1. Outline 4: Appreciating the Poetic Elements in the Short Story 'Two Children'
I. Introduction
- Upon reading Thạch Lam's short stories, it's clear that his plots are simple, often lacking significant events or complexities. The characters in his stories don’t belong to the influential classes of society. However, his works manage to evoke deep emotions and remain memorable to readers. The subtle, enduring appeal of his writing is attributed to the poetic essence that permeates his prose.
- The short story 'Two Children' ('Nắng trong vườn' - 1938) is an example of a work rich in poetic quality.
II. Main Body
1. The Poetic Quality and Poetics in Short Stories:
- 'Poetic quality': This refers to the lyrical nature of writing, created by the blend of emotions, moods, and feelings with the beauty of their expression. It aims to evoke aesthetic and humanistic responses.
- Poetic quality in a short story: It's achieved when a writer skillfully conveys emotions, feelings, and the character's or author's relationship to the world using vivid, evocative details and a clear, expressive writing style that matches the rhythm of the emotional landscape.
- A short story (or prose work) is considered rich in poetry when the writer’s concern lies not in recounting events but in highlighting a state of life or the soul’s condition.
2. Poetic Quality in 'Two Children':
* Beauty of emotions, moods, and feelings:
- Liên, the main character, embodies the purity of a child’s soul, untouched by the harshness of life:
- Her delicate emotional responses to her surroundings: The scent of earth reminded her of her homeland; the quiet emptiness of the street touched her soul, as the sadness of the afternoon dusk filled her eyes with its shadow.
- At night, Liên delights in gazing at the starry sky, dreaming of the mythical stories of ducks following the God of Agriculture and the Milky Way.
- Her sensitivity allows her to perceive even the faintest signs in her environment: the glow of fireflies, the streams of light sneaking through the cracks, and the soft fall of flowers from the tree onto her shoulders.
- Her nostalgia for the past and her dreams about the passing train: The burdens of daily life cannot erase the longing for the past. Even with few memories left, her recollection of 'Hà Nội xa xăm' (distant Hanoi) remains bright and lively in her heart. These memories often resurface when she sees the train at night, evoking her dreams and creating a sense of detachment, as if she were living 'in a far-off place' beyond the train's light.
- Her empathy for the unfortunate: Despite living in poverty herself, Liên’s heart remains open to the suffering of others. She feels deep compassion for the poor children searching for scraps at the market, even though she has nothing to offer them. Her kindness extends to the old woman Thi, despite her fear of this odd character, showing her ability to care deeply for others.
- The personal voice of Thạch Lam hidden behind the character: It seems that Thạch Lam infused his own childhood experiences in Cẩm Giàng into this story. His affection for the character is evident, stemming from his deep empathy and connection to this age group. The writer’s perspective merges his own memories and emotions, blending realism and poetry in a way that endows the story with lasting emotional resonance.
* Beauty of artistic form:
- Thạch Lam creates a world of vivid, yet tenderly poetic imagery:
- His view on beauty: 'Beauty is all around us, hidden in every corner of the universe, even in the most ordinary things.'
- The setting of the story: A poor village street, straddling the border between the city and the countryside, yet the atmosphere feels more rural than urban.
- In this tranquil village, each image is imbued with poetry: The western sky 'red like burning fire,' the clouds 'tinged with the faint pink of a dying ember,' the sound of the drum marking the evening 'calling for dusk,' the summer night 'soft like velvet and scented with cool breezes,' the sky 'filled with thousands of twinkling stars,' the fireflies 'hovering close to the ground or weaving through tree branches,' the shadow of the noodle seller 'spreading wide across the ground.' These vivid images, sounds, and smells are ordinary yet rendered fresh and evocative by Thạch Lam's pen, turning them into the pulse of life, subtly infusing readers’ souls with beauty. Even the market’s refuse evokes nostalgic memories: 'The market had emptied, leaving behind remnants of peels and leaves. A damp, familiar smell rose from the ground, reminding Liên of her hometown.'
