[ACE THE TEST] Giải đề IELTS Writing ngày 27/01/2024

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Nhiệm vụ viết IELTS số 1

The graph below shows the production levels of main kinds of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000.

(Biểu đồ dưới đây cho thấy mức sản xuất các loại nhiên liệu chính ở Anh từ năm 1981 đến năm 2000.)

Bước 1: Lập kế hoạch cho bài luận 

Tổng quan: Nhìn chung, mặc dù có sự biến động đáng kể, dầu mỏ vẫn là nguồn năng lượng quan trọng nhất trong quốc gia này. Hơn nữa, mặc dù việc sử dụng than đá đã giảm tương đối ổn định, khí tự nhiên lại có sự gia tăng sản xuất đáng kể trong 6 năm cuối kỳ.

Bước 2: Hoàn thiện bài luận

Biểu đồ đường mô tả lượng tiêu thụ ba nguồn nhiên liệu trong một quốc gia châu Âu từ năm 1981 đến 2000. 

In general, despite considerable fluctuations, petroleum remained the primary energy source in this nation. Furthermore, while coal consumption decreased steadily, natural gas production showed a significant increase in the last six years of the period.

Concerning petroleum, approximately 100 tonnes of this energy source were used in 1981. Subsequently, consumption increased notably to 130 tonnes in 1983. Petroleum then stabilized in consumption between 1983-1987 and again from 1995-2000, with a decline to just under 100 tonnes between 1989-1992.

Turning to coal and natural gas, coal consumption remained at 80 tonnes in the initial three years of the period, then dropped to about 50 tonnes. Despite a recovery to just over 70 tonnes two years later, coal consumption declined steadily to nearly 40 tonnes by 2000. In contrast, natural gas consumption plateaued at 40 tonnes for most of the period before rising significantly to just over 80 tonnes in the final year.

IELTS Writing task 2

In some countries, university students live at home, while in other countries university students go to other cities rather than live with their family. Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

(Ở một số quốc gia, sinh viên đại học sống ở nhà, trong khi ở các quốc gia khác, sinh viên đại học đi đến các thành phố khác thay vì sống cùng gia đình. Bạn có nghĩ lợi ích của việc sống xa nhà lớn hơn những bất lợi không?)

Bước 1: Phân tích đề 

• Từ khoá: university students, live at home, go to other cities, rather than live with their family
• Câu hỏi: Ở đây đề bài yêu cầu thí sinh đưa ra quan điểm thuận lợi hay bất lợi nhiều hơn, và ở đây Mytour/ cô sẽ chỉ ra thuận lợi nhiều hơn nhé. 

Bước 2: Lập kế hoạch cho bài luận

Bước 3: Hoàn thành bài luận

Despite some students in higher education still living with their families, others choose to move to urban areas, living some distance from their hometown. Although there are drawbacks, I believe that such a move brings more benefits overall.

On one hand, the disadvantages of living far from family are clear. Firstly, separation from loved ones, particularly close family and friends, can be emotionally challenging. Most students have spent their entire lives receiving unconditional love, care, and affection from their parents, so suddenly living independently can lead to feelings of loneliness, homesickness, and sadness. Secondly, being away from their support network can be difficult during tough times, such as illness, personal crises, or emergencies, as the absence of close family and friends can mean a lack of emotional and practical support. Finally, relocating often incurs significant financial costs, including transportation, accommodation, and setting up a new household, which can be burdensome, especially on a tight budget.

On the other hand, I believe that these disadvantages are outweighed by the benefits students gain. While living independently can lead to feelings of isolation, modern digital communication tools make it easy to stay in touch with family through voice and video calls, overcoming geographical barriers and reducing feelings of loneliness. Furthermore, while students living independently must fend for themselves during tough times, this fosters self-reliance, self-sufficiency, and the development of crucial life skills, all of which are invaluable for their future. Additionally, moving to urban areas can offer access to better career opportunities, higher-paying jobs, and more prospects for growth, enabling individuals to advance their careers and gain valuable experiences that may be scarce in their rural hometowns.

In summary, despite the challenges faced by students who choose to live away from their families in other cities, these issues can generally be resolved and are outweighed by the significant benefits gained.

Bước 4: Từ vựng

Cloze Exercise:

• 1. The loss of a loved one can be ___________.
• 2. Economic recessions often lead to ___________ for many families.
• 3. The financial responsibilities of living on one’s own can be ___________ for students.
• 4. The journey toward ___________ involves learning to rely on oneself.
• 5. Moving to a city provides better ___________ for career advancement.

Solutions:

• 1. Emotionally taxing
• 2. Personal crises
• 3. Burdensome
• 4. Self-sufficiency
• 5. Growth prospects