IELTS Writing Task 1 solving on 05/11/2022
OutlineMở bài | Giới thiệu nội dung chính của biểu đồ |
Đoạn tổng quát (Overview) |
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Thân bài 1 | Tháng 7-10:
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Thân bài 2 | Tháng 11-6:
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Bài mẫu
The bar chart compares the volume of users visiting a community website over two years.
Overall, website traffic was significantly higher in the first year, with the peak number of visits occurring in October and February.
In July of the first year, the number of users visiting the community website reached 25,000, which was around 5,000 higher than July in the second year. This figure continued to rise over the following months, peaking at 40,000 visits in October. During the same period of the second year, website traffic trended in the opposite direction, dropping to around 10,000 visits in September before increasing back to 20,000 visits in October.
From November to February, the volume of users visiting in the first year gradually increased, while it fluctuated over the same period in the second year. In April, the figure for both the first and second year hit its lowest point at 16,000 and 8,000 visits respectively before starting to increase again.
Band điểm ước lượng
TR: 8 | CC: 8 | LR: 8 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 8.0 |
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IELTS Writing Task 2 solving on 05/11/2022
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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?
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Bài mẫu
Food waste is an ongoing issue in many countries around the world these days. The following essay will examine some of the main factors contributing to this problem whilst outlining a number of feasible measures to combat the issue.
There are two main underlying reasons as to why food is being wasted. Firstly, given the vast improvements in agricultural technology, farming has become more mechanized, which has boosted productivity and significantly increased harvests. In addition, freight and logistics processes have also been improved, leading to more cost-efficient transportation and distribution of foods. As a result, the price of food in supermarkets and restaurants is more affordable, making it easier than ever for customers to purchase excess quantities of food. Secondly, it seems that most people haven't cultivated an appreciation for food. Although food is a bare necessity, many people these days tend to take it for granted.
Several feasible measures can be implemented to mitigate food waste. To begin with, campaigns to raise public awareness about the need to reduce food waste should be intensified. Once people are more aware of the seriousness of the issue, they may think twice before buying and ordering excess amounts of food. Such an initiative should be implemented in tandem with imposing strict laws that forbid food waste at restaurants. This can be accomplished by fining diners who order too many items but are unable to finish them. As a result, consumers will consider what they will order more carefully in the future.
In conclusion, more affordable food prices and a lack of appreciation for food are reasons for this problem and solutions should be adopted to remedy the situation.
Band điểm ước lượng
TR:8 | LR:8 | CC:8 | GR:8 | Overall:8 |
Từ ngữ:
vấn đề đang diễn ra: an ongoing issue
chống lại: combat
những lý do cơ bản: underlying reasons
số lượng dư thừa của: excess quantities of
nhu cầu cơ bản nhất: bare necessity
coi như là điều hiển nhiên: take it for granted
thực hiện: implement
tăng cường: intensify
đồng bộ với: in tandem with