- The story includes carefully chosen details that reflect the delicate, almost ephemeral emotions of the characters: Liên sitting silently, her eyes filling with the shadow of dusk; her and her brother gazing at the stars, feeling them as part of an immense, mysterious universe; the children waiting for the train. Among these, the moment when they wait for the train stands out as the emotional climax, a blend of reality and desire. For the children, the train represents both the present and a dream, a fleeting moment that lingers in their hearts, symbolizing an aspiration for something beyond their reach.
- The narrative structure of 'Two Children' is deeply poetic:
- Thạch Lam's belief: 'The writer must delve deep into their own soul to uncover genuine emotions: to find the essence of humanity through their own heart.' Therefore, the true focus of the story is not events but the emotional and psychological states of the characters.
- The story doesn’t follow a traditional plot but unfolds through the emotional and reflective experiences of Liên, a girl at the cusp of adolescence. The narrative weaves a tapestry of present moments and past memories, with the image of the passing train acting as a thread that connects both realms. The story reveals the tender exploration of Liên's feelings: the sadness of dusk, the nostalgia for her childhood in Hanoi, and the fleeting, ungraspable longing in her heart.
- To convey all of this, Thạch Lam employs a distinctive lyrical writing style: a blend of simplicity, precision, and gentleness, capturing the subtle tremors of emotions in a calm and measured tone. His writing avoids grandiose expressions or hurried rhythms, instead opting for fluid, nuanced sentences that resonate slowly with readers. For example, when describing the melancholy beauty of the village street, Thạch Lam writes: 'Evening falls gently, with the distant croak of frogs carried on the soft breeze.' Or when describing the dark night after the train departs: 'The night wraps around, still and quiet, like the land of her homeland.'
- Thạch Lam creates a unique artistic language to reflect the subtle stirrings of life, presenting the quiet beauty of Liên’s soul: soft, serene, slow, delicate, and dreamlike. The words flow like a gentle silk ribbon, creating an impression that lingers in the reader’s mind. Thạch Lam’s prose is simple yet profound, his sentences often short, his rhythm slow, mirroring Liên's inner turmoil and unspoken desires. The train's brief flash of light symbolizes the fleeting moment of hope and longing in the children’s hearts, capturing a precious human truth.
III. Conclusion
- Thạch Lam’s 'Two Children' is a poetic masterpiece, blending the simplicity of daily life with the profound stirrings of the human soul. Through his writing, he captures the beauty of nature, life, and human goodness, presenting them with a delicate and tender perspective that resonates deeply with readers.
- Despite its lack of a complex social message, 'Two Children' offers readers a refreshing, soothing, and uplifting experience, as Nguyễn Tuân noted: 'It provides something light, sweet, and calming.' This is not only a testament to the unique qualities of the story but also to Thạch Lam's literary style, which has earned a lasting place in the hearts of readers.


2. Sample Outline 5: Analyzing the rural street scene in the short story "Hai dua tre"
I. Introduction
- Introduce the topic
- "Hai dua tre" by Thach Lam is a well-known short story loved by many readers. In this story, the portrayal of the rural street scene leaves a lasting impression on the audience, evoking memories of the atmosphere every time the story is mentioned.
II. Main Body
1. The rural street at dusk
- The rural street at dusk: melancholic, silent, peaceful, yet filled with familiar images, sounds, and subtle emotional undertones. It is a vivid portrayal of a tranquil rural setting, capturing the essence of rural life.
- Time: sunset, signaling the end of the day and the onset of night, a moment rich with feelings, especially a sense of sadness.
- Space: the quiet, serene atmosphere transitioning into night. The "colors" begin to fade, and "the shadows" seem to grow ominous, slowly creeping into everything: "the village bamboo grove darkens", "the shop grows dim, mosquitoes start to buzz"...
- Light: minimal but present, with a few "glimmers of light" unable to dispel the growing darkness, making the atmosphere feel expansive, eerie, and mysterious, both tangible and intangible.
- Sound: subdued: "the sound of a distant drum beat echoes" - sparse, slow, mournful, "the croaking of frogs, the buzzing of insects" - noises that seem lively but are faint, conveying emptiness, "the hum of mosquitoes" - a close sound signifying a stifling stillness, and the creaking of bamboo furniture, evoking decay. These sounds contribute to the overall sense of loneliness, monotony, and the fading of life, unintentionally invoking a profound sadness.
