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Vì vậy, Mytour gửi đến bạn bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1, 2 về chủ đề Biến đổi về tỷ lệ tội phạm & Giảm bạo lực trên phương tiện truyền thông, hãy khám phá ngay bên dưới bài viết nhé!
Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1
| Task 1: The graph shows he changing rates of crime in the New Port city from 2003-2012 |
Mẫu
Biểu đồ đường miêu tả sự biến đổi trong các loại tội phạm ở trung tâm thành phố Newport, từ năm 2003 đến năm 2012.
Nói chung, ở trung tâm thành phố Newport, tỷ lệ đột nhập giảm đáng kể, trong khi tỷ lệ cướp giữ ổn định và số vụ trộm xe tăng lên suốt thời kỳ được khảo sát.
To begin with, in 2003, burglary (about 3400 cases) outnumbered car theft (approximately 2800) and robbery at just above 500. Over the next four years, the figures for burglary decreased substantially to around only 1000 cases and from 2007 onwards, there were more cases of car theft than burglary, which is followed by robbery.
Car theft was a consistent level of crime from 2003 to 2005, at around 2600 cases. After fluctuations between 2000 and 2600, the figures for this crime experienced a slight drop to under 2500 case in 2012. The number of robberies peaked in 2005 at 900, then dropped to 500 in 2008. This then climbed back to 700 in the following two years before remaining at that level by the end of the period.
- Outnumber (v): vượt qua
- Consistent (adj): đồng nhất
IELTS Writing Task 2
| Task 2: Government should control the amount of violence in film and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in society. Do you agree or disagree? |
Mẫu
Violence in media has become more and more prevalent as the years go by, primarily as a result of overexposure to daily media. The government, in my opinion, should take appropriate action to curb violence displayed on these publications, and the reasons for which would be explained in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, research has associated exposure to media violence with a variety of physical and mental health problems for children and adolescents, including aggressive and violent behavior, bullying, desensitization to violence, fear, depression, nightmares, and sleep disturbances. For example, the HBO series Game of Thrones features a lot of action sequences and gruesome killing that the entire globe enjoys, yet the overconsumption of these contents may abolish the ability to discriminate between fantasy and reality among young viewers.
Furthermore, there is a plethora of platforms, which are not governed by any state agency, displaying adult-only contents nowadays. Horrifying bloodshedding movie scenes are favored by most people due to the sensationalism, along with the adrenaline surge they bring about. Though adding creeping adult content into PG-13 movies and film makers are able to sell more tickets to their movie thus in turn earn more money, this is proved to increase the risk of violent behavior on the viewer’s side while growing up in an environment filled with such problem. The society would be put under direct threat by youngsters who are constantly exposed to female harassment, kidnapping or acid assaults.
Tóm lại, phần lớn các hành vi bạo lực xảy ra do ảnh hưởng từ phim ảnh và truyền hình và tôi tin rằng việc thực hiện các biện pháp pháp lý đáng kể để kiểm soát nội dung truyền thông sẽ thúc đẩy việc giảm hành vi bạo lực của mọi người.- Prevalent (adj): phổ biến
- Overexposure (n): sự tiếp xúc quá mức
- Desensitization to violence (n): sự vô cảm khi tiếp xúc với bạo lực quá nhiều
- Sleep disturbance (n): sự rối loạn giấc ngủ
- Gruesome (adj): khủng khiếp
- Discriminate (v): phân biệt
- A plethora of s.th: rất nhiều
- Blood-shedding movie scene (n): cảnh phim đổ máu
- Sensationalism (n): sự giật gân
- Direct threat (n): mối đe doạ trực tiếp
- Female harassment (n): sự quấy rối phụ nữ
- Kidnapping (n): bắt cóc
- Acid assault (n): tấn công bằng a-xít
