can withstand the wind of the Spratlys.
But the most intriguing part lies in the second stanza. Here, the contrast between the harshness of nature and the courage and optimism of the soldiers is revealed. "The wind stings the face", "sand and gravel fly like wild birds", and the tides constantly change, causing the island's shape to constantly shift. Truly, it's a land full of challenges for the soldiers. However, they remain steadfast, romantic, and generous:
The wind stings the face, the island always changes shape
Sand and gravel fly like wild birds
Let it be! Comrades, let’s go!
We begin now. The clouds and water have opened the curtain...
The phrase "clouds and water open the curtain" presents the soldier’s image in a unique and playful way, capturing both their exterior and inner beauty. This helped Tran Dang Khoa create a poetic voice that is lighthearted yet deeply stirring for the reader.
The life on Spratly Island is tough and harsh, with "not even a tree can survive", so the soldiers must adapt to the environment. Water is scarce, so they mostly shave their heads to conserve water when washing. As a result, "both young and old soldiers are all bald and playful together". This image of the bald soldiers echoes the figure of the soldiers in Quang Dung's poem "Tay Tien", with its playful and rugged nature despite the harsh realities of life in the mountains of the northwest: "Tay Tien soldiers have no hair / The green army looks fearsome like tigers":
The stage is dotted with bald heads
The audience is scattered, all bald soldiers
Freshwater is rare, shall we use it to wash our hair?
Young soldiers, old soldiers, all bald and playful together.
They jokingly call each other "old monk", "distant relatives of the turtle Buddha", making the scene amusing as they sing love songs like monks! Indeed, it’s the harsh life amidst the endless sea and sky that makes the image of the Spratly soldiers so romantic and magnificent. They sing love songs on the island with all their emotions, yearning for a love that burns brightly, expressing their devotion and loyalty:
The melody is bold like the sea breeze
But the lyrics are filled with longing and love
As night falls, we can no longer see each other clearly
We mistake the island’s shell for words...
There are nights when the moon leads you for a walk
Your gentle face
The trees also look fresh and beautiful
Eyes wide open, listening to the sound of waves hitting the sky
And my hand finds yours.
The most playful part is the stanza with rhetorical questions about the soldier's love interest. They sing love songs, passionately loving and yearning, only through imagination. They picture their beloved in various ways: "Where are you from?" "Are you tall or short?" The most poignant moment is when they wonder which figure will come to them, a question that cuts deep into the silence, into their deep yearning as they gaze at the endless sea and sky:
Oh, my love, where are you from?
Are you tall or short? Who knows?
Which figure will come to us?
Looking around, it’s just the silence of water and sky.
Romantic and magnificent as they are, the true beauty of the soldiers lies in their bravery and dedication to their mission. They sing love songs to assert their loyal love and the sovereignty of the country. The poet doesn't say it directly, but it's a voice against war, a deeply humanist statement. Higher still, the image of the soldier standing amidst the vast sea and sky to protect the sacred sovereignty of the country represents a great, sacred responsibility that no other can compare to:
Let’s sing for the night to know
That love shines brightly in our hearts
We stand firm on the island amidst storms
Vietnam begins here.
At the end of the poem, the tone and poetic imagery remain vibrant, humorous, and full of the distinctive style of Tran Dang Khoa's poetry. The image of "all the bald heads" as the tide recedes is an unexpected and haunting conclusion. It's a moment of reflection, a spark of brilliance that brings forth beautiful verses:
The love song rises to a high note
Then suddenly, we look back in surprise
On the edge of the sea, why are there so many people?
Oh, it turns out they are all bald heads...

3. Reference Poem 1
Each of Tran Dang Khoa’s poems about the Spratly Islands is infused with the salty taste of the vast ocean, even carrying the blood and tears of generations of naval soldiers guarding the sky and islands. His poem "Soldiers on the Island Sing Love Songs" adds a distinctive tone—joyful, witty, yet deeply emotional and contemplative about the lives of soldiers on distant islands. This work has deeply touched readers' hearts, staying with them for decades.
