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You should say:
who the person was
what you persuaded him or her to do
how you persuaded this person
and explain whether the result was successful.
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Người đọc có thể kết hợp các phiên bản tùy ý để tạo ra nhiều bài mẫu Part 2 khác nhau từ cùng một đề.
Mở bài và Thân bài | Ver. 1 Người kể chuyện chủ động | Ver. 2 Người kể chuyện cảm xúc |
|---|---|---|
I’d like to talk about a time when I persuaded a friend of mine. She’s a close friend of mine from university. To give you some context, every year, our department has an annual event for students. In this event, there would be musical performances from students and guest performers. Well, my friend is good at singing. So, I encouraged her to join the event’s singing audition. At first, she lacked confidence in her singing. She was so afraid of making mistakes in public. But I just kept telling her that her voice was beautiful. Every time she sang, I would compliment her voice. To help her better, I even enrolled her in a short singing course so she could learn some singing skills. After a few weeks, she became much more confident and finally registered for the audition. | I’d like to tell you about a time I persuaded my friend to audition for our department’s annual event. There were musical performances from students and guest artists in this event. She’s my close friend at university. She’s very important to me, and we always support each other. There were musical performances from students and guest performers in this event. I’ve always known my friend is talented in singing. Also, last year, I noticed that she enjoyed singing but she was too afraid to perform in public. She was afraid that she wasn’t good enough for that major event. So, I wanted to help her feel more confident and join the audition. I praised her every time she sang to boost her confidence. Also, when she needed encouragement, I was always there supporting her emotionally. I even signed her up for a short singing class. So, she could improve her singing skills. Later, she felt more confident and registered for the audition herself. | |
Kết bài | Ver. 1 Miêu tả đoạn kết | Ver. 2 Rút ra bài học |
In the end, my friend passed two rounds of the audition. At the event, her performance was excellent. Everyone was clapping for her. Even better, she actually won a singing prize. I was so proud of her. I felt happy for helping my friend succeed with her ambition and talent. | My friend did very well and passed two rounds of the audition. On the event day, she performed brilliantly and the audience even cheered and sang along. You know what, she actually won a prize. After this, I learnt that kindness and support can magically help someone. Also, I realized the great power of self-confidence. |
Advanced answer
Người đọc có thể kết hợp các phiên bản tùy ý để tạo ra nhiều bài mẫu Part 2 khác nhau từ cùng một đề.
Mở bài và Thân bài | Ver. 1 Người kể chuyện chủ động | Ver. 2 Người kể chuyện cảm xúc |
|---|---|---|
I’d like to describe a time I talked my friend into doing something meaningful. She was one of my close classmates in university. It was a year ago when our department was preparing for an annual event. Well, normally, there would be students and even famous artists performing at this event. Before D-day, our department usually holds auditions among students. At that time, I knew my friend was a great fit for the event because she’s absolutely talented in singing. So, I encouraged her to join the audition. At first, though my friend is passionate about singing, she was hesitant as she thought she wasn’t good enough. But I just kept motivating her. To help her gain confidence, every time she sang, I would give compliments on her beautiful voice. As time went by, she started to believe that she had the potential to perform at the event. Back then, I genuinely did everything for my friend to pass the audition. To the point that I signed her up for a crash course in singing. You know, just to perfect her singing skills. | There was a time I talked my friend into doing something out of her comfort zone. She was one of my close friends in university. We often shared our thoughts and feelings. And through this, I knew that my friend is passionate