Buzz
Nhiệm vụ viết IELTS task 1
| Task 1: The bar chart compares the share of Britain’s population who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables in their daily meals. The data is categorised according to gender and age. |
Mẫu
Overall, apart from the 75+ group, women’s figures were consistently higher than men’s. In addition, those aged 56 to 65 were more likely to eat five or more helpings of fruits and vegetables than others.
The proportion of females aged 56 to 65 years who consumed five or more portions of fruits and vegetables was slightly higher than males of the same age, at around a quarter. Compared with over a fifth of 66-to-74-year-olds, the percentages of Britons aged 15 to 25 were 15% for males and 17% for females.
Meanwhile, the figure for those who were 26-40 years of age was similar to the 41-to-55 age group, with approximately 18% for men and 20% for women. Moreover, just under a fifth of those over 75 years old were reported consuming five or more portions of fruits and vegetables daily.
Từ vựng
- Helping (n): Phần ăn
Các cách khác nhau để nói về tuổi:
- Those aged 56 to 65
- 66-to-74-year-olds
- Those who were 26-40 years of age
- The 41-to-55 age group
- Those over 75 years old
Phân tích
- Ngoài nhóm 75+, số liệu của phụ nữ luôn cao hơn nam giới.
- Những người từ 56 đến 65 tuổi có nhiều khả năng ăn từ 5 khẩu phần trái cây và rau quả trở lên hơn những người khác.
- Số liệu của nam và nữ ở nhóm 75+ bằng nhau.
Nhiệm vụ viết IELTS task 2
| Task 2: Some people think that if a country is already rich, any addition in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. Do you agree or disagree? |
Mẫu
There is a current debate about whether a nation’s economic growth and increased affluence lead to greater individual happiness. I believe that economic prosperity plays a vital role in maintaining and improving individuals’ wellness, so my firm conviction is that the wealthier a nation is, the better it is.
First, governments have the capacity to make substantial investments in sustainable development, which can yield long-term benefits. Take renewable energy as example; it is regarded as a promising alternative to fossil fuels since it contributes to reducing greenhouse gas emissions and alleviating global warming. If the authorities cannot afford the infrastructure that generates enough solar, tidal power and the like to meet national energy demands, people are bound to live in highly polluted environments and face extreme climate events frequently.
Additionally, a nation's stable economic situation might alleviate the burden of overwork on its inhabitants. Many regions around the globe have embraced flexible work schedules, shorter workdays, and increased paid time off. This allows for more quality time with loved ones and for leisure activities, thus enhancing overall well-being.
Furthermore, wealthy countries have the capacity to allocate more resources towards emergency preparedness, which is crucial in providing necessary aid, such as food, medical assistance, and rescue operations, during unforeseen events, like pandemics and natural disasters. They can also provide developing and underdeveloped countries with humanitarian aid in such situations and assist them in economic development. This helps strengthen their diplomatic relations, reinforces their international political position, and ultimately maintains a lasting prosperous life for their people. Lastly, because today’s global economic climate is erratic, wealth accumulation is of greater importance for any government.
To sum up, increased economic prosperity can ensure a consistently high quality of life and enables affluent nations to support others, benefiting the global community as a whole.Linguistic Skills
- Extreme climate event (n): Sự kiện khí hậu cực đoan
- Emergency preparedness (n): Việc chuẩn bị cho trường hợp khẩn cấp
- Rescue operation (n): Hoạt động giải cứu
- Humanitarian aid (n): Viện trợ nhân đạo
- Diplomatic relation (n): Mối quan hệ ngoại giao
- International political position (n): Địa vị chính trị trên trường quốc tế
- Global economic climate (n): Tình hình kinh tế thế giới
- Wealth accumulation (n): Việc tích lũy của cải
Analysis
- Quan điểm: Không đồng ý
- Chính phủ có khả năng đầu tư vào sự phát triển bền vững. Ví dụ: Sản xuất năng lượng tái tạo.
- Điều kiện tài chính ổn định của một quốc gia giúp gỡ bỏ gánh nặng làm việc quá sức cho công dân của quốc gia đó.
- Các quốc gia giàu có có khả năng phân bổ nhiều nguồn lực hơn cho việc chuẩn bị cho trường hợp khẩn cấp.
- Họ cũng có thể cung cấp viện trợ nhân đạo cho các nước đang phát triển và kém phát triển trong những tình huống như vậy và hỗ trợ họ phát triển kinh tế.
- Do tình hình kinh tế thế giới biến động, việc tích lũy của cải có tầm quan trọng ngày càng lớn đối với bất kỳ chính phủ nào.