The first stanza of the poem describes the harsh weather conditions of the Spratly Islands, where the sun and winds are relentless. The stage built amidst the vast sky and sea must be something special and resilient to endure the winds that lash at one’s face. The stage is built from coral stones, with wings made of corrugated iron—rudimentary at best, as no backdrop can withstand the fierce winds of the sea and sky.
But the most fascinating part is found in the second stanza. Here, the contrast between the harshness of nature and the courage and optimism of the soldiers becomes apparent. "The wind stings the face", "gravel and sand fly like wild birds", and the tides continuously shift, causing the island to constantly change shape. Indeed, it is a land full of trials and challenges for the soldiers. Yet, the soldiers remain steadfast, romantic, and generous.
With the phrase "clouds and water open the curtain", the image of the island soldier emerges in a unique and playful manner, reflecting both their outward appearance and their soulful nature, which helps Tran Dang Khoa create a poetic voice that is lighthearted yet evokes deep emotions in the reader. Life on Spratly Island is harsh and difficult, with "not even a tree can survive", so soldiers must adapt to the environment. With so many shortages, including fresh water, most of them shave their heads, leading to the sight of "young and old soldiers all bald and playful". They jokingly refer to each other as "monks" or "distant relatives of the turtle Buddha", turning the scene into something amusing as the "monks sing love songs" on the island!
Indeed, it is the harsh life amidst the endless sea and sky that makes the image of the Spratly soldiers so romantic and noble. They sing love songs on the island, filled with yearning for a burning love, expressing deep devotion and loyalty. The melody here is peculiar, "free-spirited like the sea breeze", yet the lyrics are deeply tender and heartfelt, full of longing and passion. It is this nonchalant, carefree tone that tugs at the heartstrings of readers, evoking deep emotions.
The most playful part of the poem is the rhetorical questions the soldiers ask about their love. They sing love songs, loving passionately and yearning deeply, only through their imagination. They picture their beloved in many different ways: "Where are you from?" "Are you tall or short?" The most poignant question is what figure will come to them, a question that echoes deeply within their hearts as they gaze out at the vast, silent sea and sky each night.
Romantic and noble as they are, the true beauty of these soldiers lies in their strength, endurance, and dedication to their cause. They sing love songs to affirm their loyalty and to assert the sovereignty of their country, fueled by the simple desires granted by nature. The poet doesn't fully articulate this, but it is an act of defiance against war, a profound humanistic statement. Above all, the image of the soldier standing amidst the vast sea and sky, defending the sacred sovereignty of the nation, represents a responsibility unlike any other—sacred and immeasurable.
At the poem’s end, the tone and imagery remain lively, witty, and playful, true to Tran Dang Khoa’s distinctive poetic style. The image of "all the bald heads" as the tide recedes creates an unexpected and haunting conclusion. It’s a moment of observation, a flash of brilliance, resulting in verses that resonate deeply with readers.

4. Reference Poem 2

5. Reference Paper 3
Trần Đăng Khoa is celebrated as a 'Poetic Prodigy' for his eloquent yet simple language and accessible imagery. His works deeply resonate with readers, and among them, 'Soldiers Singing Love Songs on the Island' stands out. The poem vividly portrays the life of soldiers living on a remote island, where every day is a struggle against the elements and the challenges of isolation.
The poem begins by immediately drawing the reader into the scene:
'Coral stones make up the stage'
'A few tin sheets form the wings.'
On the island, everything is scarce, and resources are minimal. Thus, the stage is hastily constructed from 'coral stones', and even the wings are made of tin sheets. In just these two lines, the poet powerfully conveys the tough reality of life on the island. The soldiers’ lives are further challenged by the harsh forces of nature:
'Do not blame us for this makeshift setup'
'No backdrop can withstand the storms of Truong Sa.'