about singing. Also, I got to say that she herself is gifted with a beautiful voice. A year ago, our department was organizing an annual event and there would be students and famous artists performing. So, before that, there were auditions held for students. Right after I saw the post about the audition on our department’s page, I knew my friend was meant for it. So, I persuaded her to fill in the audition form. At first, she didn’t want to because she was insecure about her singing. But I didn’t want her to give up. That was why I stood by her side and encouraged her all the time. I remember every time she sang, I would compliment her. Just to let her know that she was full of potential. Back then, I literally went to great lengths to help her. I even got her name enrolled in a short course on singing. You know, it should be the icing on the cake if she learns some singing skills. | |
Kết bài | Ver. 1 Miêu tả đoạn kết | Ver. 2 Rút ra bài học |
In the end, all our efforts paid off. My friend got straight to the event after two rounds of audition. Even better, she actually won a prize there. I was genuinely proud of her. At the moment I saw my friend being on stage and getting a round of applause, I knew it was everything she had ever dreamt of. She was finally able to overcome her fear and do what she wanted. I think that night, at the event, was truly a milestone in her life. | Finally, it wasn’t a surprise that my friend managed to pass two rounds of audition and be on stage at the event. But I was actually taken aback when my friend was awarded a singing prize. At that moment, I literally cried with happy tears. I knew my friend was living her dream, and I was genuinely proud of her. Through this experience, I realized the power of sincere encouragement. Also, I learnt that self-confidence can make a huge difference to someone’s life. |
Chọn lọc và phân tích từ vựng
Sổ tay từ vựng & ý tưởng
Từ vựng/Ý tưởng (Chọn các từ vựng/ý tưởng mà bạn tâm đắc nhất) | Kỉ niệm cá nhân (Gán các từ vựng/ý tưởng đã chọn với kỉ niệm của bản thân) |
|---|---|
Ví dụ: the icing on the cake → niềm vui nhân đôi | Người đọc tự đặt các câu hỏi cho bản thân, ví dụ:
→ My friend passed two rounds of the audition, and winning a prize was the icing on the cake. |
Khoảng trống diễn đạt (Phần khiến bạn ngập ngừng khi nói về chủ đề trên) | Giải pháp (Giải pháp cho các khoảng trống diễn đạt) |
|---|---|
Ví dụ: Tình huống: Ví dụ vấn đề: Muốn nói: “Tôi giúp bạn ấy đăng ký một khóa cấp tốc để cải thiện kỹ năng hát” → nhưng không biết diễn đạt “khóa cấp tốc” thế nào cho tự nhiên | Ví dụ: Tra từ điển / AI với câu lệnh:
Gợi ý từ/cụm từ:
Câu hoàn chỉnh áp dụng cho bài nói: I even enrolled her in a crash course to improve her singing skills. |
Người đọc có thể tìm từ vựng bằng từ điển Mytour Dictionary.
Những lỗi ngữ pháp phổ biến thường gặp
Cách dùng đúng:
Cách 1: I suggested that she take a crash course.
Cách 2: I suggested taking a crash course.
Lý do sai:
“suggest” không đi với to V
“suggest” + that clause, hoặc + V_ing
Tham khảo: Cấu trúc & cách dùng Suggest
Lỗi thường gặp: “She is one of my friend at university.”
Cách dùng đúng: She is one of my friends who always supports me.
Lý do sai: “one of + danh từ số nhiều”
Lỗi thường gặp: “She feared of making mistakes.”
Cách dùng đúng:
Cách 1: She was afraid of making mistakes.
Cách 2: She feared that she would make mistakes.
Lý do sai: sau động từ “fear” không đi với giới từ “of”
Các chủ đề liên quan
Describe a time when you helped someone achieve something.
(Trọng tâm: sự hỗ trợ, quá trình giúp đỡ và kết quả đạt được.)Describe a person who encouraged you or others.
(Liên quan đến động lực, sự khích lệ và ảnh hưởng tích cực.)Describe a situation when you gave advice to someone.
(Trọng tâm: lời khuyên, cách thuyết phục và phản ứng của người nghe.)
Người đọc có thể sử dụng
Từ vựng: bao gồm: gain confidence, step out of one’s comfort zone, supportive, make progress, overcome fear
Ý tưởng: bao gồm:
thuyết phục bạn bè cùng tham gia một hoạt động như cuộc thi, sự kiện hoặc câu lạc bộ
hỗ trợ ai đó vượt qua sự tự ti hoặc nỗi sợ (ví dụ: sợ nói trước đám đông)
đưa lời khuyên giúp người khác thử điều mới hoặc cải thiện bản thân
quá trình luyện tập cùng nhau → tạo ra sự gắn kết và động lực
kết quả không chỉ là thành tích mà còn là sự tự tin và sự gắn kết
