Tập hợp đề thi IELTS Writing 2019 cùng các bài mẫu chi tiết

Đề thi IELTS Writing Tháng 02/2019

Ngày 14/02/2019

Nhiệm vụ 2

Topic analysis

Đây là dạng đề agree/disagree dựa trên quan điểm “viện bảo tàng & phòng trưng bày nghệ thuật sẽ không còn cần thiết nữa do hiện nay người dân có thể sử dụng máy tính để xem hiện vật lịch sử & các tác phẩm nghệ thuật”

Brainstorming/Outlining:

Agree:

They were necessary in the past => do thiếu công nghệ thông tin

But not now => có thể ngồi ở nhà thoải mái xem hiện vật lịch sử & các tác phẩm nghệ thuật trên màn hình máy tính có kết nối internet

Disagree:

Sample essay

There is an argument suggesting that the utilization of computers for observing artworks and historical artifacts may eventually lead to the disappearance of public museums and art galleries. This viewpoint, however, lacks strong conviction.

Certainly, in this digital age, computer science and information technology have negative impacts on traditional entities such as art galleries and museums.

Fewer local residents nowadays visit such places, partly due to the convenience of staying home and using computers and the Internet to enjoy what previously required a physical visit to a museum or gallery.

Nevertheless, the assertion that computers will cause the extinction of these institutions is hardly reasonable. Firstly, without physical museums and galleries, creating authentic online representations of historical artifacts and artworks would be nearly impossible.

Even if feasible, such future digital representations would only be artificial. Secondly, the ongoing global trend towards digital transformation driven by technology giants underscores the continuing essential role of museums and art galleries in the modern world.

Steve Jobs and Bill Gates, among others, chose to raise their children with minimal exposure to technology, recognizing the harmful effects of information technology on young minds.

Furthermore, without museums and similar institutions, tourists would lack culturally and historically significant destinations to visit, and local children would miss out on practical experiences related to their school studies.

All things considered, I firmly believe that art institutions are unlikely to vanish in the future simply because they remain indispensable.

– 288 words – Written by Mytour

Some vocab items

• Historical artefacts/artifacts: Hiện vật lịch sử
• Art works / works of art: Tác phẩm nghệ thuật
• In this digital era: Trong thời đại kỹ thuật số hiện nay
• Negative/adverse/damaging/detrimental/devastating effects: Tác hại (khủng khiếp)
• To see X with one’s own eyes: Nhìn thấy X tận mắt / tận mắt thấy X
• The X at issue: Cái X đang bàn
• Far from reasonable: Nghe không có lý tí nào
• The global trend towards deindustrialization: Xu thế toàn cầu hướng về sự phi công nghiệp hóa + to name but a few: Xin dẫn ra một vài thí dụ tiêu biểu
• To raise children tech-free: Nuôi dạy con cái theo lối sống phi công nghệ
• Culturally and historically important destinations: Những điểm đến/du lịch quan trọng về phương diện văn hoá và lịch sử.

Some grammatical structures

• To enjoy doing X: Thưởng thức/ thích thú (việc) làm X
• Without X, it would be impossible to do Y: Không có X, không thể nào làm Y
• X currently built by Y would help… / X which is currently built by Y would help…: X đang được Y xây dựng có thể giúp…
• In this modern world / in today’s world / in this modern-day society / in this day and age / these days: Trong xã hội/ thế giới/ thời buổi hiện nay
• To be well aware of X / to know well about X / to know X well: Biết rõ về X
• What is more / Moreover / Furthermore / In addition / Additionally: Ngoài ra

Ngày 23/02/2019

Task 2

Topic analysis:

This is a 'two-part question' type according to Simon's classification. One part asks why some people prefer to use luxury goods, while the other requires us to give our personal opinion on whether this trend is positive or negative.

Brainstorming/Outlining:

In summary, we can outline the essay as follows: 

Body para 1: Reasons why people want to buy famous brands

1. Due to assured quality 2. Social approval and conformity 

Body para 2: I think this is negative.

1. This undermines smaller brands. For instance, Apple and Samsung dominate the smartphone market. 2. This consolidates excessive power among well-known entities. 

Sample

Recently, there has been a growing preference for products from renowned brands. There are several reasons for this trend, which I perceive as negative. Global giants such as Coca-Cola in beverages, BMW in automobiles, and Apple in smartphones have gained widespread recognition for their superior quality.

When consumers opt for branded goods, they are also assured of performance, durability, and excellent customer service. Purchasing an iPhone, for instance, ensures stability, a lifespan of 1-2 years, and worldwide repair availability.

The inclination towards well-known brands also arises from a desire for social acceptance. Everyone desires to belong, and buying widely recognized products signifies membership in a specific community. In my view, the dominance of famous brands is highly detrimental as it stifles healthy competition among companies.

Consider smartphones, for example: in recent years, the market has become dominated by the giants Apple and Samsung, leaving smaller brands and startups struggling to gain traction. This monopoly stifles innovation, as the future of technology and trends is dictated by just one or two major corporations.

Moreover, various large corporations like Microsoft or Facebook have profoundly influenced society in their own manner, and by continuously supporting these brands, we grant them even more authority, potentially posing a significant threat to both the government and society as a whole.

In summary, certain individuals tend to purchase renowned brands due to their superior products and the sense of belonging. I firmly believe this trend is detrimental not only to smaller businesses but also to society as a whole. 

– 315 Words – Written by Mytour

Some vocab items

• Globally recognized: Được công nhận toàn cầu
• Branded merchandise: Sản phẩm có thương hiệu
• Inclination towards: Xu hướng nghiên về
• Stem from: Bắt nguồn từ
• Social acceptance: Sự công nhận của xã hội
• Dominance: Sự thống trị
• Obliterate: Hủy diệt
• Mogul: Nhân vật có sức ảnh hưởng lớn ở một lĩnh vực.

Some grammatical structures

• Mệnh đề phân từ rút gọn cho “because” và “and”: People buy iPhones knowing that those phones are relatively stable. (…because they know that…). In recent years, the smartphones market has been fallen into the hands of the two greatest moguls Apple and Samsung, leaving smaller brands or startups completely unable to sell their products. (…and this leaves…).
• Dẫn chứng về mệnh đề phân từ rút gọn cho “because” và “and”: (Ready for Advanced – Roy Norris).

