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Nhiệm vụ viết IELTS task 1
Task 1: The plans below show the changes at a small theater in 2010 and 2012.
Example
The two maps delineate how a small theater changed after two years, starting in 2010. As shown in the picture, in just two years, the layout of the theater has been expanded to allow for more performance space and additional customer services, including the stage, a new hall, and a new restaurant.
To begin with, during this period, the most notable change was made to the northern side of the original theater. The stage was expanded towards there and made almost double in size, overtaking half of what was previously the media room, and a hall was added behind the far end of the theater. The media room was later moved to the left-hand side towards the north-west, and a shower room was also added to this area. Additionally, the storage room was then moved to the right-hand side towards the north-east.
In the southwest corner of the theater, immediately after the main entrance, there used to be an administrative office and a ticket booth. However, by 2012, this area had been expanded to accommodate a new restaurant and the administrative office. The café located on the right side of the theater in the southeast was transformed into the new ticket booth. Ultimately, the auditorium and main entrance remained unchanged.
Glossary
- the layout of (noun phrase): sự bố trí, bố cục
- performance space (noun phrase): không gian biểu diễn
- double in size (noun phrase)): gấp đôi kích thước
- overtaking half of
(verb phrase): chiếm một nửa (diện tích)
Analysis
Overall, in just two years, the theater underwent expansion to create additional performance space and enhance services for patrons, including a new stage, a new auditorium, and a new restaurant.
Lưu ý: Với một bài viết về sự thay đổi của bản đồ gia hai hoặc nhiều hơn các giai đoạn, chúng ta cần nhìn nhận và nêu bật được sự thay đổi chính yếu là liên quan đến các yếu tố và vị trí tương ứng; có thể hình dung về sự thay đổi liên quan tới mục đích sử dụng của các tiện ích hay cơ sở vật chất qua giai đoạn mới.
The approach taken in the article is to integrate the two time periods together in writing, rather than each paragraph focusing on a single period. This writing style appears more challenging because we must identify, evaluate, and select which factors and positions are 'the most significant or important changes'.
Qua đó, đa dạng và lồng ghép thông tin, cấu trúc ngữ pháp đa dạng: so sánh, tương phản … Một số cụm, cấu trúc và ngữ pháp nhằm tạo sự đa dạng: “to allow for more performance space”; “the most notable change”; “expanded towards”; “what was previously”; “behind the far end of”; “whereas by later in”; “expanded to make way for”.
IELTS Writing task 2
Task 2: Many companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages of this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Example
It is widely acknowledged that corporate sponsorship in sports as a means of promoting their brands has become a complex and multifaceted issue that affects us all. While it is true that this practice is beneficial for the sports industry, it is equally essential to consider certain drawbacks it carries.
Proponents of companies sponsoring sports contend that it can bring a number of positive aspects. They assert that the majority of sports organizations overwhelmingly depend on the financial backing from corporate entities. Training, infrastructure development, and athlete salaries are essential costs that a sports organization must cover.
Typically, sports institutions in a developing country require sponsorship from either domestic or foreign companies for their operational activities. Moreover, sponsorship results in increased visibility for athletes. When companies invest in sports, they allocate substantial resources to marketing campaigns, which frequently feature athletes endorsing their products or services. Thus, their professions and financial stability are strengthened.
Nevertheless, those arguing against corporate sponsorship in sports point out some weaknesses. One con is the possibility that sporting events will become excessively saturated with advertisements and branding. As companies support sports associations, they often, in turn, make a wide range of commercials on varied advertising platforms; for instance, social media including Facebook or TikTok, or other traditional channels like TV programs or periodicals.
If this is excessive, commercialization can compromise the integrity and sanctity of sports as the focus shifts from athletic performance to promotional activities. A further disadvantage is that sponsorship can result in partial outcomes and create conflicts of interest. Sponsoring companies may exert influence over competition outcomes or favor certain athletes, jeopardizing the integrity of the sporting event. This is unethical and undermines the spirit of genuine sportsmanship.
In conclusion, sports sponsorship has its merits and demerits. From my perspective, achieving a balanced approach is crucial. Sports organizations should thoroughly assess the potential long-term implications before making sponsorship decisions to uphold the fundamental principles and ethical standards that define the sports world.
Glossary
- corporate sponsorship (noun phrase): tài trợ của doanh nghiệp
- multifaceted issue (noun phrase): vấn đề đa diện, nhiều mặt
- financial backing (noun phrase): sự hỗ trợ tài chính
- increased visibility (noun phrase): tăng khả năng hiện thị (ý nói về sự phổ biến đối với công chúng)
- financial stability (noun phrase): sự ổn định tài chính
- saturated (adj): quá tải, quá mức
- commercialization (n): thương mại hoá
- the integrity and sanctity (noun phrase): tính toàn vẹn/chính trực và tôn nghiêm
- conflicts of interest (noun phrase): xung đột lợi ịch
- jeopardizing (gerund): đe doạ, gây nguy hiểm, tổn hại
- unethical (adj): phi đạo đức
Analysis
Viewpoint: While it is true that corporate investment brings benefits to the sports industry, considering certain drawbacks is equally necessary.
Benefits:
- Sự hỗ trợ tài chính từ các tổ chức doanh nghiệp giúp các tổ chức thể thao có kinh phí để tổ chức và vận hành: huấn luyện, cơ sở vật chất, thù lao cho vận động viên.
- Mang đến sự tăng cường hiển thị (độ phổ biến) cho các vận động viên → sự nghiệp lẫn tài chính được ổn định, đảm bảo.
Drawbacks:
- Quá tải với các quảng cáo và thương hiệu → dễ dẫn đến thương mại hoá, mất đi tính toàn vẹn của thể thao đúng nghĩa.
- Tạo ra sự không công bằng (tác động) tới kết quả và mâu thuẫn lợi ích → suy yếu tinh thần thể thao chính trực.
