Mẫu Bài IELTS Writing – Đề thi ngày 30/1/2016

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- Imprisonment is the traditional method used in most countries to address crime.
- Education is seen as a more effective solution to the issue of crime.
- Prisons are necessary for social security, keeping dangerous criminals contained and acting as a deterrent.
- Education addresses the root cause of criminal behavior by enhancing intelligence and fostering a civilized community.
- Access to quality education can decrease crime rates by helping individuals understand the consequences of criminal actions.
- Both incarceration policies and improved education play a role in addressing crime, but through different means.

Prison is the conventional method in most nations for addressing the issue of crime. However, a more efficient approach is to offer individuals a superior education. Do you concur or disagree? model bai ielts writing de thi ngay 3012016

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Prison is the typical approach in most countries to resolve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide individuals with better education. Do you agree or disagree?

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Despite the widespread use of imprisonment as a method to control unlawful behavior, advancements in education have garnered societal support as a means to address the issue at its core. Personally, I do not agree that education is superior, as it is difficult to compare the effectiveness of these two approaches due to their unique impacts.

On the one hand, the reasons why prisons are of indispensable necessity for social securityare varied. They are the place to keep people who have broken the law contained, ensuring the safety of other citizens. Especially, dangerous criminals such as murderers or rapists have to be imprisoned for their heinous actions. Furthermore, severe prison sentences act as a deterrent against crimes. Knowing there might be a chance of getting caught and condemned to jail, which also means losing freedom and living a miserable life in a cell, ones who are having the intention of committing illegalities would reconsider going down the path.

However, education functions as a solution for the root cause of criminal activities. Education significantly enhances individuals' intelligence and fosters a civilized community. Enhanced access to quality educational services ensures that citizens comprehend the detrimental effects of criminal actions on both their society and themselves, consequently leading to a decrease in crime rates. Moreover, acquiring specific qualifications through basic education such as vocational training can guarantee individuals a stable livelihood, thus eliminating any inclination towards criminal behavior.

To conclude, determining whether incarceration policies or improved education will play a predominant role in addressing crime is a complex matter, as both approaches address the issue albeit through different means.

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Từ vựng theo chủ đề

Illegal acts: Hành vi vi phạm pháp luật
Social backing: Sự ủng hộ từ xã hội
Address the root cause of the issue: Giải quyết nguyên nhân căn bản của vấn đề
To be indispensable: Là một sự cần thiết không thể thiếu (nhấn mạnh)
Social stability: Ổn định xã hội
To be incarcerated: Bị tống vào tù
Atrocious deeds: Hành động đáng lên án
To act as a deterrent against sth: Là một rào cản chống lại cái gì đó
To be sentenced to prison: Bị kết án vào tù
To function as a solution for the root cause of crimes: Hoạt động như một biện pháp giải quyết cho nguyên nhân gốc rễ của tội phạm
To enhance people’s intellectual capacity: Nâng cao năng lực trí tuệ của người dân
A cultured society: Một xã hội văn minh
Professional training: Đào tạo nghề nghiệp
To eliminate any intention of committing crimes: Loại bỏ bất kỳ ý định phạm tội nào

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