IELTS Writing Test March 2019

March 2nd, 2019

Task 2

Sample essay

One harsh reality is that rapid changes in today’s workplace make it increasingly impossible to hold the same job or remain in the same work environment until retirement. Therefore, it is worthwhile to explore the causes of and solutions to this issue.

There are numerous reasons, with globalization exerting a clear influence. Due to globalization, many employees of multinational companies, such as Nestlé, often need to relocate to other cities or countries for a certain period of time.

This leads to a situation where workers frequently change their workplaces, contributing to challenges such as fierce competition in the job market among local and foreign workers, as well as among locals themselves. This is compounded by rapid technological advancements, including automation, in today’s interconnected world.

Consequently, it may be effective to tackle the aforementioned issue by adopting a strategy that Homo sapiens, as a species, has employed for millions of years: adaptability.

This can be achieved through offering career guidance and counseling services in educational institutions to better prepare students for today's globalized world, which is filled with risks. The focus should be on practical problem-solving techniques, from handling minor issues like transitioning from traditional workplaces to modern offices, to coping with major challenges such as transitioning to entirely new jobs requiring different skill sets or expertise.

In short, the discussed phenomenon is primarily driven by pressures from globalization, which could be managed by efforts to adapt.

– 287 words- Written by Mytour

Some vocab items:

• A brutal truth: Sự thật phũ phàng;
• Fast-paced changes: Thay đổi nhanh;
• The impossibility to do X: (sự) Không thể nào làm X;
• A wide range of causes: (rất) Nhiều nguyên nhân;
• Globalization pressures / Pressures of globalization: Áp lực toàn cầu hoá;
• A crystal-clear factor: Nhân/yếu tố quá rõ nét;
• A multinational corporation: Công ty đa quốc gia;
• For a certain period of time: (Kéo dài) 1 khoảng thời gian nhất định;
• Aggressive competition: Cạnh tranh gay gắt;
• That is not to mention X: Đó là còn chưa kể đến X;
• Automation: (sự) Tự động hoá;
• To address the aforesaid/aforementioned issue: Giải quyết vấn đề nói trên;
• To adopt/use a strategy: Sử dụng chiến lược;
• The skill to adapt: Kỹ năng thích nghi/ứng;
• To conduct: Thực hiện;
• Career orientation: Hướng nghiệp;
• Counselling services: Dịch vụ tham/tư vấn;
• Educational institutions: Các cơ sở giáo dục;
• To be filled with risks: Đầy rủi ro;
• Problem-solving techniques: Những kỹ thuật giải quyết vấn đề;
• To tackle minor problems: Giải quyết vấn đề nhỏ;
• To cope with major problems: Ứng phó vấn đề lớn;
• Old-fashioned: Theo kiểu cũ / lỗi thời;
• Newly furbished offices: Những văn phòng trang bị mới;
• A totally new set of skills or expertise: 1 loạt kỹ năng chuyên môn hoàn toàn mới;
• X in question: Cái X đang bàn;
• To make efforts: Cố gắng / nỗ lực.

Some grammatical structures:

• X leads to Y / X results in Y: Y từ X mà ra;
• Until retirement / until one is retired: Đến khi về hưu, 
• As a result of X / Due to X / Because of X / On account of X: Do X
• Many people working (/ who work) for X are..: Nhiều người làm cho X thì…
• It is nothing but X: Không gì khác hơn là X;
• In consequence / Consequently / As a result / Therefore: Do đó;
• To range from X to/through Y: Trải dài/rộng từ X đến Y;
• Unfamiliar jobs requiring X / unfamiliar jobs which require X: Những việc không quen thuộc đòi hỏi phải có X.

IELTS Writing Test April 2019

April 6th, 2019

Task 1

Sample answer:

The provided bar chart compares the percentage of overweight Australians by gender over a 30-year period from 1980 to 2010.

Upon initial observation of the chart, it is evident that overweight rates in Australia generally increased. There was a slight decrease in the last decade of the period for men, while rates plateaued for women.

Back in 1980, nearly half of Australian men were recorded as overweight. Over the subsequent decade, this percentage saw a slight increase to about 54%, followed by a more pronounced growth to a peak of 70% in 2000. Thereafter, it saw a modest decline and eventually settled at 68% by 2010.

A comparable trend can be seen in the case of women. In 1980, the rate of overweight women was at 30%. The period from 1990 to 2000 witnessed a steady rise in the proportion of overweight females, increasing by 10% every decade, reaching 50% by 2010, and eventually leveling off towards the end of that period.

Task 2

1. Topic analysis:

Category (thể loại đề): cause and solution (nguyên nhân và giải pháp)Issue (vấn đề cần bàn): lack of widespread knowledge about the natural world

2. Brainstorming/outlining:

Causes (Nguyên nhân): Education: lack of practice, only theories about this topic (chỉ có lí thuyết, thiếu thực hành về chủ đề này);Not enough number of qualified social campaigns on the media (không có đủ lượng chiến dịch xã hội trên mạng xã hội).

Solutions (Biện pháp): Academic programs should be adjusted (chương trình học thuật cần được điều chỉnh); Government should invest in more social campaigns (chính phủ nên đầu tư hơn vào chiến dịch xã hội).

Sample essay

In the present age, knowledge about natural habitats is unfortunately not widely disseminated. There may be numerous reasons for this situation, but there are several primary causes for which solutions can be proposed.

The primary reasons behind this trend are inadequate education and the absence of effective social campaigns. Primarily, many individuals lack sufficient knowledge about the natural world due to the inadequate coverage of this subject in school curricula. Indeed, most educational programs in various countries primarily focus on theory rather than providing practical experiences to students.

For instance, children cannot fully grasp how ecosystems function without witnessing them firsthand. This results in a tendency for lessons on nature to be easily forgotten and diluted over time. Secondly, this trend may also stem from the lack of effective social campaigns.

Specifically, these campaigns could significantly enhance public knowledge about nature with the support of media development. However, they often do not receive adequate investment, resulting in limited and low-quality content being presented to the public.

Consequently, several measures can be implemented to address this issue. Firstly, educational programs should be revamped to include more practical components. For instance, increasing extracurricular activities could provide students with hands-on experiences, such as visits to nature reserves or zoos.

