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Đề bài IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 26/09/2020
Analyze the topic
- Type of task: Line chart
- Subjects: urban and rural population structure trends, and structure by different age groups from 1950 to 2040
- Tenses used: past perfect, predictive structures (future)
Detailed outline
Đoạn tổng quan: Nêu ra các đặc điểm nổi bật nhất của biểu đồ
- First sentence: The urban and rural population increased significantly during the period from 1950 to 2000, with the proportion of the population aged 16-65 being the largest and experiencing the greatest increase compared to the figures of the other two age groups.
- Second sentence: These trends are expected to continue until 2040.
Thân bài 1: Mô tả biểu đồ đường đầu tiên
Mô tả đường tổng dân số
- The total population was at 10% in 1950, increasing to about 26% in the next 50 years and predicted to rise to 43% by 2040.
Mô tả hai xu hướng dân số thành thị và nông thôn
- In 1950, the urban and rural populations were 8% and 2.5% respectively, and in the second half of the 20th century, the rural figure continued to lag behind urban figures with a significant margin of 8%.
- By 2040, this demographic gap will widen further with one-third of the national population living in cities, 20% higher than the figure in rural areas.
Thân bài 2: Mô tả biểu đồ đường thứ hai
Năm 1950 – 2000
- In 1950, 7% of the national population were aged 16-65, while the figures for the 0-15 and over 65 age groups were 4.5% and 2.5% respectively.
- The population aged 16-65 tripled by the year 2000, while the proportions of the elderly and children and adolescents tended to increase similarly, reaching 7% and 5% respectively.
Dự đoán năm 2040
- 27.5% of the population is projected to be aged 16-65 by 2040, much higher than the corresponding projected figures for the elderly and children aged 0-15, which are 9% and 5.5% respectively.
Sample reference article
Overall, the total urban and rural population witnessed a significant increase between 1950 and 2000 while the proportion of people aged 16-65 years was largest and showed the most dramatic growth compared to the figures for the other two age groups. These trends are expected to continue in 2040.
The overall population was at 10% in 1950, reaching approximately 26% over the following five decades, and is anticipated to climb to 43% by 2040. In the initial year, 7% of the country's population fell within the 16-65 age bracket, with figures for the 0-15 and over-65 groups standing at 4.5% and 2.5% respectively. Subsequently, the population of individuals aged 16-65 more than tripled by 2000, while the percentages of elderly individuals and children and adolescents exhibited a similar upward trajectory, reaching 7% and 5% respectively. Projections suggest that 27.5% of the population will belong to the 16-65 age group in 2040, significantly surpassing the expected figures for the elderly and 0-15 age groups, which stand at 9% and 5.5% respectively.
In 1950, urban and rural populations accounted for 8% and 2.5% respectively, with rural areas consistently trailing urban areas by a significant 8% margin throughout the latter half of the 20th century. By 2040, this demographic disparity is projected to widen further, with one-third of the nation's population residing in urban centers, a figure over 20% higher than that of rural areas.
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Glossary
- demographic information: thông tin dân số học
- the latter half of the 20th century: phần sau của thế kỷ 20
- maintained a significant gap compared to something: duy trì khoảng cách đáng kể so với cái gì đó
- population disparity: sự chênh lệch dân số
- anticipated figures for: dữ liệu dự kiến
