[DOMINATE THE EXAM] Hướng dẫn chi tiết giải đề IELTS Writing ngày 08/01/2022 – Mytour

Nhiệm vụ 1

Sample

The presented bar chart illustrates the workforce distribution across sales, computing, accounting, nursing, and farming sectors in a specific Australian region during 2001 and 2008.

In general, the sales sector employed the highest number of individuals in both years, whereas the farming sector had the smallest workforce. Additionally, employment figures in other sectors remained relatively stable over the period.

In 2001, about 150,000 individuals were engaged in the sales industry. Over the following seven years, there was a slight rise in sales employment, with an increase of 20,000 employees. During this period, both the computing and nursing sectors also experienced modest growth, with their respective workforces expanding from 50,000 to 70,000 and 60,000.

A brief analysis of the remaining data indicates a decline in employment numbers within the accounting and farming sectors. In 2001, the accounting field employed just under 60,000 people, with a minority working in agriculture. While the accounting industry remained stable over the seven-year period, the farming sector saw a further decrease in employment by 2008.

Phân tích

Tổng quan, ngành bán hàng chiếm số lượng lao động lớn nhất trong cả hai năm, trong khi ngành nông nghiệp thì ngược lại. Bên cạnh đó, các ngành khác không có sự khác biệt đáng kể giữa hai năm.

Phần tiếp theo phân tích số liệu về ngành bán hàng (sales) (sử dụng từ diễn tả sự tăng trưởng). Đồng thời, ngành máy tính và điều dưỡng có số liệu tương tự nhau nên được tổng hợp thông tin. Phần cuối cùng phân tích các ngành còn lại (tăng, giảm, giữ nguyên,…) và sử dụng các cấu trúc câu khác nhau để trình bày số liệu.

Task 2

Sample

Academic degrees from institutions are considered the optimal path to achieve goals and attain success, although some argue that university degrees are unnecessary for success. Effective university education, in my view, prepares individuals for a promising future and professional qualifications that will be carefully examined in this essay.

To commence with, applying to prominent institutions can assist residents in achieving their goals and providing them with the best opportunities to expand their knowledge. Universities have well-known academics with professional knowledge who can assist people in becoming successful. People who have attended universities, for example, have learned practical skills such as communication, time management, and leadership, all of which can have an impact on their future life. Moreover, going to elite colleges, in my opinion, provides students with comprehensive educations that are not available anywhere else. As a result, achieving greater success in life can lead to a more effective university education.

On the other hand, gaining experience or pursuing one's passions can lead anyone to become a professional, rather than acquiring academic degrees. Individuals may pursue their dreams or develop desired skills, which can pave the way for their success. For instance, some of the world's top soccer players lack academic degrees but excel through sheer effort.

In conclusion, some individuals believe that obtaining prestigious establishments is the best approach to help people become professional people in their life, while others believe that experiences and goals are more significant. Academic education, in my opinion, can help us develop practical skills that will help us achieve greater success in our life.

• Prominent (adj): quan trọng, chủ yếu
• Comprehensive education (n): giáo dục phổ thông
• Prestigious establishment (n): nền tảng vững chắc 

Phân tích

The essay prompt requires an analysis of both aspects of the issue; therefore, each body paragraph corresponds to one viewpoint. The first body paragraph emphasizes the importance of university degrees for careers: Universities not only impart knowledge but also essential hard and soft skills for future jobs. Moreover, the high tuition fees at universities contribute to students' success by providing quality education that is scarce elsewhere. Conversely, the second body paragraph stresses the benefits of gaining practical experience in the workplace (e.g., professional soccer players). Each argument begins with guiding phrases to direct the reader and is supported by strong arguments and evidence.