Furthermore, governments should consider allocating greater financial resources to develop impactful social campaigns about the natural world. These campaigns should be engaging enough to capture public interest, impart relevant knowledge, and compete effectively with commercial content in terms of visibility.

The insufficient practical content in schools and the limited number of social campaigns are the primary causes, and implementing positive changes in education and government funding are two potential solutions to this problem.

-309 words- Written by Mytour

Vocabulary

• In this era: Ở thời đại ngày nay
• Natural habitat: Môi trường sống tự nhiên
• Widely: Rộng rãi
• Chief = main = major: Chính
• Social campaign: Chiến dịch xã hội
• Possess: Sở hữu
• Insufficiently: Một cách không đầy đủ -> sufficient: Đầy đủ
• Academic program: Chương trình đào tạo
• Theory: Lý thuyết
• Ecosystem: Hệ sinh thái
• Truly: Thật sự
• Witness: Chứng kiến
• Tendency: Xu hướng
• The lack of sth = the shortage of sth: Sự thiếu thốn…
• A great number of….: Một số lượng lớn của…
• Citizen: Người dân
• Investment: Sự đầu tư -> invest in sth: Đầu tư vào…
• Tackle: Giải quyết
• Redesign: Thiết kế lại
• Extracurricular activity: Hoạt động ngoại khóa
• Obtain experience: Lấy kinh nghiệm
• Nature conservation area: Khu bảo tồn thiên nhiên
• Imprint knowledge in sb’s mind: Khắc sâu kiến thức vào tâm trí ai đó
• Commercial: Quảng cáo thương mại
• Adjustment: Sự điều chỉnh
• Governmental funding: Quỹ chính phủ.

Structures:

There exist several underlying reasons for proposing solutions: There are a few main causes for which solutions can be suggested.

• It is likely that S+V+O: Có khả năng…
• This leads to the fact that S+V+O: Điều này dẫn đến sự thật là….
• S+ be the result of ….: Là kết quả của…
• S + result in….: Điều gì đó dẫn đến…

On April 13, 2019

Assignment 1

Sample answer

The maps illustrate changes made to the ground floor of an unspecified art gallery from 2015 to the present day. Overall, the ground floor underwent a complete transformation with various facilities relocated, replaced, or added.

From 2015 to the present day, the reception desk was moved closer to the entrance. The hall expanded further to the right side of the ground floor, occupying the space where the gallery office once stood. A lift now stands next to the former stairs, and the café in the top left corner of the ground floor was transformed into a gallery shop with a vending machine located just outside.

Another significant change was the rearrangement of the exhibition rooms. Exhibition room #4 on the left side was divided into a temporary exhibit and a children's area, while the three exhibition rooms on the right side remained unchanged. The final adjustment to the ground floor layout was the addition of a wheelchair ramp, enhancing accessibility for disabled visitors.

-188 words- Written by Mytour

Vocabulary highlights

• Relocate (v): Chuyển chỗ
• Replace (v): Thay thế
• Add (v): Thêm vào
• The right-hand side (n): Bên tay phải
• The left-hand side (n): Bên tay trái
• Adjacent to = next to: Kế bên
• Accessible (adj) to: Dễ tiếp cận
• The disabled (n, plural): Người khuyết tật

Structure highlights

• With various facilities being PP…: Với nhiều phòng ốc, phương tiện được…
• where there once was: Nơi đã từng là…

Assignment 2

Sample answer

The consumption of imported food has gained popularity in recent years. In my opinion, this has both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.

One distinct benefit of imported food is the fact that it offers consumers more choices. Thanks to the act of importing food, people from different countries are able to enjoy different kinds of produce that are non-existent in their home countries.

Many of the delicacies we like, several of which would appear in our tonight’s dinner tables, are a mixture of ingredients indigenous to different parts of the world. Therefore, it would be a huge loss if we relied solely on local ingredients. Furthermore, foreign food encourages healthy competition among food processing companies, and this will eventually lead to increased food quality.

However, the drawbacks of imported food should not be overlooked. The act of transporting food from a country to another requires frequent use of airplanes, the most fuel-hungry means of transport in the world.

A typical Boeing 747 burns thousands of gallons of fuel per flight, and such a huge amount of gasoline burnt is highly detrimental to the atmosphere. Moreover, preservatives are often added to perishable food so that it does not spoil during the transporting stage, and some people fear that such chemicals would be harmful for daily use.

In conclusion, I believe that the rise in the consumption of imported food can open up a better array of choices and add some spices to our meals, yet its effects on the environment and on our health should also be taken into great consideration.

-263 words-

Vocabulary highlights

• In equal measure (prepositional phrase): Có mức độ ngang nhau, tương đương nhau
• Produce (n/U): Nông sản
• Non-existent (n): Không tồn tại
• Indigenous (adj) to: Thuộc về bản địa của
• Overlook (v): Bỏ qua, xem thường
• Preservatives (n): Chất bảo quản
• Perishable food (n): Thức ăn dễ bị hư hỏng
• Array (n): Một nhóm đa dạng
• Take into consideration: Xem xét

Structure highlights

• ​Several of which: Số từ + of + mệnh đề quan hệ có thể được dùng để thêm thông tin về số lượng.Ví dụ: I have three pens, all of which are originated from China.
• It would be a huge loss if we relied on…: Mệnh đề điều kiện loại 2 miêu tả một sự việc trái với sự thật ở hiện tại.

On April 25, 2019

Assignment 2

Sample answer

Single-person households and nuclear families have gained increasing popularity in recent years, especially in big cities. From my perspective, while this way of life is beneficial to a certain extent, it is more likely to have negative impacts on family core values and the well-being of the elderly.

Living alone or living in small family units can be deemed advantageous and necessary for some reasons. To a certain degree, living alone offers people a sense of freedom. Issues inherent in living with others such as hygiene and private spaces are non-existent if one lives in solitude.

Moreover, some individuals argue that a nuclear family comprising only parents and their children is financially stable. Smaller families entail reduced expenses, making financial issues more manageable compared to larger families.

However, this trend can also be very harmful in several ways. Firstly, the bonding between generations, which can be found in extended families, may become weakened. This is especially true to people who are forced to study or work far away from their relatives, especially grandparents.

