[ACE THE TEST] Giải đề IELTS Writing ngày 03/03/2022 – Hướng dẫn chi tiết

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IELTS Writing Task 1

Example

The graph illustrates the percentage of people using different sources to access news from 1995 to a projection for 2025.

In general, while internet usage increased significantly over the study period, other forms remained stagnant. These trends are expected to continue in the future. 

In 1995, approximately two-thirds of the population watched news on television. Despite a slight increase to 58% in 2010, this figure then dropped to 55% in 2020 and is projected to decrease to 50% by 2025. Similarly, newspaper readership and radio listenership, which started around 55% in 1995, declined to about 30% by 2020. It is anticipated that newspaper readership will remain at 30% and radio listenership at 23% by 2025. 

While the internet was accessible to only a small fraction of the population in 1995 and attracted just a small percentage by 2000, its popularity grew significantly over the next two decades, with 40% of the population using it by 2020. This figure is expected to rise to nearly 55% by 2025, surpassing newspapers as the most popular source of news. 

• Persist (v): duy trì, kéo dài
• Downward trajectory (n): xu hướng suy giảm
• Surpass (v): vượt qua, chiếm ưu thế

Phân tích

Có thể thấy rõ rằng Internet là phương tiện phát triển mạnh nhất trong khi các phương tiện truyền thông khác đều có chiều hướng giảm dần. 

Đoạn body đầu tiên phân tích sự thay đổi của TV, báo và radio, đặc biệt tập trung vào những năm 2020, 2025, vì những năm này có sự thay đổi đáng kể. Không cần mô tả tất cả các mốc thời gian nếu không có điểm nổi bật, đặc biệt là đối với các bài viết lâu năm. Các động từ được sử dụng: tăng, giảm dần sau đó, đạt đúng một nửa, theo xu hướng giảm dần, giảm,…

Đoạn cuối cùng mô tả sự đối lập của Internet so với 3 hình thức còn lại, vượt qua báo để trở thành phương tiện truyền thông có tỷ lệ sử dụng cao nhất.

IELTS Writing Task 2

Example

With the progression of technology and the economy in the twenty-first century, there are an increasing number of challenges that governments and the public are concerned about. While some argue that health should be the top priority for academics, I believe a range of other issues also require attention. This essay will delve deeper into the topic and explain my viewpoint.

On one hand, health issues pose one of the most serious challenges that the world and experts must address due to their severity. The number of affected individuals is growing daily, exacerbated by the rapid spread of the Covid-19 pandemic, which directly impacts human health. Due to its widespread nature, not only individual countries but also international communities must develop strategies to safeguard people from this dangerous virus. If left unresolved, the contagion could spread further, causing severe global repercussions.

On the other hand, as the Covid-19 pandemic continues to escalate, there is a growing number of conflicts that the world must manage and diffuse before they escalate further. Focusing solely on one issue may lead to neglect of others, resulting in serious consequences such as social unrest and environmental pollution. For instance, Russia's conflict with Ukraine has implications for commodities like gold and fuel. In my opinion, all issues should be addressed impartially and without discrimination.

In conclusion, while healthcare remains a critical concern that policymakers and experts must prioritize, other issues should not be overlooked. I am cautiously optimistic that many of these challenges can be resolved in the near future, leading to a better society and improved living conditions.

• Proliferation (n): sự gia tăng bùng nổ
• Disseminate (v): công bố, phân tích
• Escalate (v): (tình huống) leo thang căng thẳng
• To be cautiously optimistic (adj): lạc quan với sự duy lý 

Analysis

Introducing indirectly, leading into the issue by highlighting the current situation (There are many social issues that need to be addressed), then presenting the two aspects requiring analysis, while also stating that these two aspects are equally important. 

The first paragraph outlines the impact of the Covid-19 pandemic on health, causing many deaths and severely affecting the economic and social life of humans; From there, the opinion is drawn that investing in healthcare is a top priority of modern science. However, the second paragraph also emphasizes the urgency of other issues such as environment, war, poverty,… hence they also need attention.