Sample IELTS Writing Task 1 and Task 2 with a band score of 7 for the exam on 12/03/2022

Solving the IELTS Writing Task 1 exam on 12/03/2022

Reference sample

The table shows how much money a public place, Harckley Hall, earned, received, and spent throughout a three-year period.

In general, the majority of the hall's revenue came from room rentals and support from the local council and other organizations. At the end of the period, the hall earned less profit, mainly because of the increased spending.

In year 1, the hall made £34,000 from rooms for hire, after which the amount rose by £1,000 before falling by £3,000 in year 3. Regarding the cafe, the money made from it was quite insignificant as compared to other sources, standing at £4,000 in year 3 after fluctuating slightly. In terms of funding, the local council subsidized the hall with the highest amount of money, roughly £22,000 per year, slightly lower than the funds from all other sources combined, which saw a substantial rise to £27,000 in year 3.

The total income mostly remained unchanged, at around £84,000 over the period. However, because the hall spent more money each year with £62,000 spent in year 3, the profit went down considerably to £22,000, approximately £5,000 less than in year 1.

Structures that can be used to express trends in the data

• The total income mostly remained unchanged, at around £84,000 over the period.

• The profit went down considerably to £22,000 in year 3, approximately £5,000 less than in year 1.

Structures that can be used to express comparisons of the data

• Regarding the cafe, the money made from it was quite insignificant as compared to other sources, 

• The local council subsidized the hall with the highest amount of money, roughly £22,000 per year, slightly lower than the funds from all other sources combined

Solving the IELTS Writing Task 2 exam on 12/03/2022

Related topics

• It is sometimes suggested that primary schoolchildren should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

• Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter this profession. Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it?

Analysis of the topic

Phạm vi chủ đề: người trẻ làm nông

Nhiệm vụ: Trả lời 2 câu hỏi “Why” và “Should”

• Lý do nhiều người trẻ bỏ làm nông

• Lý do về việc người trẻ nên / không nên làm nông

Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề:

• young people: người trẻ

• farming work: công việc đồng áng

• rural area: nông thôn

Detailed outline

Sample reference article

These days, rural youth are less involved in farming work. There are several reasons for this change, and I firmly believe that it is vital for governments and NGOs to engage them in farming.

There are two leading reasons why young people in rural areas tend to leave farming. Firstly, they tend to hold negative perceptions of agricultural work. Farming is often associated with hardship and poverty. It is painstaking labor that indeed takes months to take care of crops and yet cannot guarantee a fruitful harvest due to external factors like weather conditions, pests and diseases. In fact, having experienced this instability, many rural parents even discourage youngsters from leading a farmer’s life. Secondly, today’s generation is more advantageous than older generations as they have access to the Internet. They begin to know many vocational opportunities out there that are more profitable and financially stable than farming work. In other words, farming is no longer their only choice and is more likely an inferior choice.

I think it is essential to engage youth in farming work because of two main reasons. For one thing, farmers are aging; in Vietnam, the average age of farmers is 50. If young people stay uninvolved, there would probably be no next generations of farmers who provide food and agricultural products. Another reason is that young people are technology adopters from an early age. With their familiarity with technologies, they can find ways to incorporate those technologies in modern farming and solve many agricultural problems, like using remote-controlled helicopters to spray pesticides.

In conclusion, it is due to negative perceptions and abundance of career choices that discourage rural youth from going into farming, and I think engaging them in farming work from now on is vital for our future.

Lexicon

• Involve in  = engage in: tham gia vào

• Farming work = agricultural work 

• Fruitful harvest: Vụ mùa bội thu

• Vocational opportunities: Cơ hội nghề nghiệp

• Incorporate in: Kết hợp vào cái gì

• Inferior choice: Lựa chọn thứ cấp

Practice sessions

Câu chủ đề: “Young people are less interested in farming work because it cannot guarantee them a stable income.”

Essay 2: Compose an essay for the following topic:

Farming serves as the foundation of every nation, yet nowadays, many youths are hesitant to pursue this occupation. Why is this phenomenon occurring and what measures can be taken to address it?

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