For the elderly, living alone leaves them in a vulnerable state. Besides the feeling of loneliness brought by the lack of emotional support, old people normally encounter difficulties in doing daily tasks since they are physically weak. As a result, casualties or even death cases owing to unfortunate accidents are inevitable.

In conclusion, my firm conviction is that while living alone or in a nuclear family is somewhat beneficial, it has more negative influences on the family bonds and leaves aged people susceptible to many potential risks.

Vocabulary highlights

• ​Single-person households: Gia đình có 1 người (paraphrase cho living alone).
• Nuclear family: Gia đình hạt nhân (có 2 thế hệ cha mẹ và con).
• Core values: Giá trị cốt lõi.
• Well-being: Sự hạnh phúc, thịnh vượng.
• Deem: Xem xét.
• Inherent in: Hiện hữu, tồn tại trong…
• Non-existent: Không tồn tại.
• Solitude: Sự một mình, sự đơn độc (nghĩa tốt).
• Bonding: Sự gắn kết.
• Vulnerable: Dễ bị tổn thương.
• Inevitable: Không thể tránh khỏi.
• Susceptible: Dễ bị tổn thương (tương đương vulnerable).

On April 27, 2019

Assignment 2

Sample answer

Some people are of the opinion that we should focus more on the present rather than making plans for the future. From my perspective, while this argument can be explained for some reasons, I would argue that planning is of paramount importance in the success of any person, and therefore I completely disagree with this statement.

People who advocate this idea cite the living-for-the-moment way of life as their ideology. Preparations and arrangements are deemed too complicated for them, and some even think that having a plan is tantamount to giving ourselves unnecessary concerns.

However, I find this argument somewhat flawed, since planning ahead is far from synonymous with excessive worrying. Good planners see planning as a facilitator to their future goals, rather than a complication that stands in the course of personal development.

Furthermore, I believe that future planning is what makes a person successful in life. Good preparations give a person an edge over impulsive, disoriented ones, and indeed, no big corporations would run well without well thought-out, elaborate schemes.

Also, good planning helps people minimize uncertainties. Success stories of famous entrepreneurs and politicians all pinpoint the need for a careful, detailed plan. In times of crisis, a person or an organization with great predictions of as many potential problems as possible always triumphs over those without good planning.

In conclusion, my firm conviction is that careful planning for the future is never an unnecessary burden. It is one of the most important attributes constituting success. It is not an overstatement to say that if one fails to plan, they plan to fail.

-265 words

Vocabulary highlights:

• Of paramount importance: Quan trọng hàng đầu, cực kì quan trọng
• Advocate: Ủng hộ
• Ideology: Lý tưởng
• Deem: Xem xét
• Tantamount to: Cũng tệ như
• Flawed: Không hợp lý, có lỗi
• Synonymous with: Đồng nghĩa với
• Impulsive: Bốc đồng, không suy nghĩ kĩ
• Disoriented: Không định hướng tốt
• Success stories: Tấm gương thành công
• Pinpoint: Chỉ ra rằng
• Triumph over: Vượt trội, chiến thắng ai
• Unnecessary burden: Gánh nặng không cần thiết
• Attribute: Yếu tố
• Constitute: Cấu thành

IELTS Writing Exam May 2019

On May 4, 2019

Assignment 1

Sample answer

The provided bar charts compare car ownership in 5 unspecified European nations over the decade spanning from 2005 to 2015. Initially, the charts indicate that car ownership numbers in all five countries were somewhat erratic. It is also evident that Country 5 consistently maintained a relatively high number of cars compared to the other four countries.

In 2005, Country 1 had approximately 300 cars per thousand people. Over the next four years, this figure sharply rose to a peak of 400 cars before reverting to the 2005 level of 300 cars by 2015.

A similar trend can be observed in Country 2, where the number increased from 500 cars in 2005 to 550 in 2009, then slightly declined to around 530 cars by 2015.

Meanwhile, Country 3 experienced a decline, starting at 650 cars in 2005 and dropping to 560 cars by 2015. Country 4's car ownership remained stable over the period, making it the only country to experience a plateau.

Country 5 began with a very high rate of over 900 cars per thousand people in 2005. By the end of the period, despite a slight decrease of about 20 cars in 2015, the figure resumed its upward trend and eventually reached 990 cars in 2015 – the highest among all countries and years.

A similar trend is apparent in the average data for the five countries, starting at 700 cars and rising to about 790 cars in 2015, with a minor dip of 10 cars in 2009.

-272 words- Written by Mytour

Assignment 2

Sample answer

Video games have become increasingly popular as a recreational activity for children in recent years. There are multiple reasons for this trend, and I believe it brings both positive and negative impacts in equal measure.

The emergence of the video game industry is one reason attributable to the recent boom in video games among youngsters. Children in this day and age have a much wider array of video games to choose from than did their parents 20-30 years ago.

The irresistible lure of visually enhanced, epic fighting scenes, coupled with the sense of accomplishment upon clearing a level, may give young people the impression, often misleading, that it is a better leisure activity than exerting themselves in a gym.

Furthermore, to unfortunate people who do not lead a happy life, gaming denotes an element of escapism. Children who live in a dysfunctional family, for example, may consider games as a getaway from their harsh reality.

Gaming can be either beneficial and detrimental to young gamers. If played judiciously, games are a harmless fun that can improve a child’s mental agility. Many children have demonstrated abilities to make quick decisions and react quickly to unexpected situations, for they have been trained through many missions and levels in-game.

However, if gamers are becoming too addicted and sacrifice sports time for playing games, gaming can be very harmful to their health. The rise in obesity in recent years has been closely correlated with the sedentary lifestyle caused by excessive gaming and lack of exercise.

In conclusion, the increase in gaming and the decline in exercising stem from the development of the game industry and the need to escape from the drudgery and hardship in life.

Games can either be beneficial or potentially harmful, depending on how gamers use or misuse them.

