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Solving the IELTS Writing Task 1 exam on 23/04/2022
Mở bài | Giới thiệu nội dung chính của biểu đồ |
Đoạn tổng quát (Overview) |
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Thân bài 1 | Mô tả số liệu của năm đầu tiên (2002)
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Thân bài 2 | Mô tả số liệu của hai năm sau (2006 và 2010)
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Sample
The bar chart illustrates the percentages of males, females and children in the UK consuming the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables, in three separate years (2002, 2006 and 2010).
Overall, the proportion of all groups eating fruit and vegetables increased over the period shown. Also, while women had a tendency to consume these foods the most, the opposite was true for children.
As can be seen from the chart, in 2002, approximately a quarter of females in the UK ate the recommended amount of fruit and vegetables. This was followed by nearly 22% of males consuming these foods daily, which was two times higher than that of children.
Over the following eight years, the figures for all groups increased to reach peaks in 2006 in which the figure for women was highest at just over 30%. By 2010, however, the percentage of females, males and children eating fruit and vegetables had decreased slightly to 27%, 24% and 14% respectively.
Các cấu trúc dùng để diễn tả sự thay đổi số liệu:
The figures for all groups increased to reach peaks in 2006.
By 2010, however, the percentage of females, males and children eating fruit and vegetables had decreased slightly to 27%, 24% and 14% respectively.
Various structures for describing data
This was followed by nearly 22% of males consuming these foods daily, which was two times higher than that of children.
….. in 2006 in which the figure for women was highest at just over 30%.
Estimated band score
TR: 7 | CC: 8 | LR: 7 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 7.5 |
Solving the IELTS Writing Task 2 exam on 23/04/2022
Đề bài: Young people today mostly learn by reading books or watching movies, rather than real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Related writing prompts
Nowadays, more and more children are using digital platforms as their regular learning resources. Why? Is this a better way of learning?
Some people think that children should gather knowledge via their own experience. Others believe that books and movies have better educational outcomes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Analyzing the topic
Phạm vi chủ đề: Việc học của trẻ thông qua các nền tảng.
Nhiệm vụ: Bày tỏ nhận định cá nhân (đồng ý, không đồng ý).
Định nghĩa các khái niệm trong đề: real-life experience: trải nghiệm thực tế.
Other possible ideas to consider
Disagree |
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Sample article
These days, most children prefer acquiring knowledge via printed work and films to learning from self-experience. In my opinion, I totally agree with this notion.
On the one hand, the hustle and bustle of daily life has restrained people from undergoing hands-on affairs. Due to the rapid development of modern society, only by studying with high intensity could young minds catch up with this advancement. As gaining personal experience requires much time, children have to accumulate knowledge via books and other digital platforms. In addition, after COVID-19 pandemic, some young people have become less proactive and no longer favor outdoor trips. Besides, in order to meet the modern living standard, adults now are snowed under with their heavy workloads. This could also reduce children's hands-on experience as their parents cannot offer vacations and other exploring trips.
On the other hand, most young people favor studying by books and movies due to their reasonable cost and great outcome. Nowadays, educational trips have become more and more costly. Therefore, people consider printed work and films as economical and accessible learning resources. Additionally, paperbacks now are well-equipped with valuable content and lively illustration, and various TV shows are rated with high educational value, such as Peppa Pig and Sesame Street. As a result, children could indirectly explore the outside world via colorful cartoons without worries about outer risks.
In conclusion, owing to the fast-paced modern lifestyle along with the effectiveness of books and films, young individuals still choose printed materials and other digital platforms as their preferred mode of learning.
Estimated band score
TR: 7 | CC: 7 | TR: 8 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 7.5 |
Vocabulary
Printed materials: Various printed products such as books, newspapers, and photographs...
Hands-on experience: Real-life situations
Digital platform: Online platforms
Be swamped with something: Busy with... Hands-on experience: Practical experience
Economical (adj): Cost-effective, reasonable
Opt for something: Prefer, choose something...
