Mẫu bài IELTS Writing Task 2 – Đề thi ngày 25/3/2017

ĐỀ THI NGÀY 25-3-2017

Analysis of the topic

Plan

Sample IELTS Writing Tasks 2 Band 7

Clearly the price of fuel has little to do with pressing problems of traffic and pollution. The inevitable demand for time-saving and safe travelling in the modern world makes the change in price of gas become rather insignificant, which proves the ineffectiveness of the given policy. In other words, even if the price were increased, people would still travel on a daily basis and the problems of traffic and pollution would stay unsolved. Additionally, this solution could easily trigger social disagreement and resentment. This, coupled with the reluctance of using expensive fuel to travel every day, could be counter-productive and this proposed idea would become irrelevant.

However, alternatives to the heightened petrol price demonstrate greater efficacy. Initially, governmental regulations could be imposed to limit private vehicle usage, such as cars, and encourage the populace to utilize public transportation. This action would ease congestion on numerous roads by reducing vehicle numbers, thereby mitigating pollution resulting from exhaust emissions. Secondly, the promotion of cycling, an environmentally friendly practice, should be intensified within urban centers. Simultaneously, designated zones for cyclists should be established to mitigate rush hour congestion, which often surpasses road capacity.

In summary, I contend that increasing fuel prices for transportation to combat traffic and pollution issues is somewhat illogical, and instead, alternative approaches should be embraced.

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Chủ đề từ vựng

1. For efficient and secure travel: Để di chuyển một cách hiệu quả và an toàn
2. The inefficacy of the current policy: Sự không hiệu quả của chính sách hiện tại
3. The issues regarding traffic and pollution remain unresolved: Những vấn đề về giao thông và ô nhiễm vẫn chưa được giải quyết
4. Alleviate congestion on numerous roads: Giảm áp lực giao thông trên nhiều tuyến đường
5. To mitigate pollution resulting from emissions: Giảm thiểu ô nhiễm do khí thải

Cấu trúc ngữ pháp cần chú ý

1. The increasing need for efficient and secure travel in the contemporary era renders fluctuations in gasoline prices relatively inconsequential, underscoring the ineffectiveness of the current policy.
2. In essence, even with price hikes, daily commuting remains unchanged, perpetuating issues with traffic and pollution.
3. This action will alleviate congestion on multiple thoroughfares by reducing vehicular volume, consequently mitigating emissions-related pollution.
4. Simultaneously, dedicated lanes for cyclists should be established to mitigate rush hour congestion, where vehicular influx may surpass road capacities.