Solving the IELTS Writing Task 1 and Task 2 exams on December 29, 2022

IELTS Writing Task 1 exam solution on December 29, 2022

Dàn bài

Bài mẫu

The table gives information about the percentage of first year students who rated different aspects of their course as being ‘very good’.

Overall, students studying Commerce appeared to be the most pleased with the resources provided by the college for their course.

An average of 94% of first year students studying Commerce found that their pre-course information, teaching, and tutor were very good, while just over 80% found the printed resources and other resources to also be very good. Meanwhile, around 70% of Law students found their printed resources, tutor, and pre-course information to be at a very good standard. Around 60% rated the teaching as being very good, while 80% rated the other resources as very good.

However, only 60% of Economics students found their pre-course information and other resources to be very good. The teaching and tutor were rated very good by at least 90% of students, compared to just over 80% who voted the printed resources as being very good.

Band điểm ước lượng

Từ vựng và cấu trúc mô tả số liệu:

• to be the most pleased: hài lòng nhất.

• An average of 94% of … : Trung bình 94% của …

• just over 80% found: Chỉ hơn 80% thấy rằng …

• to be predicted to reach: được dự đoán sẽ đạt.

• to be at a very good standard: đạt tiêu chuẩn tốt.

Phương pháp thực hiện đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 29/12/2022

Các đề bài liên quan

• The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Phân tích đề

• Phạm vi chủ đề: Giao thông an toàn - Luật pháp.

• Nhiệm vụ: Đưa ra quan điểm đồng tình hoặc không đồng tình.

• Định nghĩa các khái niệm có trong đề: road safety - an toàn đường bộ. 

Dàn bài:

Bài mẫu

There are some people who believe that the best way to minimise traffic accidents and increase safety on the road is to increase the minimum legal age for having a car or motorbike licence. Personally, I completely disagree with this idea for several reasons which will be outlined below.

Firstly, while there are many accidents on the road that are caused by young people, I do not believe that restricting them from driving a motorbike or car until a later age will have any serious impact on the current rate of traffic accidents. Certainly, many young people lack adequate experience driving in busy traffic, however stopping them from getting their licence until a later age does not allow them to gain the necessary driving experience which they need in order to drive safely. By allowing young people to drive on the road and gain the experience they need, the risk of a traffic accident occurring will be reduced.

Furthermore, traffic accidents are generally caused by people of all ages and are quite often due to other issues besides experience, such as poor concentration, dangerous driving, or a lack of awareness and skill. Old people, in particular, are more likely to suffer from poor concentration and lack of awareness, when compared to younger people who tend to have a better general awareness of their surroundings, and have a higher level of physical ability and reaction timing. Additionally, dangerous driving is likely to be performed by anyone at any age, not necessarily young people.

In conclusion, it is believed that age is not necessarily the main factor when it comes to traffic accidents, and therefore increasing the minimum age for driving is not the best way to increase road safety.

Estimated Band Scores

Vocabulary:

• placing restrictions on them: hạn chế họ 

• having a significant impact on the current rate of ..: có ảnh hưởng lớn đến tỷ lệ hiện tại của … 

• lacking sufficient experience: thiếu kinh nghiệm đầy đủ.

• acquiring the necessary driving experience : có được/ tích luỹ được kinh nghiệm lái xe cần thiết.

• accumulating experience: tích luỹ kinh nghiệm.

•  the likelihood of a traffic accident occurring: khả năng xảy ra tai nạn giao thông.

• poor focus, risky driving, or lack of awareness and competence: sự thiếu tập trung, lái xe mạo hiểm hoặc thiếu nhận thức và khả năng.

• are prone to experiencing poor concentration and lack of awareness : dễ gặp phải tình trạng tập trung kém và thiếu nhận thức.

• possessing a better overall understanding of their environment: sở hữu hiểu biết tổng quan tốt hơn về môi trường xung quanh.

• having a superior level of physical capability and reflexes: có một cấp độ cao hơn về khả năng vận động và thời gian phản ứng.

• dangerous driving is more likely to be executed by: việc lái xe nguy hiểm có khả năng được thực hiện bởi.