- Thus, the rural street at dusk sets a melancholic tone for the opening of the story. This mood permeates each sentence, each beat of the narrative.
- In a brief passage, the author repeats words like "evening", "night", "fading", and "sadness" multiple times. Each sentence seems to build upon the previous, creating a layered narrative: the drum beat signals evening => the red western sky => the darkening bamboo grove...
- The rhythm of the writing is slow, almost like a lullaby, transporting the reader to a distant time, echoing the spirit of Vietnamese poetry: "The evening sky fades, the sunset glows/ The sound of distant snails, the drum beats faint" (by Ba Huyen Thanh Quan). These lines evoke a sense of longing and nostalgia, characteristic of Vietnam’s rural soul in the early 20th century.
2. The rural street at night
- Through Lien's eyes, the rural street becomes even more desolate at night.
- Space: darkness has engulfed everything. The weak light from Chi Ti’s lantern fails to pierce the night. It appears repeatedly in the story (seven times), creating a haunting effect. This light symbolizes the poverty of the people in the street, a representation of the small, struggling lives within the darkness.
- Contrasting the dark is the faint light: flashes of light, dim spots, thin beams... This light belongs to a different world—the world of the rich. Even in this monotonous, dreary place, two worlds never meet: the world of the poor and the world of the wealthy. The contrast between light and darkness also reflects "the grim life of the rural street, where small lives are buried." The street seems like a forgotten part of life, with the weak light unable to dispel the night, but still offering a faint hope.
- The lives of the people continue in their monotonous cycle: the same actions, the same faces—Chi Ti arranges her goods, the noodle vendor stokes the fire, the blind man’s family sets up their bowl in front of them, with their thoughts and hopes unchanged. They dream of a brighter future, but it remains a distant, vague hope.
III. Conclusion
- Restate the issue:
- The haunting atmosphere is what the reader senses when visualizing the rural street through Thach Lam’s words. His portrayal is authentic, intimate, and poetic, leaving a lasting impression in the hearts of readers, especially those who cherish and explore modern Vietnamese literature.


3. Reference Outline #6: Analyzing the Humanitarian Message in 'Two Children'
I. Introduction
- Thạch Lam is regarded as one of the most skilled short story writers. His work, whether depicting the difficult and hopeless lives of rural peasants or urban poor, or highlighting the simple yet poetic aspects of life, is filled with profound humanity.
- 'Two Children' is a distinctive short story by Thạch Lam, published in the collection 'Sunshine in the Garden' (1938).
- The story is deeply humanitarian in nature.
II. Main Body
1. Humanitarian Value in the Author's Compassion for the Poor Residents of the Town:
- Thạch Lam expresses deep sympathy for the impoverished inhabitants:
- He describes “poor children from the market-side,” who scavenge for anything they can find among the merchants’ discarded items.
- He sympathizes with Tí and her child, who spend their days gathering crabs and small fish, and their nights selling tea under a banyan tree. Their life is filled with hardship, just like the faint light from their lantern—only able to illuminate a small area.
- He shows compassion for the elderly Thi, whose drunken laughter and unsteady movements contrast with her age, yet she continues to live despite the circumstances.
- He feels for the pho vendor, Bác Siêu, whose business struggles as pho is a luxury item and sales are minimal.
- He depicts the difficult life of the blind street musician, whose possessions consist of a zither and a begging bowl. Their lives are filled with instability and the constant threat of hunger and death.
- He sympathizes with Liên and her sister, whose small shop offers little in terms of goods, and whose customers are as poor as they are.
- Thạch Lam expresses sorrow for the repetitive, dull, and suffocating existence of the poor in this town.
2. Humanitarian Value in Thạch Lam's Discovery of the Virtues of the Poor Laborers:
- The people in this community are hardworking and dedicated: Tí and her child catch crabs and fish during the day, and sell tea at night despite poor sales. Liên and her sister take turns running the small shop. Bác Siêu works diligently selling pho...
