Bài mẫu IELTS Writing – Đề thi vào ngày 7 tháng 5 năm 2016

Chủ đề

Mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 Band 7

There are two main factors leading to the decision of delaying childbirth. The first one is because people have the propensity for prioritizing their careers over taking parental roles. Especially in the US and other developed countries, not only men but also women want to stabilize their finance before becoming parents so as to provide their kids with sufficient living condition for their future development. Another explanation for this is that many modern individuals have adopted a fear of taking unwanted custody due to the recent alarming rate of divorce. It is because premature marriages have become common, which usually goes with many couples’ doubt of their marital harmony, deterring their early desire for raising a child. There would be, consequently, fewer kids growing up without fatherhood or motherhood.

Nonetheless, it is crucial not to disregard the downsides. A proliferation of couples adhering to this trend could negatively impact the demographic structure, potentially leading to an aging workforce in the future and impeding long-term social progress. Moreover, it may increase the risk of infertility in older mothers and jeopardize the mental and physical well-being of newborns. Down Syndrome serves as a prime example of the challenges these children may face.

To conclude, the prioritization of careers and concerns regarding potential single-parent responsibilities are perceived as the primary reasons behind delayed parenthood, and I firmly believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

(279 words)

Từ vựng theo chủ đề

1. Delaying having children: Trì hoãn sinh con
2. The inclination to prioritize careers over parental roles: Phương hướng ưu tiên nghề nghiệp hơn vai trò làm cha mẹ
3. Developed fear of unwanted custody: Phát triển nỗi sợ bị phải nuôi con không mong muốn
4. Harmonious marriage: Hôn nhân hòa thuận
5. The chance of infertility: Khả năng vô sinh
6. Prioritizing career and contemplating single-parent responsibility: Ưu tiên nghề nghiệp và đắn đo về trách nhiệm làm cha/mẹ đơn thân