-302 words – Written by Mytour

Vocabulary highlights:

• Emergence: Sự phát triển, sự nổi lên
• Attributable to: Quy cho, là do
• Irresistible lure: Sự cám dỗ khó chối từ
• Coupled with: Cùng với 5. Exert oneself: Làm cho bản thân mệt mỏi
• Escapism: Sự giải thoát
• Dysfunctional family: Gia đình có vấn đề (cha mẹ ly dị, có bạo hành gia đình etc.)
• Judiciously: Khôn ngoan (wisely)
• Harmless fun: Trò vui vô hại
• Mental agility: Khả năng suy nghĩ nhanh
• Correlate with: Liên quan tới, có mối tương quan với
• Sedentary lifestyle: Lối sống thụ động
• Stem from: Bắt nguồn từ
• Drudgery and hardship: Sự cực khổ và nhàm chán

On May 11, 2019

Assignment 2

Collaborative communication has been undervalued in today's workplace, with many employers noting a lack of necessary interpersonal skills among their staff. Contributing factors include overreliance on technology and the sheltered upbringing of workers. Several steps could be taken to address this issue.

The decline in interpersonal skills among workers can be attributed to the excessive use of technological devices. Technology has minimized the need for face-to-face communication; everyday activities such as ordering food, socializing, learning languages, and even exercise can now be accomplished without verbal interaction. Consequently, today's workers, especially the younger generation, lack the habit of engaging in direct conversations with colleagues or prefer digital communication.

Moreover, recent generations of young people appear to be more sheltered compared to those of 10-20 years ago. Studies indicate that today's millennials, particularly in collectivist societies, tend to rely more on parental protection. Such sheltering and leniency may produce individuals who struggle to initiate meaningful conversations or who prioritize personal interests over collaborative efforts required for team assignments.

One potential solution to this issue is promoting digital well-being, advocating for a balanced approach to technology use. For instance, organizing a 30-day social media detox challenge among employees can be a fun way to reduce time spent on social networking sites.

Public venues like parking lots or cafeterias can also contribute by displaying boards and signs encouraging the importance of interpersonal communication and teamwork. Educationally, parents and teachers should adopt a less protective approach and encourage group activities to engage youngsters more effectively.

Children should be taught the value of teamwork early on, enabling them to socialize with peers and appreciate collaborative efforts. Early exposure to diverse personalities can significantly better prepare individuals for their future careers.

To sum up, the decline in interpersonal skills among workers can be attributed to the misuse of technology and excessive parental protection. Encouraging moderate technology use and providing early education are effective strategies to address this issue.

Vocabulary highlights

• undermine (v): làm cho suy yếu
• sheltered upbringing (n) sự nuôi dưỡng bảo bọc
• verbal communication (n): giao tiếp bằng lời nói
• unaccustomed to (ving) (adj): không quen với
• converse (v): nói chuyện, giao tiếp
• predecessor (n): người đi trước, người thế hệ trước
• collectivistic (adj): có tính tập thể, cộng đồng (trái với individualistic)
• safeguarding (n): sự bảo bọc
• permissiveness (n): sự dễ dãi
• inhibited (adj): nhút nhát, ngại giao tiếp
• self-centered (adj): ích kỷ, tự cho mình là quan trọng
• digital wellbeing (n): sự lành mạnh trong việc sử dụng công nghệ
• harness (v) technology: tận dụng công nghệ
• cherish (v): trân trọng
• early exposure (n): sự tiếp xúc sớm

Ngày 18/05/2019

Task 1

Sample

The provided bar chart illustrates the employment distribution in an unspecified country over a decade, from 2003 to 2013.

The initial observation from the chart indicates that employment rates in all sectors generally saw upward trends during the specified period, except for the medical field and freelancing. Additionally, it is evident that business accounted for a significantly large portion of the surveyed employment categories.

In 2003, only a minimal 4% of individuals were employed in the hotel industry. Over the subsequent 10 years, this figure increased nearly fivefold to nearly 20%. Similar trends are noticeable in the education/training and construction sectors, with percentages rising from 8% to 18% for the former and from 11% to 21% for the latter. Freelancers and unemployed individuals each comprised approximately 15% in 2003, which then more than doubled to around 30-33% by 2013.

In contrast to the aforementioned groups, the proportion of people employed in the medical and business sectors witnessed declines. In 2003, 21% were employed in the medical field, which halved to 10% by 2013. Similarly, the business sector, despite initially occupying a high position with 45% in 2003, experienced a decrease and eventually stood at 35% by 2013.

Ngày 23/05/2019

Assignment 1

The visuals depict information on employment distribution across three sectors—agriculture, services, and industry—in three different countries in 1980, along with a projected scenario for 2020.

In summary, in countries A and C, the majority of the workforce was employed in the service sector, while in country B, most people worked in agriculture. Interestingly, this pattern is expected to persist in 2020.

It can be observed from the bar graph that in 1980, approximately two-thirds of the workforce in country C were employed in the service sector, compared to nearly 50% in country A. Country B had a significantly lower percentage, with only 30%.

Agriculture attracted the largest proportion of labor in country B, accounting for nearly 70%, while in country A and C, the figures were 20% and less than 10% respectively. Regarding industry, both country A and B had similar employment rates at 20%, which was much lower than country C's rate of about 40%.

It is projected that by 2020, the employment rates in all three countries will show a slight upward trend. Conversely, the agricultural sector in country A and C is expected to stabilize, whereas in country B, a slight decline to 60% of total employment is anticipated.

Lastly, the industrial sector in country A and C is expected to experience a slight decrease in workforce, whereas in country B, there will be a notable increase to 40%.

Written by Mytour – (258 Words)

Assignment 2

Sample

Some people are of the opinion that they should have freedom of choice when it comes to designing their own houses, and that they should not be restricted to any former local styles. Although freedom in architecture can be beneficial in fostering diversity, too much leeway in building houses would greatly spoil the overall landscape of the local area and therefore I believe this is more likely to be a negative development.

Free house design is, to a certain extent, a good way of promoting diversity. City skylines, for example, would be more interesting to look at if there are buildings and houses with different shapes and sizes. Furthermore, people from different societal background see houses as manifestations of personalities, wealth, and societal positions. Mansions of the rich, exotic houses of those who are artistic all combine with other normal-looking ones to form a melting pot of creativity.

