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Task 2 on February 17, 2022
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Water scarcity has become a major problem in the modern day, which poses the question of whether people should still have free access to fresh water. Although some people argue that it is their right to use water as they choose, I believe it is more beneficial if there are restrictions on water use.
On the one hand, proponents of the idea that people should be able to freely use water often state several reasons. Firstly, it is not always people's fault that water is wasted. In some countries, bureaucracy, mismanagement and corruption are the main factors that jeopardize water supply. Therefore, it is unjustifiable to force people into saving resources that they do not waste in the first place. Secondly, it is the responsibility of the state to ensure that its citizens have access to fresh water. The government should use taxpayers' money to promote sustainable water management and improve the sewage system, allowing them to supply and recycle water in a way that meets current needs without affecting future generations.
On the other hand, other people believe that water shortages will become more severe without government intervention. A large number of people still think that fresh water is an unlimited natural resource. Setting maximum limits for water consumption or punishing those who overuse water would surely raise people's awareness of the dire consequences of abusing water resources, thereby discouraging them from misusing water. In addition, only the government has a deep understanding of its current water situation. Therefore, only they can take action accordingly to prevent drought and other emergencies that water shortages can cause.
In conclusion, although household water use might not be the main culprit of water shortages, I firmly believe that the government should control and regulate the water supply in order to encourage efficient water use and protect the country from disaster.
Phân tích điểm ước lượng của ban
TR: 8 | CC: 8 | LR: 8 | GRA: 8 | Overall: 8.0 |
Từ ngữ
poses the question of something: đặt vấn đề về điều gì đó:
bureaucracy, mismanagement and corruption: quản trị hành chính, quản lý không hiệu quả và tham nhũng
jeopardize: đặt vào tình trạng nguy hiểm
force somebody into doing something: ép buộc ai đó làm điều gì đó
have access to something: có quyền truy cập vào một cái gì đó
government intervention: sự can thiệp của chính phủ
an unlimited natural resource: một nguồn tài nguyên thiên nhiên không hạn chế
raise people's awareness of the dire consequences of something: nâng cao nhận thức của mọi người về hậu quả nghiêm trọng của một cái gì đó
has a deep understanding of something: có sự hiểu biết sâu sắc về điều gì đó
the main culprit of something: thủ phạm chính của một cái gì đó
