Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 vào ngày 28/05/2022
Mở bài | Giới thiệu nội dung chính của biểu đồ |
Đoạn tổng quát (Overview) |
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Thân bài 1 | Số liệu của black and white TV
Số liệu của color TV: có đặc điểm tương tự |
Thân bài 2 | Số liệu của salary: bắt đầu với số liệu nhỏ, nhưng sau đó dần dần tăng lên và cuối cùng tăng mạnh |
Mẫu bài IELTS Writing Task 1
The line chart illustrates the average monthly income of Japanese people and the cost of black and white, and color TVs over a 30-year period.
Overall, while the average salary witnessed an upward trend over time, the opposite was true for the price of both types of televisions. In addition, for most of the period, the price of a television was higher than the average monthly salary of people in Japan.
In 1970, a black and white television cost around 110,000 Yen. Ten years later, the cost saw a sharp decline and then continued to drop gradually to about 20,000 Yen by 2000. The price of color TVs followed a similar pattern, costing about 100,000 Yen when first appearing, and then significantly declining over the following years to just under 50,000 Yen by the end of the period.
Meanwhile, the average Japanese monthly salary at the start of the period (20,000 Yen) was significantly lower than the prices of a black and white television (110,000 Yen). The figure grew gradually from 1970 to 2000, when it overtook the price of black and white televisions, before soaring to nearly 70,000 Yen in 2000.
Band điểm ước lượng
TR: 8 | CC: 8 | LR: 8 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 8.0 |
Các cấu trúc để mô tả số liệu / vị trí / thứ tự
The cost saw a sharp decline and then continued to drop gradually to about 20,000 Yen.
The price of color TVs followed a similar pattern, costing about 100,000 Yen.
The figure grew gradually from 1953 to 1973, when it overtook the price of black and white televisions, before soaring to nearly 70,000 Yen in 1983.
Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 vào ngày 28/05/2022
Các chủ đề có liên quan
The world's natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do?
Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that human beings are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Phân tích đề bài
Phạm vi chủ đề: Vấn đề bảo vệ môi trường
Nhiệm vụ: Bàn luận cả hai khía cạnh và đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân
Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề: human activities: hoạt động cần thiết của con người
Cấu trúc chi tiết
Các ý kiến khác có thể áp dụng
Đã quá muộn để hành động | Con người vẫn có thể khắc phục tình hình |
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Mẫu bài
In recent years, environmental conservation has attracted a lot of public attention. Many people believe that humanity can no longer reverse those negative impacts on plants and animals, whereas others argue that mankind still stands a chance to improve the situation. From my perspective, though there have been numerous negative consequences, it is not too late to make a difference.
On the one hand, the serious damages which humans have caused to nature are likely to be irreversible. Firstly, it is a bitter truth that bringing extinct species back from the dead is essentially impossible. Taking advantage of natural resources found in animal habitats, humans have continually cut down trees, contaminating soil and water in order to satisfy their needs. As a consequence, the woods, rainforests and other natural areas are shrinking day by day, which in turn causes more havoc for many animal and plant species. Moreover, climate science has proved that the fight against environmental disaster is already lost. Despite people's best efforts, global temperatures still climb gradually, and extreme weather conditions have regularly hit the headlines in recent years.
On the other hand, I tend to support the idea that mankind can still take effective measures to alleviate those serious outcomes. Firstly, more and more individuals are becoming aware of the situation and adapting their lifestyles. Thanks to technological advancements, electric cars have become quite prominent these days, which significantly helps people to cut down their carbon footprint. Additionally, recycling and using environmentally friendly products is becoming a more popular trend on social media these days. Furthermore, various non-governmental organizations are raising funds and public awareness in order to prevent habitat destruction and protect endangered species. For instance, the World Wildlife Fund has attracted over 5 million global supporters and has continued to hold various projects to conserve the environment since 1961.
In conclusion, although there are many hardships to face on this journey to conserve and protect the environment, I believe that people should not lose their hope and learn from mistakes of the past, and insist on sustainable development.
Điểm số ước lượng
TR: 8 | CC: 8 | LR: 8 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 8.0 |
Từ vựng và cụm từ
environmental conservation: bảo vệ môi trường
Irreversible (adj): không thể khắc phục
bitter truth: sự thật phũ phàng
extreme weather conditions: thiên tai
hit the headlines: thu hút nhiều chú ý từ dư luận
alleviate (v): giảm thiểu, khắc phục
carbon footprint: lượng khí thải carbon
habitat destruction: phá hoại môi trường tự nhiên
endangered species: giống loài có nguy cơ tuyệt chủng
Bài tập thực hành
“Toxic chemicals and non-biodegradable waste are causing severe pollution of soil and water.”
Bài 2: Tạo bài luận cho đề sau đây:
“The rapid depletion of the world's natural resources poses significant dangers. What measures should be taken?”