However, I would not consider an area whose houses are built without any regard to the nature of the surroundings beautiful. Having different styles of houses co-existing in one place can be an architectural disaster rather than a welcome innovation. Ho Chi Minh City is a case in point; ugly buildings not aligned in style with other structures in the city have been erected for years, leaving the historic parts of the city messily mingled with the concrete jungle of brick houses and skyscrapers. Architectural homogeneity, on the other hand, often brings aesthetic appeals to the local landscape. The beauty of ancient towns, for example, comes from the uniformity and harmony in terms of architectural design.

In conclusion, my firm conviction is that new houses should be better built in a similar fashion to the other buildings in the area.

Band 8.0+ (288 Words)

Some vocabularies

• of the opinion: có quan điểm rằng
• leeway: sự tự do
• manifestation: sự thể hiện
• exotic: kỳ lạ nhưng mang lại sự thích thú; kỳ thú
• melting pot: nơi có đa dạng người, ý tưởng etc. cùng tồn tại với nhau
• co-exist: cùng tồn tại
• align: thẳng hàng, đồng nhất
• erect: xây dựng
• mingle with: trộn lẫn
• homogeneity: sự thống nhất
• aesthetic appeals: tính thẩm mỹ
• uniformity: sự đồng bộ
• in a similar fashion to: có kiểu tương tự như

Đề thi IELTS Writing Tháng 06/2019

Ngày 01/06/2019

Assignment 1

The data presents a comparison of secondary and high school teachers' salary scales across various countries in 2009.

In general, Luxembourg offered the highest initial and maximum salaries for teachers. An additional notable point is that teachers in Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea required more than 30 years to achieve their highest salaries, whereas those in Australia, Denmark, and required less than 10 years.

According to the table, secondary/high school teachers in Luxembourg received a starting salary of $80,000, compared to only $28,000 in Australia. Denmark followed Luxembourg with $45,000, which was still significantly higher than Japan and Korea, where it was $34,000 and $30,000, respectively.

After 15 years in the profession, Luxembourg topped the list with teachers earning $119,000, increasing to $132,000 after 30 years. Japan followed closely, with salaries nearly doubling in 15 years and reaching $86,000 in 37 years. The data highlights that Korean teachers earned less than their counterparts, with $48,000 after 15 years. Their salaries more than doubled to $62,000 after 34 years. Australia and Denmark also saw significant increases to $48,000 and $54,000, respectively, after 15 years. These two countries required only around 9 years to reach their peak salaries, significantly less than the other three countries.

(243 words )

Assignment 2

Sample

Tourism has experienced significant growth in recent years, becoming a major economic contributor in many developing countries. The primary reason behind this surge is its substantial revenue generation. I believe this trend is beneficial for countries that prioritize sustainability but detrimental for those leaning towards mass tourism.

The rapid expansion of tourism is largely driven by its lucrative financial returns. It has emerged as a key player in global commerce, rivaling or even surpassing traditional sectors such as textiles, food production, and oil exports in terms of revenue.

In developing countries where industrial technology lags behind developed nations, tourism plays a crucial role in fostering economic prosperity. Nations blessed with natural beauty and historical sites can leverage these assets to stimulate their economies.

Sustainable tourism, considering economic, social, and environmental aspects thoroughly, represents a positive advancement. It contributes significantly to profits, offers healthy entertainment for tourists, and creates job opportunities for locals in tourist destinations.

Reality Tours and Travel in India serves as a prime example of such a tourism model. Participants not only find personal solace but also gain profound insights into local life, contributing profits to the development of impoverished areas in Mumbai and Delhi.

However, in certain developing countries where mass tourism dominates, the situation has turned disastrous. During peak seasons, hordes of tourists litter areas, disrupt local traditions, and harm the environment, significantly impacting overall well-being.

For instance, the Great Pyramid of Giza in Egypt has reportedly suffered irreversible damage due to the influx of visitors each year.

In conclusion, tourism has gained popularity in developing countries due to its profitability. When managed judiciously and sustainably, it can bring positive changes. However, uncontrolled tourism can lead to catastrophic consequences, disrupting local life and natural environments.

(389 words)

Some vocabularies:

• On an unprecedented scale: ở một quy mô chưa từng thấy
• revenue: nguồn thu, nguồn lợi
• sustainability: sự bền vững
• inclined towards: nghiên về
• mass tourism: du lịch đại trà
• international commerce: thương mại quốc tế
• surpass: vượt qua
• garment: ngành dệt may
• inferior to: trở nên thua kém
• instrumental in: rất quan trọng trong việc tạo nên
• endowed with: được ban tặng, được trời cho
• paradigm: mô hình
• personal solace: sự khuây khỏa cá nhân
• thought-provoking: khiến cho người ta suy nghĩ nhiều
• impoverished: nghèo khó, khó khăn
• prevail: áp đảo, chiếm ưu thế
• influxes (of): những dòng người lũ lượt
• flock: kéo đến với số lượng lớn
• plague: gây vấn đề, gây rắc rối
• irreversible damage: hư hại không thể phục hồi
• a force for good: một ảnh hưởng tích cực
• judiciously: một cách khôn ngoan
• catastrophe: thảm họa
• tamper with: phá hoại, làm hư hại

Đề thi IELTS Writing Tháng 07/2019

Ngày 06/07/2019

Task 1

Sample essay

The provided bar graphs illustrate the level of participation among Australian boys and girls in cultural activities and sports in the year 2013.

At first glance, it is evident that girls showed greater involvement in drama, dance, and singing compared to boys. Conversely, boys exhibited more interest in playing musical instruments and engaging in sports. Additionally, drama and singing had the lowest participation rates across both genders.

The gender disparity was minimal for the least popular activities, namely drama and singing, with participation rates of 4% for boys and 5% for girls. In contrast, the gap was more pronounced in dancing, with approximately 25% of girls participating compared to only 2.5% of boys. Conversely, more boys participated in playing musical instruments (15%) compared to girls (10%). Similarly, a higher percentage of boys (70%) than girls (52%) expressed a preference for sports.

Task 2

Sample essay

The shipping of a wide range of foods from other cities or countries may have an adverse impact on locally produced food in this modern world of aggressive competition. However, the latter, in my own eyes, obviously offers more merits than demerits.

On the face of it, the consumption of local food might be said to have certain drawbacks. One of them is the lack of diversity or exotic taste. Without access to strange food from far away, people in Vietnam today, for instance, would feel fed up with a limited number of food choices or would never have a chance to try, and probably enjoy, the taste of a similar type of food which is actually imported from other countries, such as Kobe beef from Japan.