The use of the intimate terms 'you' and 'we' underscores the strong bond between the speaker and the listener. The soldier speaks gently, as if sharing a personal, unimportant story, providing a soft explanation of their situation. At the same time, the words highlight the courage and resilience of those who face towering waves and fierce winds at sea.
Despite material shortages and the harshness of nature, the soldiers maintain a spirit of optimism:
'The wind stings our faces, the island keeps changing its form'
'Gravel and sand fly like wild birds'
'We don’t mind it. Comrades, let’s start'
'The clouds and water have already begun the show.'
Living in the vastness of the sea, the soldiers face countless hardships each day—from the winds that sting their faces to the wild sandstorms. But they remain undisturbed, as evidenced by the phrase 'We don’t mind it,' which reflects their calm, untroubled demeanor. Their troubles no longer matter. Instead, they focus on the unique 'stage' before them—the 'clouds and water' that form the backdrop for their performance, with fellow soldiers as the audience:
'The stage is crowded with bald-headed soldiers'
'The audience is scattered, all bald-headed soldiers'
'Freshwater is so rare, should we use it to wash our hair?'
'Old and young soldiers alike are all bald, joking together.'
The repetition of the word 'bald' three times in just four lines emphasizes the soldiers' distinctive appearance. Freshwater is so scarce on the island that they cannot afford to waste it on washing their hair. From the oldest to the youngest, every soldier agrees to shave their heads to conserve precious water. Trần Đăng Khoa uses a lighthearted tone to create a vivid and realistic portrayal of life on the island. Despite the hardships, the soldiers maintain a cheerful attitude, finding joy even in their struggles. They jokingly refer to the older soldiers as 'priests' and laugh about their 'snail Buddha' relatives.
In the vast expanse of sky and sea, the island soldiers are compared to 'priests' who sing a special song:
'The melodies wild like the sea wind'
'But the lyrics are filled only with longing and love.'
While the melody is wild and rebellious, like the sea wind, the lyrics are soft and full of yearning. This creates a unique love song, one that can only be found among the island soldiers. Following the rhythm, the soldiers sing songs filled with affection: 'There’s a moonlit night when I’ll take you for a walk,' 'My beloved, where are you?' Through these songs, they subtly express their deep feelings: 'We are the people/ Loving you faithfully, more than the salty sea/ Even though we don’t know who to send our love letters to.' These soldiers are portrayed as optimistic, playful, and full of pure, youthful longing for love, just like any other young men.
Moreover, the love song becomes a heartfelt tribute to their homeland:
'Let’s sing so the night will know'
'That love burns brightly in our hearts'
'We stand firm amidst the endless storms'
'Vietnam begins from here.'
Above all, their love for their country burns fiercely in their hearts, fueling their passion and giving them strength. Amidst the unrelenting waves of the sea, the soldiers stand resolute, protecting their homeland. Through this, they assert that the nation’s heart begins in these remote and sacred lands.
The poem ends with a striking image:
'Suddenly, I turn back in astonishment'
'On the edge of the sea, people seem to be gathering'
'Oh, it’s just bald-headed rocks.'
In keeping with the playful, upbeat tone of the rest of the poem, the final stanza portrays the moment when the tide recedes, revealing smooth, bald rocks emerging from the water. This vivid image reflects the harsh living conditions on the island.
Using clear and simple language and familiar imagery, Trần Đăng Khoa offers readers a concrete picture of life on a remote, harsh island. By skillfully employing literary devices such as similes ('The melodies wild like the sea wind') and repetition ('Let’s sing so'), the poet successfully brings to life the image of the island soldiers. They are optimistic, dream-filled individuals who are devoted to defending their homeland every day, every hour. This poem offers a heartfelt, warm portrayal of the soldiers’ lives and sacrifices.
Without any embellishments, 'Soldiers Singing Love Songs on the Island' is a lively, cheerful piece of poetry. Trần Đăng Khoa brilliantly explores the theme of soldier life, focusing on the simple and familiar. Through this work, we come to appreciate and respect the immense contributions of past generations.