- They are also caring and compassionate. Liên shows empathy for the poor children who collect the leftovers from the marketplace.
3. Humanitarian Value in the Writer's Reverence for the Hopes of the Poor for a Better Life:
- Thạch Lam shows respect for the dreams and memories of Liên and her sister, who long for the train’s lights and recall the brighter days when their family lived in Hanoi. The passing train seems to offer them a glimpse into a different world.
- The story encourages the residents of the town to wake up and strive for a better future.
III. Conclusion
- The humanitarian values are strongly conveyed in the story: compassion for the impoverished, discovering and portraying the virtues of the laborers, and respecting their hopes for a better life.
- Along with his other works, 'Two Children' showcases Thạch Lam’s literary brilliance and his exceptional ability to craft short stories before the August Revolution of 1945.


4. Reference Outline #7: Analyzing the Train-Waiting Scene in 'The Two Children'
I. Introduction
- General introduction to the author and work:
- Thạch Lam was a major writer of the Vietnamese Romantic literary movement from 1930 to 1945, exploring the inner worlds of characters with delicate, hazy emotions.
- Although 'The Two Children' lacks a conventional plot, the inner voice of the character Liên reveals the tragic lives of individuals and evokes deep emotions throughout the story.
- Overview of the train-waiting scene: This moment, where the two sisters wait for the train, encapsulates the profound and progressive artistic thoughts of Thạch Lam, highlighting his humanitarian and lyrical writing style.
II. Main Body
1. Why Liên and her sister stay awake to wait for the train
- Despite being extremely tired, Liên and her younger brother stay awake to wait for the train because:
- Liên’s mother asked her to wait for the train to sell goods
- However, Liên no longer expects anyone to come
- She stays awake simply to see the train as the final event of the night — it represents a change from the stagnant routine of daily life.
=> The awakening of her personal desires, a longing to witness something different from her own life.
2. The sisters before the train arrives
- An’s eyelids are heavy, but she still reminds her sister to wake her up when the train arrives
- They focus on the flickering light of the lamp, the distant train whistle echoing in the wind —> Their anticipation and excitement.
- Liên’s heart is still, filled with a vague, confused feeling
- Liên’s call to her younger sister: urgent, insistent —> She fears that they will miss it if they delay for even a moment.
- An “jumps up,” rubbing her eyes to wake fully —> Her quick, innocent, endearing action reflects both their excitement and sadness.
=> The excitement and anticipation of the train represent their hope for something brighter than the mundane life they lead.
3. The arrival of the train
- When the train finally arrives, Liên helps her younger brother stand up to watch as the train rushes by
- Even though the train only passes in a moment, Liên notices “the upper-class carriages crowded with people, with gold and silver gleaming” —> Liên sees a world completely different from her own.
- An asks: “The train is not as crowded today, is it, sister?” —> It seems like the sisters wait for the train every night.
- As they watch the train pass, Liên remains silent, her emotions stirred —> She is still caught up in the feelings the train evokes.
- Liên dreams of Hà Nội, a bright, distant city full of wealth and happiness... Her memories intensify her longing and dissatisfaction with her current life.
- The arrival of the train allows the two sisters to experience a brighter, more vibrant world beyond their everyday life.
=> The emotional, joyful, dreamy feelings that the train brings.
* Point 4: The sisters after the train departs
- The town with its few people “in the darkness, hoping for something brighter to come into their lives,” including Liên and An
- The two sisters watch as the last glimmer of light from the train fades into the distance
- Once the train leaves, they return to their dull, disheartened lives, and the brief joy they felt vanishes.
- Everything falls back into darkness, with only a faint light illuminating a small area as Liên falls into her restless, fleeting sleep.
=> Feelings of regret, contemplation, and the awareness of the impoverished and dull life in the small town.
* The significance of the train-waiting scene
- Pity for the lives of poverty and obscurity: The dream of a better life is small and simple, only a fleeting train passing through the dark night.
- It reflects a hopeful outlook on humanity: The characters hold onto a desire for change, no matter how vague or disjointed. This shows that even though the day and the scene may fade, their hearts and lives persist, especially for the children like Liên and An.