However, consuming locally produced food offers significantly greater benefits in economic, environmental, and educational aspects compared to food transported from distant regions. Economically, local food production reduces transportation costs, especially crucial with rising fuel prices.

This is also associated with less damaging effects on the environment related to the shipping of food products by plane from abroad. In terms of education, consuming local food helps nurture patriotism among young generations, orienting them towards preserving and developing the sense of using indigenous products. In today’s world of globalization, the effort to consume local food is thus playing an indispensable role in maintaining the identity of each and every local culture.

To summarize, the disadvantages of consuming locally produced food are outweighed by its benefits. This holds true when considering economic, environmental, and educational perspectives.

Vocab highlights

• local food / indigenous food / locally made food / locally produced food / food produced locally: thực phẩm (sản xuất) tại địa phương
• aggressive competition: cạnh tranh khốc liệt
• diversity: tính đa dạng
• exotic taste: vị lạ
• to nurture: (nuôi) dưỡng
• patriotism: lòng yêu nước

Structure highlights

• Chuyển đổi V-ing phrase thành Noun phrase:

The consumption of local food has more positive impacts on the economy, environment, and education compared to eating food transported from distant regions.

• Câu conditional ẩn:

In the absence of access to..., individuals would experience...

• Relative clause dạng rút gọn:

...environmental impacts related to...

Ngày 18/07/2019

Task 1

The provided line graph illustrates the percentage of Australian exports to four different countries during the 12-year period from 1990 to 2012.

Upon initial examination of the graph, it is evident that China experienced a gradual increase throughout the period, emerging as the dominant export destination among the four nations considered.

In 1990, Australian exports to Japan were around 26%. This percentage then sharply declined to 20% in 1995, followed by a more gradual decrease over the next 17 years to approximately 18%. Meanwhile, exports to China, starting from a modest 3%, steadily increased to 5% within 5 years and eventually peaked at 28% in 2012.

Exports to the US fluctuated between 8% and 10% in the first 15 years, declining to 5% in 2010, and then slightly recovering to 6% in 2012. Exports to India started near zero in the initial decade, gradually rising to 7% by 2010 and then dipping to 5% by 2012.

(191 words)

Task 2

Sample essay

Compared to watching television, reading fiction has long been believed to enhance people's imagination and improve their language skills. While the former aspect of this argument is clearly correct, the latter is more nuanced than it appears.

The positive effects of reading fictional works on people’s ability to imagine are crystal-clear. While watching TV is associated with enjoying programs visually, with all lively images available in front of the viewer’s eyes, reading novels or short stories page by page, normally without pictures, requires and encourages the brain to think of possible actions or scenes potentially accompanying the words read.

This happens naturally and has, for thousands of years, been proved to have a beneficial impact on the reader’s cognitive development, including imagination.Language skills are not that simple. For reading and writing, it goes without saying that reading for pleasure benefits people more, merely because these two skills are closely related to the printed word.

However, for listening and speaking, light has been shed on the importance of exposure to the spoken language rather than the written language. Therefore, those who spend their leisure time watching TV in general, and films on TV in particular, tend to be capable of improving their skills of listening and speaking much faster or much more efficiently.

All in all, I find it hard to completely agree with the view at issue. Simply put, the more time is spent on reading fiction, the sharper the sense of imagination as well as the reading and writing skills, but raising listening and speaking proficiency levels requires one to be exposed to various programs on TV.

Vocabulary highlights

• reading fiction / reading fictional works (novels + short stories + poems): việc đọc (các tác phẩm) thể loại hư cấu
• a/the sense of imagination: óc hài hước
• to boost/improve language skills: cải thiện kỹ năng ngôn ngữ
• it goes without saying that…: đương nhiên ai cũng biết rằng…
• exposure to the spoken language: sự tiếp xúc với ngôn ngữ nói
• raising listening and speaking proficiency levels: nâng trình thông thạo 2 kỹ năng nói & viết

Structure highlights

• X has long been believed to bring…: Từ lâu đã có quan niệm rằng X mang đến…

( = It has long been believed that X brings…)

• X is not that simple: X không đơn giản đến thế

( = X is more complex than it appears)

• Simply put, …: Diễn đạt 1 cách đơn giản

( = Simply put, …)

• Relative clause dạng rút gọn:

… potential actions or scenes that could accompany the words read: những hành động hoặc cảnh tượng có thể đi kèm với những từ được đọc (= … possible actions or scenes that could be associated with the words appearing on the page)

• Cấu trúc so sánh kép double comparative: The more time is spent on X, the sharper the Y (is): Càng dành nhiều thời gian cho X thì Y càng sắc bén hơn

Ngày 20/07/2019

Task 1

Sample essay

The chart presents a comparison of the salary scale of secondary and high school teachers across different countries in 2009. Overall, teachers from Luxembourg had the highest initial and maximum salaries.

Another notable point is that teachers in Luxembourg, Japan, and Korea took more than 30 years to reach their peak salary, whereas those in Australia and Denmark achieved this in less than a decade.

As illustrated in the table, secondary/high school teachers in Luxembourg started with a salary of $80,000, which was significantly higher than the $28,000 offered in Australia.

Denmark fell short of Luxembourg with 45000, which was still notably higher than the figures from Japan and Korea, standing at 34000 and 30000 respectively.

After a 15-year career, Luxembourg led the rankings with teachers earning 119000 initially, rising to 132000 within 30 years. Japan followed closely, where teachers' salaries nearly doubled in 15 years, reaching 86000 in 37 years. What is noteworthy from the data is that Korean teachers were not compensated as well as their counterparts, receiving 48000 after 15 years.

With 34 years of service, their pay rate more than doubled to 62000. Australia and Denmark also saw significant increases, with 48 and 54 thousand respectively over 15 years.

Additionally, teachers in these two countries required only about 9 years to reach their peak pay, a significantly shorter time compared to the remaining three nations.

(243 words – Authored by Mytour)

Activity 2

Sample essay

Considering the argument that the disproportionate focus of news coverage on negative or alarming events rather than positive ones is detrimental to both individuals and society as a whole, I find it largely valid.

