[MASTER THE EXAM] Giải đề IELTS Writing ngày 23/12/2023

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Nhiệm vụ viết IELTS task 1

The diagram below shows how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.

Bước 1: Lập kế hoạch 

Đoạn tóm tắt: Nhìn chung, quy trình lọc nước sử dụng thiết bị cơ bản và dựa vào tính chất tự nhiên của ba nguyên liệu khác nhau để lọc nước bẩn.

Bước 2: Hoàn tất bài luận

The diagram illustrates details about the configuration and functioning of a water filtration system designed to ensure the production of potable water. 

In summary, the water purification process utilizes basic equipment and depends on the inherent properties of three distinct materials to filter impure water. 

Regarding the equipment, the lower half of the initial container comprises three essential layers: gravel forms the bottom layer, followed by layers of charcoal and sand. Their respective roles involve eliminating contaminants from impure water, thereby facilitating purification. This filtration container connects to a water storage tank for drinking purposes via a black pipe. 

As for the working mechanism, at the beginning of the process, untreated water is poured into the container, where the filtering phrase directly takes place. The water passes through the layers of sand, charcoal, and gravel in chronological order, and during this stage, the contaminants from the impure water are captured within these layers, facilitating the elimination of impurities from the water. The process continues with transferring the filtered water into a separate storage tank, where the clean water can be stored and used for human consumption.

Bước 3: Vocabulary

Exercise: Fill in the gaps

• 1. The ____________ of the filter consists of gravel, charcoal, and sand.
  • layer
• 2. The gravel is located ____________ the first container, forming the bottom layer.
  • at the base of
• 3. Clean water is transferred to the storage tank ____________ a black pipe.
  • by means of
• 4. Understanding the ____________ of the water filter is essential for its proper use.
  • working mechanism
• 5. The ____________ of impurities from the water is the primary goal of the filtration process.
  • elimination
• 6. The filter is designed to capture and remove ____________ such as debris and contaminants.
  • impurities
• 7. The filtering container ____________ three crucial layers for effective water purification.
  • is made up of

IELTS Writing task 2

The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. Do you agree or disagree?

Bước 1: Phân tích đề 

• Từ khoá: a ban on all forms of advertising, serves no useful purpose, even be damaging
• Câu hỏi: Ở đây Mytour sẽ theo hướng phản đối nhiều hơn đồng tình nhé. 

Bước 2: Lập kế hoạch cho bài viết

Bước 3: Hoàn thành bài luận

The presence of advertising in today's society is undeniable, permeating almost every aspect of our lives. From my perspective, while the widespread use of advertising has its downsides, particularly in influencing what aspects or values people prioritize, I do not completely agree that it is entirely negative and should be banned altogether.

Certainly, it is undeniable that advertising influences people's perceptions of what should be considered important. Firstly, the constant exposure to various forms of advertisements has fostered a culture where consumerism and materialism are promoted. This means that the accumulation of material possessions and goods takes precedence over other values and experiences, potentially leading to a superficial pursuit of happiness when individuals believe that their worth and value in society is determined by what they possess. Additionally, some advertisements employ manipulative or deceptive tactics to entice consumers into purchasing products they may not necessarily need or that fail to live up to their promises. They can appeal to emotions, create unrealistic desires, and exploit vulnerabilities, prompting people to make impulsive and sometimes regrettable decisions. 

Nevertheless, there are compelling arguments against the blanket statement that advertising has a detrimental impact on people's lives. To start with, advertising serves as a valuable source of information about products, services, events, and new innovations, enabling consumers to stay informed about available options in the market and providing details that help them make informed decisions. Additionally, commercials play a crucial role in helping businesses establish and reinforce their brand identities. By increasing visibility of products and services through advertising, companies can target new markets and expand their customer bases, both domestically and internationally, contributing to long-term business success.  Moreover, some forms of advertising provide a platform for bringing social issues to light and gaining public attention for awareness campaigns. 

In conclusion, while it is understandable how the advertising industry influences what people consider important, I believe that banning advertising outright is not the solution, as it also brings numerous benefits to consumers, businesses, and society as a whole. 

Bước 4: Từ vựng

1. The _________ of smartphones means that they can be found in every corner of the globe.
2. His relentless pursuit of wealth and possessions reflects a deep sense of _________.
3. _________ has led to the constant desire for the latest gadgets and luxury items.
4. The company used _________ advertising techniques to convince consumers to buy their product.
5. In many situations, your attitude can be the _________ of your success or failure.
6. Being informed about current events is essential to making _________ decisions.
7. A strong _________ can make a company easily recognizable and memorable.
8. Her _________ decision to buy the expensive dress left her with regret.
9. The _________ practices of some companies were exposed, leading to public outrage.

1. Ubiquity
2. Materialím
3. Consumerism
4. Manipulative
5. Determinant
6. well-informed
7. Brand identity
8. Impulsive
9. Deceptive