* Artistic Features
- The absence of a traditional plot structure
- A blend of romanticism and realism
- Internal monologue as a narrative technique
- Simple, concise language with rich visual qualities.
III. Conclusion
- Summary of the significance of the train-waiting scene.
- Personal reflections on the story.


5. Sample outline number 8: Character analysis of Liên
I. Introduction
- Thạch Lam is one of Vietnam's renowned writers before the August Revolution, known for his work "The Two Children".
- Through the character of Liên, the author successfully portrays the struggles of a poor, trapped life while highlighting the beauty of a soul that always strives for a brighter, better future.
II. Main Body
1. Author and work introduction
- Delving into the lives of nameless, meaningless people trapped in hopelessness, with intricate discoveries about their thoughts and inner lives.
- Liên is portrayed in a life that is gradually becoming dull, faded, and worn out, yet she possesses a sensitive, tender heart, filled with love and a yearning for a brighter future.
2. Character of Liên
*Reason for choosing Liên as the narrator's perspective:
- Having lived in Hanoi, which starkly contrasts with the quiet, dark, and poor rural town, Liên deeply understands the sadness, suffocation, and nostalgic longing for the past.
- As a young girl with a delicate and sensitive soul, she is easily moved by the suffering of others.
*Inner beauty:
- Liên is sensitive and perceptive, able to listen to even the smallest sounds of the countryside and appreciate the glowing sunset sky.
=> Sitting quietly among the black lacquered fruits, she feels a deep, poignant sadness in her heart.
- She is so connected to the land that she knows "the scent of the dust" by heart.
- She recognizes the simple beauty of her homeland, "a summer night as soft as velvet, with a breeze carrying a refreshing scent".
- Her compassionate heart is evident in her care for others:
- She sympathizes with the poor woman and her child who struggle to make ends meet by catching crabs and selling fish.
- Liên feels awkward witnessing the broken family of the blind man with an empty iron basin, and the child playing in the dirt.
- She extends her love to the elderly woman with dementia who receives a cup of alcohol from her.
- Always yearning for the future, striving toward the light:
- She searches for even the smallest glimmer of light in the dark town, hoping to reach it. The light symbolizes her pursuit of a better, brighter future.
- This desire for a brighter future is most evident in the train-waiting scene:
- Liên stays awake to wait for the train, as it represents the final activity of the night, carrying her concerns as a young girl.
- The passing train brings light, sound, and people that starkly contrast with the dimness and quiet of the town. When the train departs, it leaves behind silence, and the night falls dark again.
=> The passing train symbolizes a temporary solution, a dream for a better life. "All these people in the dark are waiting for something brighter to lift them from their poor, daily lives".
- Liên is successfully portrayed through intricate psychological analysis and lyrical storytelling, which captures the delicate world of her inner emotions. This evokes both sorrow and admiration from readers, as her soul, despite living in darkness, continues to dream.
III. Conclusion
The beautiful and meaningful life that Liên leads, filled with hopes for a better future, instills a sense of belief in the future in readers: that no matter the circumstances, one should always nurture their dreams. Thạch Lam's writing, therefore, serves as a "spiritual cleansing" of the human soul.


6. Sample Outline No. 1: Impressions of the Short Story 'The Two Children'
I. Introduction:
- Introduction to the short story 'The Two Children'
Example: 'The Two Children' is featured in the collection 'Sunlight in the Garden' and is considered one of the author’s most outstanding works. This story depicts the difficult life in a poor rural district, where people struggle and face hardship. The setting is the author's maternal hometown in 1945, which lends the story a unique and heartfelt tone. Let's explore the story further to understand the living conditions of people during that time.
