[ĐỖ BÀI THI] Giải đề IELTS Writing ngày 18/04/2024

• Đề IELTS Writing task 1 với chủ đề “The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.”
• Đề IELTS Writing task 2 với đề bài “Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”

Làm thế nào để phân tích và phát triển ý tưởng cho đề thi này? Cùng Mytour giải đề IELTS Writing ngày 18/04/2024 chi tiết trong bài viết dưới đây.

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Nhiệm vụ 1 trong IELTS Writing

The bar chart shows the average number of hours students in five different universities studied.

(Biểu đồ cột thể hiện số giờ học trung bình của sinh viên tại 5 trường đại học khác nhau.)

Bước 1: Xây dựng kế hoạch

Đoạn tổng quan:

Thời lượng các buổi học trong tuần của các trường đại học này có xu hướng tương tự nhau, nhưng có sự khác biệt đáng kể vào cuối tuần. Sinh viên ở trường D dành ít thời gian nhất cho việc học tập, cho dù là trong tuần hay cuối tuần.

Bước 2: Hoàn thành bài viết

The charts provide data on the amount of time students from five universities spent studying, measured in hours.

In summary, study durations on weekdays across these five universities were nearly identical, but there were significant variations observed on weekends. Furthermore, whether it was weekdays or weekends, students at university D allocated the least time to studying. 

Beginning with weekdays, University C emerged as the leading institution with an average study time of 10.6 hours, closely followed by universities B and E, both recording approximately 10 hours. University A reported slightly fewer study hours at 9.8 on weekdays, contrasting with University D where the shortest study sessions averaged 9.6 hours, though still notably higher than the lowest-ranked university. 

Turning to weekends, students at University A devoted the longest time to studying, averaging 9 hours, while University B students spent slightly less time, around 8.6 hours. Despite leading on weekdays, University C dropped to third place on weekends, with students studying an average of 7.8 hours, 1.6 hours more than University E. Notably, University D consistently had the least study time, with students spending an average of 5.6 hours on academic activities, the lowest figure in the charts. 

Bước 3: Các phương pháp diễn đạt hữu ích

Students at university A studied the longest hours, at 5 hours.

= Students at university A had the longest study sessions, lasting up to 5 hours.

= The students at university A dedicated the most time to studying, averaging 5 hours.

= University A students spent the greatest amount of time studying, with sessions lasting 5 hours on average.

= The duration of study sessions was longest among students at university A, reaching up to 5 hours.

= University A had the highest average study time, with students spending 5 hours engaged in academic activities.

The average number of hours students study was 5 hours.

= Students typically studied for an average of 5 hours.

= On average, students spent 5 hours studying.

= Students had an average study duration of 5 hours.

= The typical study hours for students amounted to 5 hours.

IELTS Writing task 2

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

(Một số người cho rằng để ngăn ngừa bệnh tật, chính phủ nên tập trung vào việc giảm ô nhiễm môi trường và các vấn đề về nhà ở. Tới mức độ nào bạn đồng ý hay không đồng ý?)

Bước 1: Phân tích đề

• Từ khoá: Prevent illness and disease, focus, reducing environmental pollution, housing problems.
• Câu hỏi: Đề bài yêu cầu thí sinh đưa ra quan điểm đồng tình hay phản đối. Ở đây Mytour sẽ theo hướng “balanced opinion”, cho rằng giải quyết vấn đề môi trường và nhà cửa quan trọng, nhưng những yếu tố khác cũng không kém quần quan trọng.

Bước 2: Lập kế hoạch cho bài luận

Bước 3: Hoàn tất bài luận

It is believed by some that to reduce the incidence of illness and disease, the focus of governments should prioritize mitigating environmental pollution and addressing housing issues. In my view, while these solutions are crucial for disease prevention, a comprehensive policy encompassing various other aspects could yield better results. 

On one hand, proponents of environmental improvement argue that environmental degradation primarily contributes to numerous illnesses. Indeed, air pollution is exacerbated by emissions from factories and heavy reliance on private transportation, leading to respiratory diseases. Furthermore, water pollution, particularly toxic pollutants affecting marine life, poses risks to human health as seafood is a significant source of nutrition. Similarly, inadequate housing conditions due to shortages force many, especially low-income individuals, into unsanitary living environments, exacerbating health issues. Therefore, addressing air and water quality degradation and housing shortages is crucial to combating disease spread. 

On the other hand, focusing solely on environment and housing overlooks the multifaceted determinants of health. Firstly, a robust healthcare system with advanced medical facilities and qualified professionals is essential. This ensures effective responses to diseases, including outbreaks of contagious or life-threatening illnesses. Access to healthcare should be equitable, irrespective of socio-economic status, as currently, many cannot afford treatment. Secondly, poverty significantly influences health outcomes, necessitating policies for poverty alleviation through employment opportunities and social welfare programs, addressing basic needs and contributing to long-term health improvements.

In conclusion, while addressing environmental pollution and housing shortages is crucial for disease prevention, a holistic approach integrating healthcare accessibility and socio-economic well-being is essential.

Bước 4: Từ vựng và cấu trúc câu

Now, let's try a fill-in-the-blank exercise:

1. The ____________ of the environment has led to increased health problems in the community.
2. Many families in the area live in ____________ housing conditions without access to clean water.
3. Poverty and education are important ____________ of health outcomes.
4. The issue of healthcare accessibility should be addressed to ensure it is ____________.
5. Measures for poverty ____________ should be implemented to improve living conditions.
6. The government aims to promote ____________ ____________ through various social programs.
7. The ____________ of certain diseases has decreased due to improved sanitation.

Answers:

1. Deterioration
2. Substandard
3. Determinants
4. Accessible to everyone
5. Alleviation
6. Socio-economic well-being
7. Incidence

Therefore, Mytour and you have just analyzed and developed ideas for the sample solution to the IELTS Writing test on April 18, 2024.

How did you find this test? Recently, bar chart questions have been frequently appearing in the IELTS exams. Therefore, you should practice this type of question thoroughly to master the approach!