The profound impacts of such news coverage are more significant than anticipated. On an individual level, with news media regularly reporting crimes like thefts, murders, and assaults, as is common in many countries today, people tend to experience heightened feelings of insecurity in their daily lives and activities.

The rationale is that criminals are perceived to be omnipresent. At a societal level, this influence is even more apparent: the dissemination of news regarding rising rates of diseases like cancer, AIDS, or other incurable conditions, for example, shared across both traditional and modern media platforms, contributes to social unrest or turmoil, potentially threatening the stability of political institutions.

Having said that, the media's coverage of negative news does serve a purpose for the general public and international cooperation. While these distressing reports may initially seem sensational, they serve as a necessary mechanism to alert people to potential dangers, whether related to crimes, health hazards, or traffic accidents. As heartbreaking as it may be, news of a natural disaster occurring in a particular region could prompt global relief efforts.

In summary, I am generally persuaded by the notion that media focusing on negative news harms individuals and society. Unfortunately, this issue appears to be worsening in the present era.

Vocab highlights:

• a news item: 1 mẫu tin
• largely true: gần như đúng hoàn toàn
• negative/damaging/detrimental effects: tác động tiêu cực
• on a personal level: xét trên bình diện cá nhân
• on a societal level: xét trên bình diện xã hội
• on a regular basis: (xảy ra) thường xuyên
• feelings of insecurity: cảm giác bất an
• ever-increasing (adj.): ngày càng tăng
• incurable conditions: những chứng bệnh nan y
• political institution: thiết chế chính trị
• sensational (adj.): gây chấn động
• a wake-up call: 1 hồi chuông khiến mọi người thức tỉnh
• relief program: chương trình cứu trợ

* Structure highlights:

• Considering X, I find it…: Khi xem xét X, tôi nhận thấy rằng…

( = When I consider X, I find it…)

• With that being said, …: Nói thì nói vậy nhưng mà…

( = Having said that / However / Nevertheless, …)

• be it associated with X or Y: cho dù là nó có liên quan đến X hay Y đi chăng nữa

( = whether it's related to X or Y)

• Heart-breaking as it seems, …: mặc dù là nó nghe có vẻ rất thương tâm

( = Although it may seem very distressing, …)

• Relative clause dạng rút gọn:… a necessary tool warning people of…: 1 công cụ cần thiết giúp cảnh báo mọi người về…

( = … an essential instrument that alerts people to…).

IELTS Writing Exam September 2019

September 28, 2019

Assignment 1

Sample

The diagram illustrates the assembly of a hot air balloon and its operational mechanism.

In summary, the assembly comprises multiple components, including the envelope, the skirt, the burner, and the basket. The diagrams also clearly show that the mechanism of a standard hot-air balloon involves the upward flow of hot air.

From the image, it is evident that the balloon, also known as the envelope, constitutes the largest part and is formed by numerous strips of fabric called gores. These gores are created by multiple nylon panels stitched together. Together, they shape the balloon when fully inflated. At the top of the envelope is a parachute valve, which functions like a sealing flap, regulating the controlled release of hot air. The skirt, located at the base of the envelope, is internally lined with flame-resistant material to endure the heat emitted by the burners. The burners are attached to a metal frame beneath the skirt and above the basket, providing seating for passengers and housing the propane cylinders. These burners act as engines by mixing propane with oxygen to produce hot air for the balloon.

Regarding its operational mechanism, hot air is introduced into the envelope through the burners. The heated air inside is lighter than the colder air outside, thereby generating a buoyant force that raises the entire structure.

Vocab highlights

• Depict (v): khắc họa, mô tả
• Mechanism (n): cơ chế hoạt động
• Circulation (n): sự lưu thông
• Strips of fabric (n): những mảnh vải sợi
• Sew (v): khâu vá
• Withstand: chịu đựng
• Metal frame: khung kim loại
• Cylinder: ống trụ
• Function (v) hoạt động, vận hành
• Buoyant (adj) có thể nổi được

Đề thi IELTS Writing November 2019

November 30, 2019

Task 1

Sample

The presented pie chart depicts the distribution of various nationalities living in Australia, while the table provides demographic data categorized by urban and rural areas. The initial observation from the pie chart indicates that the majority of Australians identify their ancestry as Australian. It is also evident that a significant portion of Australians, regardless of their ethnic background, reside in urban areas.

According to the pie chart, Australians constitute nearly three-quarters of the total population. This is followed by individuals from the UK (7%) and New Zealand (3%). People of Chinese and Dutch descent, in contrast, account for a small percentage of 1-2%.

As shown in the table, approximately 80% of Australians and New Zealanders live in cities, while about 20% reside in rural areas. A similar trend is observed among Chinese and Dutch populations, with urban residents comprising between 90-99%.

(167 words)

Task 2

Sample

In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards consuming imported food. However, some individuals argue that only local food should be produced, and the import of food should be restricted. I strongly disagree with this viewpoint because it is impractical for certain countries to sustainably feed their entire population, and imported food plays a crucial role in ensuring a diverse and nutritious diet.

It is practically impossible for some nations to adequately feed every citizen, especially those struggling with severe poverty and economic instability. For instance, Zimbabwe, a country plagued by widespread poverty and hyperinflation, relies on international aid to address food shortages.

Therefore, expecting these countries to independently meet the dietary needs of their entire population is unrealistic. Furthermore, residents of wealthier nations benefit significantly from imported food. One notable advantage of imported food is the wide array of choices it offers consumers.

Through the importation of food, people around the world can enjoy a variety of products that may not be available locally. Many of the dishes we enjoy today on our dinner tables are a fusion of ingredients sourced from different parts of the globe.

Relying exclusively on local ingredients would mean missing out on a rich tapestry of flavors. Moreover, imported food stimulates healthy competition among food producers, ultimately enhancing the quality of available food products.

To conclude, I firmly believe that it is impractical for certain countries to provide food for all their citizens, and therefore, the importation of food should be embraced for its role in enriching the diversity and abundance of our daily meals.

(285 words)

• gain increasing popularity: càng ngày càng phổ biến
• instrumental in: là một phần thiết yếu
• destitution: sự nghèo đói cùng cực
• plagued: bị tàn phá
• inflation: lạm phát
• financial relief: sự hỗ trợ tài chính
• oblige: buộc ai