Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 1 và Task 2 với điểm số 7 từ kỳ thi vào ngày 16/06/2022

Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 1 ngày 16/06/2022

Đề bài: The table shows data about what people in the UK thought the government should increase spending on.

Dàn bài

Bài mẫu

The table shows information on what people in the UK thought the government should allocate more money towards. The data is given in terms of age and gender.

Overall, while the majority of men think the government should spend more money on education, women appear to prioritise healthcare more so. Furthermore, while the younger generations tend to be more focused on improving education, the older generations tend to be focused on health.

Over half of British males believe the government should increase spending on education, while around one-third believe the government should place more focus on health. Meanwhile, just under half of British females think the government should increase spending on health, with only 40% interested in more spending on education.

In terms of age, around half of UK citizens aged 35-44, 45-54, and 55-64 believe the government should increase spending on health. Meanwhile, over 70% of adults aged 65+ also prioritised more spending on health over education. Younger people, on the other hand, tended to be more interested in increasing spending on education, with 40% of 18-24 year-olds, and 52% of 25-34 year-olds.

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• allocate more money toward

• the majority of 

• to prioritise

• Over half of

• around one-third

• place more focus on

• increase spending on

• around half of

Giải đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 16/06/2022

Các đề bài liên quan

• Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

• Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Phân tích đề

Phạm vi chủ đề: Vấn đề ô nhiễm môi trường

Nhiệm vụ: Đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân

Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề:

• environmental problem: các vấn đề môi trường như ô nhiễm, suy thoái môi trường, cạn kiệt nguồn nhiên liệu…

• fuel: nhiên liệu (vd: xăng, dầu,...)

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Bài mẫu

Raising fuel prices is believed to be the best solution to the planet's environmental problem. Although this measure may reduce the amount of toxic fumes that are released into the atmosphere to some extent, I believe there are several more effective alternatives to tackle environmental issues.

On the one hand, such a policy may help to lower emissions from certain modes of transport. As the price of fuel increases, commuters may resort to using public transport instead of using their own vehicles in order to save money. Moreover, drivers who are unwilling to spend more money on petrol will be encouraged to use vehicles that run on renewable and environmentally-friendly energy sources as an alternative, such as electric cars and bicycles. As a consequence, the number of privately-owned vehicles travelling on public roads would be significantly reduced, which in turn would significantly reduce the amount of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere each year. This would effectively enhance the air quality.

However, as environmental issues stem from many causes, there are several more suitable ways to address these problems. People's lack of awareness and knowledge about such problems is one of the primary underlying issues that results in pollution. Therefore, the government must educate the public about the current state of their environment and negative lifestyles in order to reduce the long-term impacts of their ignorance. Additionally, water pollution is a severe issue in many developing countries these days and is often found downstream from industrial zones where factories discharge toxic waste without proper treatment. Such an issue requires governments to implement stricter regulations to minimize the negative health impacts and help sustain the economy.

In conclusion, since each problem requires a unique solution, it is justifiable to say that increasing the price of fuel is not the single best resolution for environmental issues.

Đánh giá mức điểm

Từ ngữ

• phát ra vào bầu khí quyển : thải vào không khí

• đối phó (v) : giải quyết 

• Người đi làm (n) : người đi làm

• điều chỉnh (v) : buộc phải sử dụng

• Nâng cao (v) : tăng cường, cải thiện

• Bắt nguồn từ (phr.v): bắt nguồn từ

• địa chỉ (v): giải quyết

• sự thiếu nhận thức : sự thiếu nhận thức/ nhận thức kém

• vấn đề cơ bản : những vấn đề cơ bản

• Sự thiếu hiểu biết (n): sự thiếu hiểu biết, ngu dốt

• Phía dưới (n): hạ lưu

• Xả (v) : thải ra

• Thực hiện (v): thực hiện, thực hiện

• Duy trì (v): duy trì

• Phương án (n) : hướng giải quyết