[ACE THE TEST] Đề giải Writing ngày 29/10/2022 

Nhiệm vụ viết IELTS Task 1

Sample

The provided maps illustrate the projected evolution of the Norbiton industrial area over time.

Broadly speaking, the intention is to revamp the specified region significantly, aiming to create more residential facilities while eventually demolishing the existing factories.

Regarding the initial map, the town area currently appears relatively empty. It is bounded by a road to the north and a river to the south. Eight factories are distributed along the paths surrounding the central traffic roundabout in the town.

In the proposed plan, the traffic roundabout is slated to expand with two additional lanes. One of these lanes will cross the river directly to a new residential area on the northern side. Another branch is expected to be flanked by residences and shops to the west of the roundabout, while the third leads to a smaller roundabout along the original main route. The final branch will be situated on the eastern side of the main junction, providing access to the medical center in the northwest corner, a playground at the center of the feeder road, and a school at the end of the street.

Note:

The report on development maps will be structured as follows:

• Câu paraphrase
• Câu overall, phân tích rõ 2 mặt: mức độ phát triển và hướng phát triển.
• Body 1: Mô tả bản đồ số 1, theo mức chi tiết.
• Body 2: So sánh sự thay đổi trong bản đồ số 2 so với số 1, sử dụng cấu trúc câu phức để lấy điểm.

IELTS Writing Task 2

Sample

While companies have always strived to achieve profits, there is an increasing trend of discussions on the social responsibilities that businesses should uphold. In this essay, I will objectively analyze this situation before drawing a reasoned conclusion.

On the one hand, it is relatively comprehensible  that businesses need to generate revenue in order to thrive in a cutthroat environment. It makes sense that any business’s top priority should be to pay for its ongoing expenses, such as employee salaries and payments for buildings and utilities. In addition to these expenditures, businesses must also make upgrades and innovations in order to continue to be prosperous. Any worries about social obligations become irrelevant unless a firm is able to cover its expenses or meet the continually changing expectations of the customer base. In other words, a firm can only contribute positively to society only if revenues are sound.

The mission of a company should not, however, be to maximise revenue alone; instead, it should be to serve a greater social purpose. Owners and managers have a social responsibility to treat their employees fairly and not take advantage of them. To guarantee that employees have a high standard of living, they could, for instance, pay their staff a decent amount of income, based on the recommendation from the authorities. In addition, there is the concept of companies contributing a portion of their income to local charities, environmental causes, or educational programmes with the purpose of improving the general welfare of the local communities. Last but not least, rather than attempting to minimise their tax payments through accounting loopholes, corporate heads should be proactive in contributing to society by complying with their financial duty.

In summary, I maintain the viewpoint that businesses should accord equal consideration to their social responsibilities as they do to their financial objectives.

Vocab

• A cutthroat environment (n): môi trường cạnh tranh khốc liệt
• Prosperous (adj): thịnh vượng
• General welfare (n): phúc lợi xã hội
• Accounting loophole (n): kẽ hở về kế toán
• Financial duty (n): nghĩa vụ về tài chính

This essay discusses both aspects of the topic.

→ Phân tích:

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