II. Main Body:
1. The portrayal of life in the poor rural town
a. The natural scenery
- A quiet, peaceful village that evokes a sense of sadness
- The evening setting is intimate and familiar, yet filled with melancholy
b. The daily life of the people
- The town’s market is impoverished, desolate, and abandoned
- People live in dire conditions, enduring extreme hardship
- Their lives are bleak, offering no way out of their poverty
2. The scene of waiting for the train
a. The reason for waiting for the train:
- Waiting for the train has become a routine, a necessity for the people of the poor town
- The train represents their longing for a better life, a life of abundance and prosperity
b. The image of the train:
- The train symbolizes a better, brighter life that seems out of reach
- It brings a flicker of hope and represents the dreams of the people in the poor town
III. Conclusion:
- Share your reflections on the short story 'The Two Children'
Example: 'The Two Children' paints a picture of a poor, struggling countryside where life is extremely difficult. The hopes and dreams of the people, their belief in a better future, are embodied in the image of the passing train.


7. Sample Outline 2: Analysis of the Short Story "The Two Children"
I. Introduction: Brief introduction to the author and the work
- Introduction to Thach Lam: A prominent figure in the Tự lực văn đoàn literary group, known for his mastery in writing short stories. His works often bring clarity and peace to the soul.
- The Two Children is a melancholic short story that perfectly reflects this sentiment.
II. Main Body:
1. The Scene of the Village Street at Dusk
a. The natural scene of the village street at dusk:
- The entire scene is perceived through the eyes of Lien.
- Sounds:
- The sound of the autumn drum signaling the return of dusk, the croaking of frogs from the fields, and the buzzing of mosquitoes.
- Images and colors:
- "The western sky glowed red like fire."
- "The clouds were tinged with pink, like embers fading away."
- Lines: the row of bamboo trees stood out sharply against the sky.
- The rhythm was slow, rich in imagery and musicality.
⇒ The natural scene evokes a sense of sorrow, yet it also reveals Lien’s sensitive perception.
b. The scene of the market closing and the lives of the people in the village:
- The market closing:
- The market had long since emptied, and the noise had faded.
- All that remained were scraps: pomelo peels, tangerine skins, lychee leaves, and sugarcane pulp.
- People:
- A few poor children scavenging the leftover items from the market.
- The mother and daughter of Chi Ti, with their humble tea stall, practically deserted.
- The old lady Thi, slightly insane, buying alcohol late at night and disappearing into the dark.
- Bac Sieu with his noodle cart – a luxury in such a poor area.
- The blind musician’s family, living off their songs and the generosity of passersby.
⇒ The scene depicts the fading lives of the impoverished people, the decay, and desolation of the village street.
c. The emotional state of Lien:
- Her clear perception of the "distinct smell of the earth and her homeland".
- The deep sadness she feels about the end of the day and the lives of the people:
- Sympathy for the poor children, although she cannot help them.
- Compassion for Chi Ti’s mother, who struggles daily to make ends meet, and for the insane old lady Thi.
⇒ A sensitive and compassionate soul, Lien reflects Thach Lam’s own deep empathy for humanity.
2. The Scene of the Village Street at Midnight
a. The contrast between "darkness" and "light":
- The village is engulfed in darkness at night:
- "The streets and alleys gradually filled with darkness."
- "The road leading to the river, the market road, and the alleys were all shrouded in even deeper darkness."
⇒ Darkness pervades, overshadowing the lives of the people in the village.
- The rare, faint light: a sliver of light, a glow, a tiny flame, the dim light... representing the fragile lives of the impoverished villagers.
- The contrast between light and darkness.
⇒ The darkness dominates, with only fleeting, fragile light – a metaphor for the small, dim lives of the impoverished.
b. The daily life of the poor in the darkness:
- Repetitive, monotonous tasks
- Chi Ti cleaning her tea stall.
- Bac Sieu blowing fire for his noodle stall.
- The blind musician’s family "sitting on a tattered mat with a metal basin in front" and "playing a few notes in the silence".
- Lien and An guarding the tiny convenience store.
⇒ A dull, repetitive, and bleak existence with no way out.
- Their thoughts are also trapped in a loop: Hoping for the workers, the soldiers, or the passersby to stop by for tea or a smoke.
- They still dream: "These people, trapped in the darkness, hope for something brighter in their daily impoverished lives." Their dreams are vague and full of pity.
⇒ The tone of the story is slow and sorrowful, conveying Thach Lam’s deep sympathy for the poor.
