Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 band 7 cho kỳ thi ngày 11/06/2022

Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 11/06/2022

Dàn bài

Bài mẫu

The given maps illustrate the future plans for the transformation of an industrial area into a new residential area.

Overall, the industrial area will undergo several major changes, with the renovation and addition of several buildings and facilities.

At present, an entrance and reception building are located on the northern boundary of the site. The future plans show that this will be replaced by a much larger building, housing three 2-bedroom homes and a large communal garden area. Meanwhile, the factory which currently sits on the eastern side of the block will be replaced by an apartment building and parking area.

On the western side of the site, the future plans show a 3-bedroom and a 4-bedroom house to be built where the packing and storage buildings currently stand. Additionally, the large office block and canteen building on the southern boundary of the site will be replaced by parking garages.

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Các cụm từ dùng để diễn tả vị trí:

• on the northern boundary of the site 

• on the eastern side of the block

• on the western side of the site

• on the southern boundary of the site

• currently sit/stand

Từ vựng

• transformation (n): sự chuyển đổi

• residential area (np): khu dân cư

• undergo (v): trải qua

• house (v): chứa

Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 vào ngày 11/06/2022

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Các đề bài liên quan

• Some people believe that pop stars are being paid too much money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• Nowadays, celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievement, and this is a bad example to adolescents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Phân tích đề

Phạm vi chủ đề: Giới giải trí - Thu nhập của ca sĩ nhạc trẻ và nhạc cổ điển

Nhiệm vụ: Thảo luận về hai quan điểm và đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân

Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề:

• Pop stars: Ngôi sao nhạc pop, nhạc trẻ

• Classical music performers: Nghệ sĩ nhạc cổ điển

Dàn bài

Các ý tưởng khác có thể sử dụng

Bài mẫu

These days, there is some discussion about whether pop stars should be paid better than classical musicians. Although both views are reasonable, I think it is fair that pop singers earn more money than classical musicians.

On the one hand, there are several reasons why classical musicians should earn better salaries than pop stars. Firstly, because classical music is generally listened to by society's more influential and wealthy classes, classical music composers are put under a lot of pressure. Some spend their entire lives learning to master a particular musical instrument or style of music. In addition, classical music tends to be performed live on stage, and therefore musicians need to give a perfect performance every time, which could be very stressful. Pop stars, however, usually only sing along with music that is played from a recording, or can retake a recording when in the studio.

On the other hand, most pop stars need to spend countless hours in the studio every year in order to record new music, followed by many weeks and months touring the world performing and promoting their music to their fans. Although this may sound like an amazing lifestyle to some, many pop stars become exhausted and burnout early in their career or turn to drugs and alcohol in order to cope with the stress. Furthermore, pop stars are generally also expected to act as role models for the youth. This responsibility requires them to monitor their actions and  behaviour in order to set positive examples for young people to follow, which can also add to their stress. Lastly, most pop stars have short-lived careers as pop music continues to evolve and new stars replace the old.

In conclusion, while both pop stars and classical musicians both have certain stresses in their careers, I believe that pop stars are more worthy of a higher income because of their duty to be role models, and the uncertainty of their career span.

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Từ vựng và cụm từ

• hàng giờ không đếm xuể: vô số giờ đồng hồ

• du lịch khắp thế giới: đi lưu diễn vòng quanh thế giới

• kiệt sức: quá tải, quá sức

• mô hình cần phải noi theo: hình mẫu

• theo dõi hành vi của họ: kiểm soát hành vi 

• đặt ra những ví dụ tích cực: đặt ra những tấm gương tích cực

• sự nghiệp ngắn hạn: tuổi nghề ngắn hạn

• tầng lớp có ảnh hưởng và giàu có: tầng lớp giàu có và có ảnh hưởng

• biểu diễn trực tiếp trên sân khấu: trình diễn trực tiếp trên sân khấu