Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 với band điểm 7 cho kỳ thi vào ngày 04/06/2022

Giải bài thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 04/06/2022

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Bài mẫu để tham khảo

The four pie charts compare the distribution of male and female employment in three different sectors in country A and country B.

Overall, the service sector takes the greatest proportion of workers in both countries. In addition, while industry attracts the least employees in country A, agriculture is the least popular sector in country B.

In country A, it can be seen that more or less than a half of the employees work in the service sector, with 56% of male workers and 49% of female workers. In agriculture, less males are involved in this sector (29%), compared to females with 43%. Industry has the lowest number of workers of both genders.

In country B, the figures for male and female employment in service-related jobs are the most significant, at 65% and 89%, respectively. On the contrary, male and female laborers only account for a small proportion in agriculture (3% compared to 1%). Industry sector seems to be preferred by more men (32%) than women (11%).

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• The service sector takes the greatest proportion of workers in both countries.

• Less males are involved in this sector (29%), compared to females with 43%.

• Male and female laborers only account for a small proportion in agriculture (3% compared to 1%)

Giải đề IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 04/06/2022

Các đề bài liên quan

• Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

• Some people think that current environmental issues are global problems and should therefore be dealt with by the government while others believe that these problems can only be tackled by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Phân tích đề

• Phạm vi chủ đề: Vấn đề thoái hóa môi trường

• Nhiệm vụ: Trả lời các câu hỏi trong đề bài

  • Nguyên nhân nào dẫn đến sự thoái hóa môi trường?

  • Ai là đối tượng phải chịu trách nhiệm?

• Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề: Environmental damage: sự phá hoại, làm suy thoái môi trường

Dàn bài

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Mẫu bài tham khảo

Nowadays, environmental degradation has been a burning issue among various nations. In my point of view, this pressing matter results from certain dynamic socio-economic activities, and both the government and each individual should be accountable for any changes in the ecosystem.

Overall, there are numerous underlying causes of environmental degradation. Firstly, overpopulation is growing so rapidly that it has been causing large-scale effects. According to the planet's tension in its carrying capacity, lack of available housing gives rise to massive deforestation to satisfy the need for proper accommodation. Besides, industrialization and other manufacturing activities are also some major economic factors leading to environmental degradation. Numerous large industries are pumping untreated sewage into rivers and oceans, which significantly gives rise to water, air and land contamination.

Humans impact the natural habitat in many ways and I suppose that both the authorities and civilians need to be in charge of their action on the ecosystem. First and foremost, the government might be able to possess the widest approach in different societal and economic aspects by taking the lead using effective policies in order to form the sustainable base of environmental conservation. For instance, the ministry could levy a tax on fuel consumption so as to limit energy use and lessen emissions. Additionally, the public are also responsible for their environmental input, and it is imperative that people should be self-aware enough to voluntarily join hands in the journey of preservation. In fact, there has been a growing trend to use biodegradable products such as paper bags instead of plastic items.

Tóm lại, sự suy thoái của hệ sinh thái là kết quả của vô số hoạt động của con người trong các khía cạnh xã hội và kinh tế. Do đó, cả chính phủ và những người thông thường đều có phần trách nhiệm riêng và không ai nên đổ lỗi cho người khác chỉ để tránh trách nhiệm.

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Đề xuất từ vựng

• suy thoái môi trường: environmental degradation

• vấn đề nóng: burning issue

• kinh tế - xã hội (adj): socio-economic

• diện rộng (adj)  /ˌlɑːrdʒˈskeɪl/: large-scale

• chặt phá rừng (n)  /diːˌfɔːr.əˈsteɪ.ʃən/: Deforestation

• nước thải (n)  /ˈsuː.ɪdʒ/: Sewage

• dẫn đầu: take the lead

• tự phân hủy (adj) /ˌbaɪ.oʊ.dɪˈɡreɪ.də.bəl/: biodegradable