3. The Train’s Image and Lien and An’s Anticipation for the Midnight Train
- Lien and An stay awake for two reasons:
- To sell goods.
- To watch the midnight train – the last event of the night.
- The first sign of the train's arrival:
- Lien notices the "bright blue flame".
- Both sisters hear the thundering sound of the train and the sharp squeal of the wheels.
- When the train arrives:
- The carriages are brightly lit, casting light all over the street.
- The upper-class carriages are filled with people, their silver and copper gleaming, with the windows shining brightly.
- When the train disappears into the night:
- It leaves behind glowing red embers on the tracks.
- The green light hanging from the last carriage fades away, disappearing beyond the bamboo grove.
⇒ The train’s appearance, with its loud sounds and bright lights, brings a sense of a different world to the poor village, the very world Lien has always longed for.
III. Conclusion: Impressions of the Short Story The Two Children
- A brief summary of the key artistic features that contributed to the success of the story.
- The Two Children is a representative work of Thach Lam’s literary style: combining realism and romanticism, with a clear and simple yet profound writing style.


8. Reference Outline #3: Analyzing the Contrast in "Two Children"
I. Introduction
- Introduce the author and the work
- State the issue for discussion
For example: The short stories of Thach Lam possess a unique style. These stories often lack complex plots, or feature simple plots, yet they remain captivating and provoke deep thoughts in the reader. "Two Children" is a quintessential example of Thach Lam's style. The work succeeds in employing the art of contrast.
II. Main Body
1. Define the concept of artistic contrast:
It is a technique deeply influenced by Romanticism. Writers often use this method to highlight sharp oppositions between phenomena or objects, thereby emphasizing the themes and ideas of the work.
2. Artistic contrast in "Two Children"
- Contrast between light and darkness (analysis with examples)
- The contrast between light and darkness is present from the start: the faint light of the sun, "like a dying ember," contrasted with the first signs of darkness, "the village’s bamboo grove darkening ahead."
- More haunting, however, is the interplay of light and darkness during the town’s night: "Lien sat silently next to a few black lacquered medicine bottles, her eyes gradually filled with the darkness and the sadness of the evening that seeped into her innocent soul."
- In this contrast of light and darkness, darkness dominates. The overwhelming darkness spreads across the land, while the light is weak and insufficient to drive it away.
- Thach Lam often describes darkness, but only in "Two Children" does it take full form and range: "The streets and alleys were filled with darkness," and the figures of workers cast long shadows, while the shadow of the pho seller sprawled across the ground, stretching to the fences at both ends of the alley.”
- The town was completely dark, with the road stretching endlessly to the river and the path through the market leading home, and the village alleys growing even darker. The night in the town was silent and full of darkness. In this world consumed by night, under the vast, secretive sky above the town, the light is feeble, dim, and flickering. The shop lights were only small gaps of light, spilling onto the rough streets, making the ground seem uneven, as some pebbles remained bright while others were shadowed. The pho seller’s lamp was a small, floating yellow dot in the darkness. The dim light from Lien and her sister’s lamp barely flickered through the bamboo slats... Especially, the image of Tí’s lantern, a small circle of light, illuminating a tiny patch of earth, appeared seven times in the story, evoking a haunting sense of the lives, fragile and dim, struggling in the dark, in the shadow of life’s struggles.
- Contrast between the past and present (analysis with examples)
- Note: The once prosperous past of Lien and An – in stark contrast with the dull, impoverished, and monotonous present lives of the two sisters and the townsfolk.
- The most intense display of contrast occurs at the end of the story, when the train passes through the town: darkness – light, past – present, present – future, silent – noisy, chaotic,...
3. The impact of artistic contrast
- It creates a romantic, poetic beauty within the work
=> Ultimately, it illustrates the monotonous, stagnant, and bleak lives of the townspeople, worn down by the darkness of life and yearning for a brighter, better future, thus reflecting the author’s deep compassion for these humble lives in the town.
III. Conclusion
The work demonstrates Thach Lam’s distinctive artistic style through his use of contrast.
The use of the contrasting technique allows Thach Lam to clearly convey his artistic thoughts and establish a unique signature in his short story writing.


